- Kanch Ki Duniya -

by Meena on July 13, 2005, 10:51:20 PM
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Some feelings.....

Kanch ki hoti hai sapno ki duniya, jo pal bar me toot jati hai,
Jab kadam rakh hi liya is raha me aab, to aab gabrane se kya?

Koshish agar karoge, sheeshe me haqiqat ke rang dhalne ki,
Toot kar chubne lagega ankhon me sapna, phir ashk bahane se kya?

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya?

Phenk de in tukdon ko “Meena”, jo bikre hai tere daman me aab,
Toote kanch ki is dhul ko aab seene se lagane se kye?
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2005, 10:58:14 PM »
wah meena ji kya baat hai

Kuch phool hum pe gire kuch phool unpe gire!
fark sirf intana tha ki woh duniya basa rahe thae,
aur hum duniya se ja rahe thae!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2005, 10:58:46 PM »
wah meena ji kya baat hai

Chup chaap akele bethe rahe tanhai me, andheron me...
Yaadon ko ankhon me chupaaye saari duniya se bachaaye,
Woh khushiyon ke pal, woh bechaini,
Woh teri aankhon me khil-khilaati roshni
woh pyaar bhare salaam, woh meethi duaein
ek adhuri mulakaat aur zindagi bhar saath nibhaane wali yaadein...
Sirf Yaadein...
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2005, 11:02:58 PM »
shukriya jeetu ji........................................
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2005, 11:05:01 PM »
ur welcome

SPACE
Space seems like an empty word, but it’s full of
pecial,

eople,
round,
aring,
ndlessly.
Thank u 4 being a part of my S.P.A.C.E.
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2005, 11:54:43 PM »
gud............................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2005, 12:18:57 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Some feelings.....

Kanch ki hoti hai sapno ki duniya, jo pal bar me toot jati hai,
Jab kadam rakh hi liya is raha me aab, to aab gabrane se kya?

Koshish agar karoge, sheeshe me haqiqat ke rang dhalne ki,
Toot kar chubne lagega ankhon me sapna, phir ashk bahane se kya?

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya?

Phenk de in tukdon ko “Meena”, jo bikre hai tere daman me aab,
Toote kanch ki is dhul ko aab seene se lagane se kye?

Kya baat hai Meena aapki....Bohat khoob....
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2005, 12:24:50 AM »
"Phenk de in tukdon ko “Meena”, jo bikre hai tere daman me aab, Toote kanch ki is dhul ko aab seene se lagane se kye"...kya lines hai meena ji.....VERY NICE......aap bhi kam nahi jeetu ji......good good!!!!!!!1
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2005, 12:50:41 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai meena aap ne...!!!
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just as good as ever...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2005, 08:48:32 PM »
aryaan ji..ishu....toshu.... bohot bohot shukriya meri poems pasand karne ka!

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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2005, 08:54:12 PM »
nice one meenu sis.......................gr88888888888.......... .....................!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2005, 09:03:12 PM »
thank u salma sis...................................... sad5
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2005, 07:24:28 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Some feelings.....

Kanch ki hoti hai sapno ki duniya, jo pal bar me toot jati hai,
Jab kadam rakh hi liya is raha me aab, to aab gabrane se kya?

Koshish agar karoge, sheeshe me haqiqat ke rang dhalne ki,
Toot kar chubne lagega ankhon me sapna, phir ashk bahane se kya?

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya?

Phenk de in tukdon ko “Meena”, jo bikre hai tere daman me aab,
Toote kanch ki is dhul ko aab seene se lagane se kye?


waah waah .. bhoot khoob likha hai Meena ji !!!

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya


waseey to sari ki sari gazal bahut achi hai lein,yeh do lines humey bhoot achi lagi !!!

duniya ka dastoor hai asisa, karta hai jo pyaar zakhm khata hai
log chaltey hai hathoon mein namak leke, zakhmi dil dhikane se kya ?

kuch arz hai Meena ji , mulaiza farmaiye !!!


dabi hui hai jo mere dil mai woh baat baki hai
keh na saka jo kabhi tum se woh baat baki hai

keh liya sun liya tamam umar bahut kuch hamne
zikar jiska kitaabon mai hua ho woh baat baki hai

ja chuke hain is anjuman se uth kar kab ke sabhi
na chiraaghon ko bujhao tum abhi ki raat baki hai

*waabasta the jo meri barbadiyon ko anjaam dene mai
aisi hazaaron aandhiyon se mera hisaab baki hai

na uthaana naqaab mere rukhsaar se tum zaraa abhi
`HumTum`ki ankhon mai abhi ashq-o-ghubaar baki hai

waabasta = kasoorwar !!

:D

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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2005, 10:17:28 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Some feelings.....

Kanch ki hoti hai sapno ki duniya, jo pal bar me toot jati hai,
Jab kadam rakh hi liya is raha me aab, to aab gabrane se kya?

Koshish agar karoge, sheeshe me haqiqat ke rang dhalne ki,
Toot kar chubne lagega ankhon me sapna, phir ashk bahane se kya?

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya?

Phenk de in tukdon ko “Meena”, jo bikre hai tere daman me aab,
Toote kanch ki is dhul ko aab seene se lagane se kye?


wah meena,bohat dard bhara,bohat khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2005, 10:29:46 PM »
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waah waah .. bhoot khoob likha hai Meena ji !!!

Dil pe jo chot lagegi to koon-e-arman bahega,
Bhar na sakhe jo zakhm unpe marham lagane se kya


waseey to sari ki sari gazal bahut achi hai lein,yeh do lines humey bhoot achi lagi !!!

duniya ka dastoor hai asisa, karta hai jo pyaar zakhm khata hai
log chaltey hai hathoon mein namak leke, zakhmi dil dhikane se kya ?

kuch arz hai Meena ji , mulaiza farmaiye !!!


dabi hui hai jo mere dil mai woh baat baki hai
keh na saka jo kabhi tum se woh baat baki hai

keh liya sun liya tamam umar bahut kuch hamne
zikar jiska kitaabon mai hua ho woh baat baki hai

ja chuke hain is anjuman se uth kar kab ke sabhi
na chiraaghon ko bujhao tum abhi ki raat baki hai

*waabasta the jo meri barbadiyon ko anjaam dene mai
aisi hazaaron aandhiyon se mera hisaab baki hai

na uthaana naqaab mere rukhsaar se tum zaraa abhi
`HumTum`ki ankhon mai abhi ashq-o-ghubaar baki hai

waabasta = kasoorwar !!

:D



shukriya ji shukriya!!!

mere shayari pe wah wah karne wale zara rukho tum,
hal-e-dil bayan karne ke liye likhni abhi kitab baki hai!!
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