jee raha hoon

by saahill on April 28, 2012, 03:14:16 AM
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jee raha hoon magar jeene ki wajah nahi hai
              sach kahun to jeene mein meri raza nahi hai

jin saanson mein kabhi  basaya tha unko
              rok kar saansien unko deni mujhe saza nahi hai

kabhi lagti thi khushiyon bhari  yeh zindagi
              bina uske ab mehfil mein koi maza nahi hai
 
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 05:23:28 AM »
Sahil bhai aadab
Aapki ye poetry mujhe bahut achchi lagi...
Sirf mujhe achchi lagi sayad ye kahna es poetry ki toohin hoga.
Ye to h hi achchi esliye achchi lagi...
Dad kabool kare...
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2012, 01:24:40 PM »
thx ms ji is tareef ke liye
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2012, 04:54:00 PM »
good
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2012, 09:45:30 AM »
thx saini ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2012, 10:06:49 AM »
SAAHIL JEE BAHUT KHOOB
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2012, 06:18:49 AM »
thx anahita
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2012, 03:00:27 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sahill ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!1
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2012, 06:42:28 AM »
thx hriday ji
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