Kabar Me Chain Se Sona Nahin Aya

by Meena on May 04, 2005, 07:01:21 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2005, 11:10:37 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Wow meena just mind blowing specially the 1st para......i bow to uor shayri


arre aisi bih koi baat nahin hai ji...choti si try thi apko pasand ayi...shukriya!!!  :D
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Meena
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2005, 11:11:21 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wah meena sis,bohat khoob likha,such nice words.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


thanxxxxxxxx kuddiye!!!!!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2005, 11:12:55 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
meena ji you r superb really so nice of you...........
apno ne begano ki tarah kaam kiye
humne apne hi haathon khudko ilzaam diye
kya kya na kiya tere liye oh bewaffa humne
tujhe yaad kiya tere liye phir di duaein hume jalane ke liye


thank u ji apne bhi bohot acha likha!!!!
aap to waise bhi bohot hi acha likhti hai!!
 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2005, 11:15:46 AM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahut khoob meena ji you r greattttttttttttttttt

tere janne ke baad haume to jeena nahi aaya
keh gaye the khwaab me aaoge par
hum ko neend ki goo.d me jana nahi aaya
kaat de tamaam umar tere intezar mai
aur tujhe meri maiyat sharik hona nai aaya.


hmm thank u ji and very well too!!!!!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2005, 11:17:15 AM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahut khoob meena ji you r greattttttttttttttttt

tere janne ke baad haume to jeena nahi aaya
keh gaye the khwaab me aaoge par
hum ko neend ki goo.d me jana nahi aaya
kaat de tamaam umar tere intezar mai
aur tujhe meri maiyat sharik hona nai aaya.


wow  wonderful  meena........always  superbsssss.........very nice pooja...vikas............. tongue3  tongue3  tongue3
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sandhaya
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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2005, 11:19:43 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
meena ji you r superb really so nice of you...........
apno ne begano ki tarah kaam kiye
humne apne hi haathon khudko ilzaam diye
kya kya na kiya tere liye oh bewaffa humne
tujhe yaad kiya tere liye phir di duaein hume jalane ke liye


thank u ji apne bhi bohot acha likha!!!!
aap to waise bhi bohot hi acha likhti hai!!
 :D
sukhriya Meena ji lekin aapke jitna acha tuh nahi likhti .............
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Meena
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2005, 11:22:02 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahut khoob meena ji you r greattttttttttttttttt

tere janne ke baad haume to jeena nahi aaya
keh gaye the khwaab me aaoge par
hum ko neend ki goo.d me jana nahi aaya
kaat de tamaam umar tere intezar mai
aur tujhe meri maiyat sharik hona nai aaya.


wow  wonderful  meena........always  superbsssss.........very nice
pooja...vikas............. tongue3  tongue3  tongue3



thanx motu!
 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2005, 11:24:40 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
meena ji you r superb really so nice of you...........
apno ne begano ki tarah kaam kiye
humne apne hi haathon khudko ilzaam diye
kya kya na kiya tere liye oh bewaffa humne
tujhe yaad kiya tere liye phir di duaein hume jalane ke liye


thank you ji apne bhi bohot acha likha!!!!
aap to waise bhi bohot hi acha likhti hai!!
 :D
sukhriya Meena ji lekin aapke jitna acha tuh nahi likhti .............


arre nahin kuddiye nothing like this! abih abih mere ek dost ne who is also a great shayar said its only a ok ok shayari and he is telling me all my galtiyan i do in my shayaris Puzzled !  so u c...  Puzzled !
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jochahohojayein
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«Reply #23 on: May 05, 2005, 11:26:26 AM »
very meenaji aap abhut achha likhti hai
khuda kare
aap likhe likhti rahe
aur likhti rahenge
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Meena
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«Reply #24 on: May 05, 2005, 11:36:30 AM »
Quote from: "jochahohojayein"
very meenaji aap abhut achha likhti hai
khuda kare
aap likhe likhti rahe
aur likhti rahenge


lol thnak u ji thank u!!

 :D
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sandhaya
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«Reply #25 on: May 05, 2005, 11:40:10 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
meena ji you r superb really so nice of you...........
apno ne begano ki tarah kaam kiye
humne apne hi haathon khudko ilzaam diye
kya kya na kiya tere liye oh bewaffa humne
tujhe yaad kiya tere liye phir di duaein hume jalane ke liye


thank you ji apne bhi bohot acha likha!!!!
aap to waise bhi bohot hi acha likhti hai!!
 :D
sukhriya Meena ji lekin aapke jitna acha tuh nahi likhti .............


arre nahin kuddiye nothing like this! abih abih mere ek dost ne who is also a great shayar said its only a ok ok shayari and he is telling me all my galtiyan i do in my shayaris Puzzled !  so you c...  Puzzled !
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sukhriya Meena ji mera husla badane ke liye ........
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Meena
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«Reply #26 on: May 05, 2005, 11:58:50 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
meena ji you r superb really so nice of you...........
apno ne begano ki tarah kaam kiye
humne apne hi haathon khudko ilzaam diye
kya kya na kiya tere liye oh bewaffa humne
tujhe yaad kiya tere liye phir di duaein hume jalane ke liye


thank you ji apne bhi bohot acha likha!!!!
aap to waise bhi bohot hi acha likhti hai!!
 :D
sukhriya Meena ji lekin aapke jitna acha tuh nahi likhti .............


arre nahin kuddiye nothing like this! abih abih mere ek dost ne who is also a great shayar said its only a ok ok shayari and he is telling me all my galtiyan i do in my shayaris Puzzled !  so you c...  Puzzled !
]

sukhriya Meena ji mera husla badane ke liye ........


ur welcome!

 :D
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vikas2210
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«Reply #27 on: May 05, 2005, 12:26:45 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahut khoob meena ji you r greattttttttttttttttt

tere janne ke baad haume to jeena nahi aaya
keh gaye the khwaab me aaoge par
hum ko neend ki goo.d me jana nahi aaya
kaat de tamaam umar tere intezar mai
aur tujhe meri maiyat sharik hona nai aaya.


hmm thank you ji and very well too!!!!!

 :D


THANK U JI

aap bahut acchi tarh se hausla afzaai karti hai.

maine aapke shayri se bahut kuch seekha hai aur seekhta rahunga.

pls keep writting.
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Meena
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«Reply #28 on: May 05, 2005, 12:32:46 PM »
arre thank u ji  :D

hum kya sikhayenge zamane ko,
jo pattar marta hai har deewane ko!!!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #29 on: May 05, 2005, 01:39:39 PM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "vikas2210"
Quote from: "Meena"
Unke jane ke baad unki yaadon ke saath bhi khud ko akhela paya,
Phoolon ke bagh me humne kaanton ka mela paya,
Uth uth kar dekhte te teri raha raaton me bhi,
Kuch yuh adat pad gayi, ke kabar me bhi chain se sona nahin aya!

Pattar ban hi gaye, jab har maud pe gumon ke toofan ko paya,
Apno ki godh me dam todte apne har ek arman ko paya,
Chubne lage abkhon me khwabon ke tukde kuch aise,
Ke dard ke mare phir koi sapna pirona nahin aya!


Har nazm me apne dukh ko humne mehekte hue paya,
Apne dil ki dastan pe logo ko  „wah“ „wah“ kehte hue paya,
Samjha nahin tere dard ko koi, shayari likhni band kar tu „Meena,
Jo lafzo ko dard me tujhe bigona nahin aya!!!


bahut khoob meena ji you r greattttttttttttttttt

tere janne ke baad haume to jeena nahi aaya
keh gaye the khwaab me aaoge par
hum ko neend ki goo.d me jana nahi aaya
kaat de tamaam umar tere intezar mai
aur tujhe meri maiyat sharik hona nai aaya.


hmm thank you ji and very well too!!!!!

 :D


THANK you JI

aap bahut acchi tarh se hausla afzaai karti hai.

maine aapke shayri se bahut kuch seekha hai aur seekhta rahunga.

pls keep writting.


wow  very  nice  work..........meena....sandhaya...........vikas.. ............ tongue3
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