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             ! kaash !
uske aansoo mere palkon me kho jaaye
uske har gham mere dil me so jaaye
               ! kaash !
seene me basi tanhaiyan uski
guum ho jaye meri saanso me
                   ***
         gar ye ho nhi sakta
                   tab
                   ***
                ! kaash !
   meri yaaddaast kho jaaye
fir chahe wo kisi ki bhi ho jaaye
                ! kaash !
unke bina hum jee nhi skte ye
unko na sahi uss khuda ko to yakeen ho jaaye
                     !!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 06:23:42 AM »
Wah! Kya baat hai Subbu
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 06:36:38 AM »
guruji---
iske liye mai sukriya nhi kahunga.
ye mene likha thode hai.
ye to bas meri soch hai aur kuch nhi.Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2010, 07:06:32 AM »
Bahut Khub Kb Bhai
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2010, 07:09:22 AM »
veri nice kb ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2010, 09:29:35 AM »
sukriya Rishi and Sahil ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2010, 10:19:33 AM »
kaash .............

killbill ji .........

gar ek kaash nahin hota..........
ji ke bhi maiN lass nahin hota
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2010, 11:10:58 AM »
wah Tamanna ji--
kya baat kah di aapne uffff
haye-- maar daala iss 2 line ke reply ne.
jhakash line Tamanna ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2010, 11:11:38 AM »
wah Tamanna ji--
kya baat kah di aapne uffff
haye-- maar daala iss 2 line ke reply ne.
jhakash line Tamanna ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2010, 11:17:53 AM »
dekhkar meri laash ko mere humsaaye bhi dhoor hain
koi unhien batayee jindagi unki bhi ek mehmaan hai
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2010, 11:24:44 AM »
nice lines kb ji....
leejiye ek kaash hamri taraf se bhi...

kaash khawab bhi haqiqat hote...
tum sang hum haste.... rote....
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2010, 11:48:15 AM »
wah manzil ji--
bahut khub
sukriya aapka..
iss kash ne kuch jaadoo kr dia ab..
ye dekhiye mera aur ek kash
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!kaash! agar ye
            !kassh! na hota
mere hi ! Laash ! me fir ye ! zindgi ! naam ka
            ! mehmaam ! na hota
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2010, 11:52:36 AM »
wow kb its just superb...
in other way aapne hamari bolti band kar di..
ab hum kya kahe...
but ur lines are just mindblowing...
hats off...
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2010, 11:59:25 AM »
ye to aapki nazren inayat hai Priya ji
jo aap aisa kah rahi hain.
thanx k aapne pasand kiya
sukriya hai ji dil zigar gurda har taraf se aapko sukriya hai..
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2010, 08:11:24 AM »
ye kaash ne bhi kya khub rang jamaya hai
dilon ki sabki aarzuon se milaya hai
hum bhi kehte k kaash aisa hota waisa hota
kash ek kaash agar mere paas bhi hota.....
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