*Kab Tak*:Shayri-E-Dard

Roja

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Mujhe khud se durr ker ke kab tak tarpaoge,
Apni kurbat ke liye, kab tak sattaoge

Mere jazboon ko kab tak, nadani ka naam doge,
Meri Shidat-E-Mohbaat ko kab samjh paoge

Kab tak tanhayee ki saaza doge,
Meri mohbaat ke aur kitne imtihaan loge,

Kia beet rahee hai mere dil per, kis tarh main jee rahee hoon,
Meri khaber lene kab tum aaoge

Mujhe kab tum apnaoge, mere naaz utaaoge,
Main rootunghi, Mujhe tum manaoge

Itne sawal hai mere pass...!!!!!!
Tum kab inka jawaab de paoge....

Meri Chahtoon, Wafaaon, Aur Jazboon Ko,
Kab Tak Aazmaoge, Ab Mulaakat Ke Liye Kab Tak Intezaar Karwaoge

Lambi Sard Raatoon Main Apni Yaadoon Se Kab Tak Rulaoge,
Lambi Garam Dopahroon Main Kab Tak Mujhe Meri Aansoo Pilaoge? [/color][/size]


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Ricky

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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2007, 01:48:16 AM »

This is one good one, full of imagination.


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redwhitegang

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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2007, 04:24:11 PM »

bohot khub roja :d


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Rajbir

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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2007, 04:51:34 PM »

Roja

Very good =D> =D> =D>

Keep it up !


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Roja

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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2007, 06:09:52 PM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

This is one good one, full of imagination.

Thanks Mr Ricky .. but it is not a imagined lines :lol:


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Roja

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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2007, 06:10:31 PM »

Quote from: "redwhitegang"

bohot khub roja :d

Thanks Shahid ji ... Aate rehna Usual Smile


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Roja

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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2007, 06:11:21 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Roja

Very good =D> =D> =D>

Keep it up !

Thanks thanks thanks Raj veer ji.. :D


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2007, 11:52:53 PM »

Brilliant One....!!!

Kab tak samjhana hoga Dil ko.....
Ke mohobbat bhi Zindagi se mehez ek dhoka hai......

Likhta nahi Khuda harr kisi ki Kismat me yeh Lafz......
Deewano ko toh marne se bhi Farishton ne kahan roka hai.....!!!!


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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2007, 01:02:50 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB ROJA..

DOORIYAN HI DILO KO NAZDIK LATI HAI
DOORIYAN HI EK DUJE KI YAAD DILATI HAI
DOOR HOKAR BHI KOI KAREEB HAI KITNA?
DOORIYAN HI IS BAAT KA EHSAAS DILATI HAI..


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faiiz_76

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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2007, 02:56:38 AM »

add a bit more passion nd u will get it ....nice sharing .


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sapnaa

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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2007, 05:54:36 PM »

Good one roja...aapka likhne ka andaaz bahut acha hai...
nice one khwaish


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Pooja

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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2007, 07:48:21 PM »

bahoot khoob roja and Badnaam shayar ji!!!


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Roja

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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2007, 08:09:25 PM »

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"

wow cool ...Thanks Gaurav


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Roja

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«Reply #13 on: October 02, 2007, 08:10:36 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

bahoot khoob roja and Badnaam shayar ji!!!

Thanks Pooja di... aap b kuch likh dete...


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Roja

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«Reply #14 on: October 02, 2007, 08:11:59 PM »

Quote from: "sapnaa"

Good one roja...aapka likhne ka andaaz bahut acha hai...
nice one khwaish

Thanks Sapna...


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