Juda hoke bhi

by khushiiiii on March 15, 2007, 06:55:04 AM
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lagta hai mujhe jaise kal hi ki baat hai tumse mili thi mein
tumne hansaaya tha mujhe humesha ki tarah

achanak kyun mujhse tum itna door chale gaye
kyun thod gaye dil mera ek sheeshe ki tarah

maloom hai bhula  paana tumhe bahut mushkil hai
teri yaado mein royengi ye aankhein saawan ki tarah

magar sun le tu bhi ae mere mohabbat ke khuda
teri yaadein rahengi mere dil mein humesha dhadkan ki tarah

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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2007, 07:36:20 AM »
Quote from: "khushiiiii"

lagta hai mujhe jaise kal hi ki baat hai tumse mili thi mein
tumne hansaaya tha mujhe humesha ki tarah

achanak kyun mujhse tum itna door chale gaye
kyun thod gaye dil mera ek sheeshe ki tarah

maloom hai bhula  paana tumhe bahut mushkil hai
teri yaado mein royengi ye aankhein saawan ki tarah

magar sun le tu bhi ae mere mohabbat ke khuda
teri yaadein rahengi mere dil mein humesha dhadkan ki tarah



superbsssssssss  Khusi......  kya baat hai..........   itni  dard bhari shayari....  bahot accha laga  padhker......  likhti  raho ...... :lol:

Tujhse Bichad  K  Yeh Ehsaas Hua Hai Mujhe
Ab Mujhe Kabhi Kisi Ki Sacchi Mohabbat Na Milegi
Waqt Ne Mohlat Na Diya Kaise Main Batata Tujhe
Ai Meri Mohabbat Tu Kabhi Mujhse Juda Na Rahegi...........
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2007, 07:50:43 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "khushiiiii"

lagta hai mujhe jaise kal hi ki baat hai tumse mili thi mein
tumne hansaaya tha mujhe humesha ki tarah

achanak kyun mujhse tum itna door chale gaye
kyun thod gaye dil mera ek sheeshe ki tarah

maloom hai bhula  paana tumhe bahut mushkil hai
teri yaado mein royengi ye aankhein saawan ki tarah

magar sun le tu bhi ae mere mohabbat ke khuda
teri yaadein rahengi mere dil mein humesha dhadkan ki tarah



superbsssssssss  Khusi......  kya baat hai..........   itni  dard bhari shayari....  bahot accha laga  padhker......  likhti  raho ...... :lol:

Tujhse Bichad  K  Yeh Ehsaas Hua Hai Mujhe
Ab Mujhe Kabhi Kisi Ki Sacchi Mohabbat Na Milegi
Waqt Ne Mohlat Na Diya Kaise Main Batata Tujhe
Ai Meri Mohabbat Tu Kabhi Mujhse Juda Na Rahegi...........


shukriya waheed...........bas aapki sangat ka asar hai ji..........aaapki jitni achhi to nai magr thoda bahut karne ki koshish hum bhi karte hai........

aur as usual bahuttttttttt khoob likha hai tumne.........
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2007, 08:58:21 AM »
Khushi, Waheed

Bahut khoob !

Bahut achcha likha hai aap dono ne !
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2007, 09:38:48 AM »
hosla afjaai ka bahut bahut shukriya monitor ji...............
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2007, 12:29:57 PM »
Quote from: "khushiiiii"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "khushiiiii"

lagta hai mujhe jaise kal hi ki baat hai tumse mili thi mein
tumne hansaaya tha mujhe humesha ki tarah

achanak kyun mujhse tum itna door chale gaye
kyun thod gaye dil mera ek sheeshe ki tarah

maloom hai bhula  paana tumhe bahut mushkil hai
teri yaado mein royengi ye aankhein saawan ki tarah

magar sun le tu bhi ae mere mohabbat ke khuda
teri yaadein rahengi mere dil mein humesha dhadkan ki tarah



superbsssssssss  Khusi......  kya baat hai..........   itni  dard bhari shayari....  bahot accha laga  padhker......  likhti  raho ...... :lol:

Tujhse Bichad  K  Yeh Ehsaas Hua Hai Mujhe
Ab Mujhe Kabhi Kisi Ki Sacchi Mohabbat Na Milegi
Waqt Ne Mohlat Na Diya Kaise Main Batata Tujhe
Ai Meri Mohabbat Tu Kabhi Mujhse Juda Na Rahegi...........


shukriya waheed...........bas aapki sangat ka asar hai ji..........aaapki jitni achhi to nai magr thoda bahut karne ki koshish hum bhi karte hai........

aur as usual bahuttttttttt khoob likha hai tumne.........


Thanku  Kaaki..........   Rajbir Bhayya........   heheheh......  tum  chupi  rushtam    ho kaaki. tongue3    ur  welcome..........   likhte  rahiyo   :lol:
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2007, 03:56:43 PM »
Khushii bahoot touching and emotional lines likhi hai apne!!
Waheed bahoot hi acha reply kiya hai apne!!

Juda hokar bhi juda ho na paaye
khayalo se tujhe juda kar na paaye

yaad atti hai wo her khushi  ki baat
kaise wo pal hum bhulaa jaaye

mukaan le aata hai, boora waqat, dekha jo sath sath
jiya jo tumne aor maine, wo waqat kaise bhool jaaye

Juda hokar bhi juda ho na paaye
khayalo se tujhe juda kar na paaye
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2007, 10:05:22 PM »
Bohat khoob Khushiiii, Waheed & Pooja....
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2007, 08:26:57 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Khushii bahoot touching and emotional lines likhi hai apne!!
Waheed bahoot hi acha reply kiya hai apne!!

Juda hokar bhi juda ho na paaye
khayalo se tujhe juda kar na paaye

yaad atti hai wo her khushi  ki baat
kaise wo pal hum bhulaa jaaye

mukaan le aata hai, boora waqat, dekha jo sath sath
jiya jo tumne aor maine, wo waqat kaise bhool jaaye

Juda hokar bhi juda ho na paaye
khayalo se tujhe juda kar na paaye


Thnx pooja ji..............
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2007, 08:28:09 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat khoob Khushiiii, Waheed & Pooja....


thnx Aryaan..............
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paani
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2007, 12:15:35 PM »
nice one khushi n all guys
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #11 on: March 16, 2007, 12:41:18 PM »
Thannnnnxxxxx  Pooja  didi....Aryan......Paani.....  very  nice  reply  Pooja  didi
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: March 16, 2007, 01:19:23 PM »
thanks Khushii, Aryaan, Paani and Waheed!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 07:48:07 AM »
Such a nice creation... Good work...
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