Jeene ka jazba..

by nashwani on June 24, 2013, 12:03:50 AM
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Bhanvare ka dil kali ke liye machalta raha,,    
    Wahi.N waqt apni rawani me dhalta raha..        

Karwa.N jiske intezaar ke alam me thama tha,,
    Wahi hamsafar apni raho.N me aage badhta raha..

Umar bhar jin sawalo.N se main ghira raha,,
    Jawab saath liye wo door kahi.N hansta raha..

Jo sambhala karta tha aksar dusro.N ko,,
    Aaj wo har thokar par gir, phoot kar rota raha..

Diya uske naam ka dil me sada jalta raha,,
    Wo laut aayegi, sochke jeene ka jazba badhta raha..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 12:22:26 AM »
Very  touching n beautiful  creation Nashwani  ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2013, 12:33:32 AM »
ahchi peshkash rahi nashwani saaheb, yuNhi bazm ko roshan karte rahiye....!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2013, 01:11:02 AM »
Bahut Khoobsurt Peshqash Hai.
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2013, 01:48:15 AM »
Bhanvare ka dil kali ke liye machalta raha,,   
    Wahi.N waqt apni rawani me dhalta raha..         

Karwa.N jiske intezaar ke alam me thama tha,,
    Wahi hamsafar apni raho.N me aage badhta raha..

Umar bhar jin sawalo.N se main ghira raha,,
    Jawab saath liye wo door kahi.N hansta raha..

Jo sambhala karta tha aksar dusro.N ko,,
    Aaj wo har thokar par gir, phoot kar rota raha..

Diya uske naam ka dil me sada jalta raha,,
    Wo laut aayegi, sochke jeene ka jazba badhta raha..!!! Ñ


WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB NASHWANI JI..
LAJAWAAB LIKHA HAI.

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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2013, 01:58:19 AM »
bohat khoob,............
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2013, 03:40:21 AM »
badhiya..bahut badhiya
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2013, 06:00:27 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2013, 03:25:09 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 24, 2013, 07:33:53 PM »
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bahut khoob nashwani ji. bade achche khayalon se saji hai aapki yeh ghazal. is khoobsurat kalaam par hamari hazaron dili daad.

Umar bhar jin sawalo.N se main ghira raha,,
    Jawab saath liye wo door kahi.N hansta raha..

yeh sher dil ko choo gaya.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 24, 2013, 08:39:40 PM »
Thankyou !

Aap sabhi ka bahut shukriya ise pasand karne aur sarahne ke liye..happy9
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