kabhi unse yeh na poocha......

by punam on December 19, 2007, 12:07:27 PM
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punam
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kabhi unse yeh na poocha aap kyun chale gaye
kyun mohabbat ki aag me hume jalake yun chale gaye..

chal pade the dono saath saath mohabbat ki raah pe
phir kyun hame tanha chor raasta maud ke chale gaye..

dil me unki mohabbat liye hum khade reh gaye
woh hame tohfe me intezaar deke chale gaye...

laut aayenge ek din, hum dil ko samjhate samjhate thak gaye
kya pata tha woh kisi aur ke liye hume chor kar chale gaye..
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2007, 12:10:24 PM »
dil me unki mohabbat liye hum khade reh gaye
woh hame tohfe me intezaar deke chale gaye...nice punam ji .. Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2007, 02:24:17 PM »
Very nice Punam ! Usual Smile
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prmchawla
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2007, 03:38:54 AM »
very nice
let me try,
aare wo aapko chorh kar nahi balki aapke liye raasta bana gaye,
wo to khali ek hi the, unke jaane ke baad to laakho aapki aada ke dewaane bana gaye.
na do unko dosh ki wo to kisi ek ke hi huye,
or aapke daaman mai to wo lakho ki khushiya bikher gaye.
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prmchawla
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2007, 04:00:44 AM »
bahut khub
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2007, 05:32:25 PM »
Thanx Talat di..honeyrose and prmchawla...
prmchawla..bahot acha likha aap ne...
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2007, 12:51:19 AM »
kabhi unse yeh na poocha aap kyun chale gaye
kyun mohabbat ki aag me hume jalake yun chale gaye..

chal pade the dono saath saath mohabbat ki raah pe
phir kyun hame tanha chor raasta maud ke chale gaye..

dil me unki mohabbat liye hum khade reh gaye
woh hame tohfe me intezaar deke chale gaye...

laut aayenge ek din, hum dil ko samjhate samjhate thak gaye
kya pata tha woh kisi aur ke liye hume chor kar chale gaye..


ahaaa Punam kitna touching touching likha hai tumne.
Last 2 lines bahut khoob.... very good punam ... keep flowing.
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natural
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2007, 07:56:30 AM »
Nice One Punam..
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2007, 08:14:12 AM »
thako mat punam ji
chinta na karo laut aayega wo ek din

veery good punam ji

Baadal
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