kab tak........

by Pooja on January 28, 2005, 01:53:09 AM
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #165 on: May 22, 2006, 06:49:18 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Intezar mein tere ye nigaahe kab se khadi hai,
Kadam badha le ummeedo ki leher bahut badi hai,
Wada bas apna pura karlu yahi tamanna rah gayi hai,
Baaki kafan bhi hai aur mayyat bhi saamne padi hai ...


Shabd hi nahi chore is baar to apne JHL ji, kaya likhu soch mai daal diya hai apne!!

apni mayyat ka saman apse banta na jayega
umeendo ki laher mai mana sab kuch bah jayega
her tamanna bas adhoori hi rah gai
wo mere liye nahi aor mai kisi ki na rah gai!!!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #166 on: May 22, 2006, 06:13:13 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
shukriya JHL JI.....

are JHL JI pooja ji ko is tarah intzaar mat karwaya kijiye...... aur aap to kismat wale hain ki Pooja ji ko aapki shayari ka intzaar rahata hai... yeh to waqai me na-insaafi hai ki aap phir bhi bina likhe chale gaye....

good one POOJA JI........


app apna jawab de :evil:
khud bina likhe kaise chale gaye app :evil:

hamri baat dohrane wale
khud likh kar na jaane wale
shayri apki manbhaati hai
suchi baat pooja kah jaati hai


jawab de raha hoon Pooja ji ....gaur farmaiyega....

Tujh sang hi shayari ka maza aaya hai,
tera har kalaam dil ko mere bhaya hai........
ek such main bhi kahata hoon pooja ji,
teri inhi adaon par to mujhe pyar aaya hai.....
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #167 on: May 22, 2006, 06:18:56 PM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Intezar mein tere ye nigaahe kab se khadi hai,
Kadam badha le ummeedo ki leher bahut badi hai,
Wada bas apna pura karlu yahi tamanna rah gayi hai,
Baaki kafan bhi hai aur mayyat bhi saamne padi hai ...


Shabd hi nahi chore is baar to apne JHL ji, kaya likhu soch mai daal diya hai apne!!

apni mayyat ka saman apse banta na jayega
umeendo ki laher mai mana sab kuch bah jayega
her tamanna bas adhoori hi rah gai
wo mere liye nahi aor mai kisi ki na rah gai!!!!


bahut khoob JHL JI aur PANKHURI JI..........

Na kuch lene ki aur na hi kuch kahane ki tamanna hai apni,
mar kar bhi tera deedar ho kareeb se, yehi aarzoo hai apni.....
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manu1979
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«Reply #168 on: May 22, 2006, 07:53:09 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"


dard mai dard ki talash kab tak
wo nahi ayye, uska intzaar kab tak
khud ke yakin per ab to shaq ho chala hai
ek jhoothi aas per, yah khawab kab tak.......


hi pooja ji9 bahut khubsurat likha hai,ab aap ka intzaar khatma hua, mai ise aahe badhaata hu

Vo nazar uthi  vo nazar jhuki
Nigaaho ke sawaal jawaab kab tak

woh chandani sa chahera tumara
Zulfo ke kahkasaaN naquab kab tak

ye jhoothi aas nahi hai dosti meri
Majburiyo ka karu ruaab kab tak

Aankho ke intzaar mai thi talash teri
Samjhaau mai dil-e-betaab kab tak


i hope u like d same
take care
regards
manu
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kaiynath
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«Reply #169 on: May 22, 2006, 09:50:38 PM »
good work by all
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #170 on: May 23, 2006, 10:51:15 PM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Intezar mein tere ye nigaahe kab se khadi hai,
Kadam badha le ummeedo ki leher bahut badi hai,
Wada bas apna pura karlu yahi tamanna rah gayi hai,
Baaki kafan bhi hai aur mayyat bhi saamne padi hai ...


Shabd hi nahi chore is baar to apne JHL ji, kaya likhu soch mai daal diya hai apne!!

apni mayyat ka saman apse banta na jayega
umeendo ki laher mai mana sab kuch bah jayega
her tamanna bas adhoori hi rah gai
wo mere liye nahi aor mai kisi ki na rah gai!!!!



Sukriya bahut bahut aapka ...

Beh jaane se sab kuchh rok sakte ho tum,
Agar humse wafa kar lete ho tum,
Tumhare har dard ko bantna aata hai hame,
Par na jaane kyu har dard ko akele sehte ho tum ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #171 on: May 23, 2006, 10:55:08 PM »
Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"



bahut khoob JHL JI aur PANKHURI JI..........

Na kuch lene ki aur na hi kuch kahane ki tamanna hai apni,
mar kar bhi tera deedar ho kareeb se, yehi aarzoo hai apni.....



Thanks a lot Vicky for appreciation ...

Arzoo to hamari mar ke bhi uske dil mein basne ki hai,
Lekar sirf uski zafrat jaa rahe hai par khwahish hasne ki hai ...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #172 on: May 23, 2006, 10:58:35 PM »
very    nice  JHL...........   Pankhuri..........
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #173 on: May 23, 2006, 11:00:24 PM »
Thanks a lot Waheedbhai ...
Kayi dino se tamanna aapko sunne ki hai ...
Aaj is tamanna ko puri kar do ...
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #174 on: May 25, 2006, 10:43:15 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Sukriya bahut bahut aapka ...

Beh jaane se sab kuchh rok sakte ho tum,
Agar humse wafa kar lete ho tum,
Tumhare har dard ko bantna aata hai hame,
Par na jaane kyu har dard ko akele sehte ho tum ...


dard yah dil ka kabhi banta nahi jaata
toote dil se kisi ko apnaya nahi jaata
wafa apni ka ab khud hi aitbaar nahi
kar chuke payaar hum, yah hota bar bar nahi!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #175 on: May 25, 2006, 11:04:02 PM »
Ye to hum bhi maante hai ki pyaar hota hai ek hi baar,
Par dil ko hamari is baat pe nahi hota aitbaar,
Dil ko mana chuka hoon main kai baar,
Par use bhi aata hai har baar usi pe pyaar ...
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #176 on: May 26, 2006, 06:09:59 AM »
nice reply JHL JI!!!

apni wafa se uski jafa ka intzaar kab tak
bujty deepak ki tadpati yah jayot kab tak
khud se sawal, khud ko jawab, kab tak
bhatkati raho per, zinda hai Pooja jab tak!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #177 on: June 02, 2006, 11:40:54 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja for appreciation and nice one too ...
Keep it up ...
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #178 on: June 03, 2006, 01:17:11 PM »
THANKS JHL JI!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #179 on: June 03, 2006, 02:08:43 PM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
nice reply JHL JI!!!

apni wafa se uski jafa ka intzaar kab tak
bujty deepak ki tadpati yah jayot kab tak
khud se sawal, khud ko jawab, kab tak
bhatkati raho per, zinda hai Pooja jab tak!!!!


nice one JHL JI aur POOJA JI.....

Tumse bichud kar hi barbaad hua mera aashiyana,
ujada maine apne hi haaton apna hi thikaana.....
bhatakta rahata hoon ishq ki sunsaan galiyon me,
ek aarzoo tbi dil me ki humen tere gam se tha nahana.....
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