Kashmakahs

by Shweta_v7 on June 24, 2005, 09:59:17 AM

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Shweta_v7

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Chahaa jisee usee paa naa sakee,
paya jisee usee chahaa naa sakee,
Yeh kaise kashmakash hai zindagi kee?
Maut mangee toh,
Upar walee nee doo din aur dee diyee udhaar meien


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isha_verma7

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Re: Kashmakahs

«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2005, 10:51:35 AM »

Quote from: "Shweta_v7"

Chahaa jisee usee paa naa sakee,
paya jisee usee chahaa naa sakee,
Yeh kaise kashmakash hai zindagi kee?
Maut mangee toh,
Upar walee nee doo din aur dee diyee udhaar meien

good good shweta ji..............NICE!!!!


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Meena

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Re: Kashmakahs

«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2005, 07:31:49 PM »

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Chahaa jisee usee paa naa sakee,
paya jisee usee chahaa naa sakee,
Yeh kaise kashmakash hai zindagi kee?
Maut mangee toh,
Upar walee nee doo din aur dee diyee udhaar meien

gud one shweta! and welcome to yoindia!! :D


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Shweta_v7

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Kashmakahs

«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2005, 10:42:51 PM »

Thanks ishaji and meena ji....hamara sherr padnee kee liyee...nahi toh hamee laga kee logo koo hamare sherr pasand nahi...waise humnee aap dono kee sherr bhi padee hai...aap dono toh kafi aacha likhtee hai!!


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Re: Kashmakahs

«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2005, 10:54:52 PM »

Quote from: "Shweta_v7"

Chahaa jisee usee paa naa sakee,
paya jisee usee chahaa naa sakee,
Yeh kaise kashmakash hai zindagi kee?
Maut mangee toh,
Upar walee nee doo din aur dee diyee udhaar meien

wah shweta,thats lovely,something thats straight from the heart Usual Smile


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: Kashmakahs

«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2005, 11:06:56 PM »

Quote from: "Shweta_v7"

Chahaa jisee usee paa naa sakee,
paya jisee usee chahaa naa sakee,
Yeh kaise kashmakash hai zindagi kee?
Maut mangee toh,
Upar walee nee doo din aur dee diyee udhaar meien

very nice shweta................................bahot khoob......


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amrita

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Re: Kashmakahs

«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2005, 11:38:01 PM »

Quote from: "Shweta_v7"

Chahaa jisee usee paa naa sakee,
paya jisee usee chahaa naa sakee,
Yeh kaise kashmakash hai zindagi kee?
Maut mangee toh,
Upar walee nee doo din aur dee diyee udhaar meien

shweta.............good..!!


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Meena

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Kashmakahs

«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2005, 11:43:11 PM »

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ur welcome shweta! woh kya hai aaj kal log bohot kam ate hai yaha pe sad5

maybe isslyie kisi ne dekha nahin! :D meri shayari padne aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya kuddiye!! keep writing!! :D


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Shweta_v7

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Kashmakahs

«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2005, 09:28:49 PM »

Thanks all for appreciation....aur meena kuriyee sanuu nahi pata see kee tusi punjabi vee jandee hoo!!...hope hunn tuwanu sadee punjabi samajh aajayee Usual Smile


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Meena

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Kashmakahs

«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2005, 09:57:10 PM »

arre shweta...yes i do know punjabi, ghar me bolte hai na hum par likhna aur padna mushkil hota hai. par phir bhi i always try to talk. to tussi sade nal punjabi vich gal kar sakhte ho :D