Kaisi Ye Daastan ______________ {Angel} -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: June 25, 2009, 05:13:18 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 24, 2009, 08:51:27 PM

Angel.Iss Nazm Ki tareef Mein Kuch Keh paau,Itne Lafz Nahi Mere Paas...Par har Ek Lafz Mein Dard Ki Ek Pukaar Si thi...Bahut Dard Aur Gehre Jazbaton Se Bhari Nazm Hai Yeh ,Bas Shart Yeh hai Ke Iss Nazm Ko Uss Ehsaas Se Padha Jaaye,Jis Ehsaas Ke Saath Aapne Yeh Likha Hai..

Bahut Bahut Bhaut Khoob Mere Dost!!

Simply Beautiful..

Quote from: khwaish on June 24, 2009, 09:15:12 PM

Huzena,Aapne Itna Acha Likha Hai Ke Bin kuch Likhe Yaha Se Jaana Namumkin Sa Ho Gaya Hai...Kuch Instant Sa Jawaab Dene Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon..Umeed Hai Aapko Aur sabko Yeh Pasand Aaye...

Zubaan Khamosh Bhi Ho To,
Nazrein Bahut Kuch Keh Sakti Hai..

Sirf Dard Mein Aankhein Nam Nahi Hoti Eh Dost!!!
Teri Khushi Ke Sadke Bhi,Aankhein Meri Beh Sakti Hai....

Sirf Dooriyon Mein Insaan Door Nahi Hota "Huzena"
Kabhi-Kabhi Bahut Nazdikiyan Bhi,Do Dilon Mein Dooriyan Ban Ke Reh Sakti Hai...

Dekhte-Dekhte Woh Ajnabi Kyon Apna Sa Ban Gaya "Khwaish"??
Uski Judai Yeh Dhadkane, Ab Nahi Seh Sakti hai....

Tumne Kabhi Suune Ki Koshish Hi Na Ki,
Khamoshiyan Bhi Bahut Kuch Keh Sakti Hai.....

Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish Ji, ye to aapka apnapan hia ke aapko meri har nazm khoobsurat lagti hai. Kehte hia na jiski nazrein khoobsurat hoti hia use apne ird gird sab chizein khoobsurat lagti hia. Hmmm kafi lambi hai isliye itmenaan se padhne ki zaroorat hai. Shukriya aapne apna waqt hamein aru hamari nazm ko diya...

Ek chhoti si koshish hum bhi karna chahenge aapke is khoobsurat andaaz ke liye...

Mere dard se hi aankhein nam thi uski ye hi ehsaas hai ab tak,
uski saanson ki mehek meri saanson mein mehekti hia ab tak,

ke chala aaye wo kisi mod se isliye dhundti hia nazrein har pal use,
mil jaaye bas ek lamha uske saath mujhe intezar karenge tab tak,

baitha hai aaj wo mere itne kareeb meri qabr ke paas aise,
in nazdikiyon mein jo hai dooriyan na mitegi ab qayamat tak,

tune to kaha tha alwida us din par na jaane kyon lagta hai,
wo gulaab intezaar to karta hi hoga mere haathon ka ab tak,

Shayad isiliye le aaya ye masoom pankhdiyaan meri qabr sajane ko,
bebas bhi hia khush bhi hai ke chahta hai tu mujhe ab tak...


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Re: Kaisi Ye Daastan ______________ {Angel}

«Reply #16 on: June 25, 2009, 05:13:58 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2009, 12:42:43 AM

Wah wah Angel ji and Khwaish ji,very very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley

excellent.

Thank you so much dear... Usual Smile


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«Reply #17 on: June 25, 2009, 05:15:08 PM »

Quote from: MHussain on June 24, 2009, 11:34:55 PM

Well done Ms Angel, bravo!

Thanks a lot Mr Hussain. Nice to see your reply here...


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Re: Kaisi Ye Daastan ______________ {Angel}

«Reply #18 on: June 25, 2009, 05:16:16 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 25, 2009, 11:02:41 AM

Very beautiful indeed..har lafz main dard aur chahat ka ehsaas...bohot bohot achcha likha hai...par bohot dard se bhara.......Bohot Bohot Khoob Sweetie

Thank you so much Talat for such beautiful words of appreciation. Thanks for appreciating always....


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«Reply #19 on: June 25, 2009, 05:25:56 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 25, 2009, 11:08:18 AM

Kya kahe aapse Angel ji......kisi ka is tarah se hmari zindagi me aana aur ek pal me hame tanha chod kar chale jana...aur dil ka usi ki baaho me zindagi ki aankhiri saans ki ummid.....bahut pyara,bahut khubsurti se har lafj piroya h aapne Clapping Smiley

sahi hia isse bada dard shayad hiduniya mein koi ho.
Bahut bahut shukriya mere alfaazo ko samajhne ke liye...

Take care..


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Re: Kaisi Ye Daastan ______________ {Angel}

«Reply #20 on: June 25, 2009, 05:27:05 PM »

Quote from: Roja on June 25, 2009, 11:18:26 AM

Waaaaaahhh... Bahut bahut accha likha hai tumne sweetu... daastan lambi thi... magar dard bara tha.. God bless you my angel. Bahut umda likha hai tumne...

Hmmm daastan thodi lambi hogayi... par likhte likhte ehsaas hi nahi hua, uar uske baad usme se ek bhi lafz nikalne ka mann nahi hua...


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«Reply #21 on: June 25, 2009, 05:29:23 PM »

Quote from: Mann on June 25, 2009, 02:47:08 PM

Kya Kahun Angel Dear.. Lafz Nahi hain mere paas is Nazm ki Tareef ke liye.. Dil ko Chhoo jane Wale aur Dil tak utar jane wali Alfaaz likhe hain dear... Dard Ko Lafzon me Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya hai aapne.. daad Kubool Karen dost....!! Applause

**~** Mann **~**

Bahut bahut shukriya Mann.. Tarif karne ke liye, padhne ke liye aur taaliyan bhi bajane ke liye, wo bhi itni saari...

mere dard ka asar is tarha se hua yehi mere liye sab se bada appreciation hai... notworthy


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«Reply #22 on: June 26, 2009, 02:48:52 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash Ji...


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Re: Kaisi Ye Daastan ______________ {Angel}

«Reply #23 on: July 10, 2009, 06:29:55 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 25, 2009, 11:03:17 AM

Khwaish, aapne bhi bohot achcha reply likha hai icon_thumleft

Bohot khoob Dost !

Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Dost!!!


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«Reply #24 on: July 10, 2009, 06:32:14 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2009, 12:42:43 AM

Wah wah Angel ji and Khwaish ji,very very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley

excellent.

Thankyou So Much Madhuji...Thanx For Always Appreciting My Work


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«Reply #25 on: July 10, 2009, 06:35:12 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 25, 2009, 12:25:04 PM

bahut pyara jwab diya h aapne Khwaish ji.....
Clapping Smiley

kabhi-kabhi bahut nazdikiyan bhi dooriyan ban k reh skti h....

Khamoshiyan bhi bahut khuch keh skti h........bahut khub kha aapne Khwaish ji.....

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Pooja..


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«Reply #26 on: July 10, 2009, 06:36:44 PM »

wah wah wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoon AANGEL AND KHWAISH JI


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«Reply #27 on: July 10, 2009, 06:39:59 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 25, 2009, 09:38:11 PM

Bahot bahot khoob likha hai aapne Angel ji,dard ki alag tarah se bayangi ki aur Khwaish ji aapne bhi bahot acha likha hai

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji..


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«Reply #28 on: July 10, 2009, 06:46:11 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 10, 2009, 06:36:44 PM

wah wah wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoon AANGEL AND KHWAISH JI

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..


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Re: Kaisi Ye Daastan ______________ {Angel}

«Reply #29 on: July 10, 2009, 06:54:58 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on June 25, 2009, 05:13:18 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Ke Aapne Itna Kuch Keh Diya Par Sach To Yehi hai Ke Itni Khoobsurat nazm Ki Tareef Mein Kuch Kam Kehna To Beimaani Si rehti Thi...Isliye Phir Se Bahut bahut Khoob Huzena..


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