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Manzilein bhi teri thi rasta bhi tera tha ek hum akele the kafila bhi tera tha saath saath chalne ki soch bhi teri thi phir rasta badalne ka faisla bhi tera tha aaj kyon akela hoon dil sawaal karta hai log to tere the kya khuda bhi tera tha.....  By Monitor: Use NM(Not Mine) if you are sharing other's work in order to show your respect for original author.
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2008, 02:36:19 PM » |
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Nice lines Diya...
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2008, 02:37:31 PM » |
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badhya hai diya
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2008, 02:41:53 PM » |
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kashmaksh meri mere he dil ke saath thi baat saari jo tumney ki wohh tere he paas thi uska khuda uska tha toh tera bhi tere saath hoga dil ka diya jahan hoga wohh akela kahan hoga...
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2008, 03:19:29 PM » |
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nice one its touch my heart
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2008, 06:43:32 AM » |
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Wow! What an expression!Gr8!Keep it up! Haseena
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2008, 05:51:34 PM » |
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thanks a lot shikha, raj, farah 4 appreciating my work and very nice reply zakhmolaji!!
pathar muje kehta hai mera chahne wala main mom hoon usne mujhe chu kar nahin dekha
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2008, 08:49:01 PM » |
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kafiley saath honge to manzilein aasaan hongee aap humaare honge to kya baat hogee pehchaniye huzoor humko ek qaderdaan hain hum qisme se chahne waale milte hain bahut kam
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2008, 08:52:26 PM » |
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kaash yeh jaadugaree ka aser kam ho jaata na arzu hotee na yeh dard hee satata jee chahta hai ki ab bas ek aap hon aur hum duniyan ke meley mein ab saath hon aap hum
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2008, 09:01:55 PM » |
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kaheen kho gaye thae jaadugaree mein hum ek aag ke dariya mein doob gaye thae hum baahonki panahen theen aur zulf ka saya tha ek meethee meethee khushboo aur kho rahe thae hum gham koi na tha na dushwaariyan theen logo duniyan haseen jannat lagne lagee thee logo dhar baar raoshan jab dil raoshan ho gaya chingaariyan sulag raheen theen hairan dil ho gaya mohabbat ka taqaza tha dewaaangee ke had tak jalwanuma jo aap thae utar aya chand zameen tak mat poochiye humein is nashe ne kaise ghera aapki adaaon ne aas paas gulistaan bikhera
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2008, 09:20:52 PM » |
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maathe ki shikan keh rahee hai ki kuch baat hai khudara keh bhi deejiye ki kya baat hai kya wafaonka silsila ujad jaane ko hai khwaabonka gharonda bikhar jaane ko hai jaan se jaana asaan naheen hai maalik ahistha ahistha marna bhi koi baat hai bata hee deejiye humko kya ab hum naheen dilka sukoon tha pehle ab woh hum naheen sangdil duniya se ummeed hai naheen rab ka ek waastha bas humko gham naheen parde mein apse munh na chupaayenge door hue aap to bhi muskurayenge situm jo chahe kar lijiye par huzoorewaala nijaath hogee na hamse mohabbath ka bol bala jehan se jub jaayenge to jaan lijiye mohabbat hogee dil mein bus maan lijiye azman ke dekh chuke hain phir dekh lijiye parakh ki kasutee par phir jaanch lijiye pyar kam na hoga aur na kabhie wafayen kam aapko is dilse chahte rahenge har dam
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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2008, 09:21:59 PM » |
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Nice sharing Diya, nice one Zakhmola ji and good one farahahmed !!
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2008, 09:37:28 PM » |
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ishaare hain mohabbat ke qubool ho gayee hai baat kya khoob nazer hai aapki aur daad ki hai baat hausla afzaayee ka hai behad shukriya ya rab samajh gayeen woh mere dilke jazbaat nigaahe naazko hai ab ikhtiyar bhi ab muqarrar rahe yeh haalat waah waah ki ya rab sabaq aapse hee seekhna hai abto jo keh sakein hum sub kuch deewangee mein subko baazaar hai duniyan ka hai bada hujoom logon par qaderdaan kam hain sukoon naheen hai logon josh mein hoon main bhi aapkeee is daadse likhne ki koshishein hain khwaahish hai baatse din haseen jo kar doon ager main aapka is shayaree se thoda rang bhar doon pyar ka azaad hoon iswaqt tanha main naheen aap jo saath hain phir akele hum naheen
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«Reply #13 on: February 20, 2008, 09:46:31 PM » |
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai farahahmed ji!!
Likha hai apne acha, jo dil ko chu gaya Daad ki to thi yah baat, magar apko kaya ho gaya
Likhta hai jo bhi acha, daad wo khud he pa gaya Chamak yah apki nigah main, soch mai daal gaya
Josh mai hai app to likhte hi phir jaaye Likhe kuch aisa ki hum bhi sath de jaaye
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2008, 09:54:46 PM » |
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sahaara ban gaye aap ab ho mera qarar jee chahta hai dekhoon apko baar baar nigaah mein ho aaphee aur jism wa jaan mein bhi khoon ban kar ab dauran hain ragon ke aar paar kaynaat mein to shayad bahut haseen hain lekin ek aap dil ko bha rahen hain hazaar baar
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