Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN:Shayri-E-Dard

harashmahajan

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Jeene ki aarzu meiN unke paas aa gaye
Itne diye haiN Zakhm ke ZubaN pe aa gaye.

Ek umra tamaam ho gayi unki Talaash maiN
Pake magar unhe toh hum tanhaii paa gaye.

Sehr-o-shaam tha kabhi zuba pe uka naam,
Khud hi bana ke mahel woh pal meiN hi dha gaye.

Umeed thi raheNge hum tamaam umra saath
Banke majhi kashti ke kashti duba gaye.

Samajh ke pakki neev hamne banayi minar-e-khwab
Ab kya kaheiN woh Neev par diya jala gaya.


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k.shael

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2008, 06:20:29 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB AUR UMDA KALAM
PESH KIYA AAPNE HARSH JI...
BY. K.SHAEL


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baadal102

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2008, 06:33:55 AM »

bahut khoob bahut hi umda kya baat hai harash ji
as usual gr8 lines from ur side.

Baadal


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2008, 06:38:48 AM »

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM

LAUTE HAIN APNE SHEHAR ME HUM BARSO BAAD
APNO KE BEECH AAKER HUM GHABRA GAYE
ITNI VEERANIYA HAR MANZAR HAIN KHAUFNAK
AB SOCHTE HAIN GHAYEL YEH KAHA AA GAYE

-SG-


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 07:14:15 AM »

such a wonderful creation harsh ji Applause

kaafi dino baad aapka likha padhne ko mila par jab padha to aur bhi acha laga ..... Usual Smile


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harashmahajan

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2008, 07:31:27 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on October 17, 2008, 06:20:29 AM

BAHUT KHOOB AUR UMDA KALAM
PESH KIYA AAPNE HARSH JI...
BY. K.SHAEL

Shael sahab bahut bahut Shukriyaa..


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2008, 07:41:41 AM »

bohat bohat umda ,waah! Harash ji.... Applause


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harashmahajan

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2008, 07:44:15 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on October 17, 2008, 06:33:55 AM

bahut khoob bahut hi umda kya baat hai harash ji
as usual gr8 lines from ur side.

Baadal

bahoot bahoo Shukriyaa baadal ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2008, 08:01:07 AM »

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM

Jeene ki aarzu meiN unke paas aa gaye
Itne diye haiN Zakhm ke ZubaN pe aa gaye.

Ek umra tamaam ho gayi unki Talaash maiN
Pake magar unhe toh hum tanhaii paa gaye.

Bahut umdah!
Woh aa gaye qareeb, jigar mein samaa gaye!
Ham ko lagaa, 'abd', ki, ham hayaat paa gaye!
Khalwat ki chaah ney, magar, aisey khilaaye gul;
Woh zindagee key baag ko, saidaa* banaa gaye!!
*Jangal, beeharh
- abd bundeli


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honeyrose

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 10:24:20 AM »

Wah bohat khoob...
Harash ji achcha likha hai aapne
Kafi dino baad aapke nazm padhne ko mila ...

Wah bohat khoob Sajid ji very nice reply..

Wah Abd ji bohat khoob very nice reply...


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2008, 11:02:27 AM »

Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
- abd bundeli


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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2008, 11:34:15 AM »

Nice One Harash Ji,.


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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2008, 11:38:36 AM »

Jeene Ki Aarzu Thi, Khushiyon Ki Aas Thi,.
Dhoond Rahe The Khushi Apni, Jo Uske Paas Thi,.

De Na Saki Wo Mere Hisse Ki Khushi, To Gham Hi Apnaa Liya,.
Chordkar Jeene Ki Aarzu KO Humne, Maut Se Rishta Banaa Liya,.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2008, 11:53:34 AM »

Wonderful ! Harash ji just wonderful ! Applause


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Talat

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Re: Jeee Ki Aarzu meiN

«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2008, 12:10:14 PM »

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on October 17, 2008, 06:12:19 AM

Bohot Khoob Harash Ji Applause

Aaj muddat ba'ad aapne yahan likha hai...... Usual Smile


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