~*~*KaAnCh Ka GhAr~*~*

by ghayal_shayar on October 31, 2005, 01:10:28 PM
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aadab doston aaj kal bada maza aa raha hai pata nahi kyun dard me likh kar.jab maine ishq nahi kiya tha to log kehte the ki ishq me log bahut ahcha likhte hain.par mere saath to ulta ho gaya doston main jab dard me hoon tab sab keh rahe hain ki main ahcha likh raha hoon.baat bas yun ho gayi ki,

jab ghayal dard me karah raha tha aaah!
to bazm bol uthi wah! wah! wah! wah!

to doston isi umeed ke saath ki aapko pasand aayega ek aur ghayal kalaam pesh kar raha hoon aaj ki is mehfil me.


agar kaanch ka mera ghar na hota,
kisi ne mara ishq ka patthar na hota.

aashiq jalim ya dushman pata nahi,
aakhir samna bhi khulkar nahi hota.

agar ishq karne se itna dard na milta,
wafa bana bewafai ka sauhar na hota.

mere pyar me agar koi kami nahi hoti,
to mehbub ke hathon me khanjar na hota.

agar na hota ishq itna dard nak yaar,
to "ghayal"dekh raha ye manjar na hota.


aapka GHAYAL
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2005, 05:06:48 PM »
bahoot khoob!!!
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2005, 10:24:52 AM »
thanks pooja ji keep reading.
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2005, 10:30:51 AM »
very nice ghayal!!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2005, 07:14:53 PM »
good post ghayal ..............................


Aaj ujaali ki kiran kho gayi
zindagi veraan se ho gayi,
gaye woh din
jab humne unse umeed rakha
Aaj yeh khoob ho gaya
ki humain dosti se nafrat ho gayi
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2005, 07:24:14 PM »
nice  work  banaam............  bahot  khoob.........
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2005, 12:11:51 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
very nice ghayal!!!



thanks sanya jee.keep reading.
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2005, 01:32:07 PM »
thanks badnaam ji.bahut hi khoobsurat reply diya aapne.bas aise hi padhte rahiye hume aap.

aapka LUCKY
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punjabiroop
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2005, 02:44:53 PM »
bahut acha likha apne
dil ko choo gayi..............keep writing
take care
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2005, 06:11:19 AM »
thanks a loy roop ji bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap hume.
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tushu
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2005, 08:08:44 PM »
Very Good work Ghayal & badnaam............ really good Ghayal
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2005, 01:58:53 PM »
thank tushu ji.bas yunhi padhte rahiye aap hume.
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