KHAT MEIN LIKH RAHA HOON...SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on July 06, 2013, 07:40:08 PM
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Main apna haal-e-dil tamam khat mein likh raha hoon
kaise gujarti hai subah-o-sham khat mein likh raha hoon

din ho ya raat ho bas har dum tumhe yaad karta hoon
bas karta hoon ek yahi kaam khat mein likh raha hoon

ek tere sath hone se khud ko mukammal pata hoon main
bin tere dunia meri veeran khat mein likh raha hoon

mere jism ki rooh ho tum tujhse hee dil ki dhadkan hai
tere na hone se jism hua bejaan khat mein likh raha hoon

lout aao ke tere bin yeh dil mera bahut udas rehta hai
dil ka yeh tere liye paigam khat mein likh raha hoon
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2013, 07:40:56 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2013, 08:02:06 PM »

ek tere sath hone se khud ko mukammal pata hoon main
bin tere dunia meri veeran khat mein likh raha hoon

mere jism ki rooh ho tum tujhse hee dil ki dhadkan hai
tere na hone se jism hua bejaan khat mein likh raha hoon
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waah waah waah soudagar bhai dil cheer ke khat me likh daala..Behatareen..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2013, 08:16:10 PM »
soudagar sahab bohut khoob likha hai apne

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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2013, 09:20:13 PM »
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मज़ा आ गया
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2013, 10:02:06 PM »
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  wah wah soudagar ji . khoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2013, 10:20:40 PM »
WAAH WAAH...
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2013, 12:21:55 AM »

Saudagar Jee Aadaab... !


Badi pyaari kavish kahi hai janab, behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal rahe kalaam ke...

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubabrakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN aapki kalaam ke tisre aur chaothe sher ka kafiyaa kharij hai... thoda technique par dhayaan dijiye... aapke ahsaas O khayaal qabil e tareef hai... aur nikhar jayeNge...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2013, 01:30:25 AM »
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waah soudagar ji. badi hi achchi peshkash hai. achche ehsaas se khat ko sajaya hai. aapko dheron daad is kalam par.
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2013, 02:09:16 AM »
shukriya sahil bhai
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2013, 02:38:09 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2013, 05:59:58 AM »
Main apna haal-e-dil tamam khat mein likh raha hoon
kaise gujarti hai subah-o-sham khat mein likh raha hoon

din ho ya raat ho bas har dum tumhe yaad karta hoon
bas karta hoon ek yahi kaam khat mein likh raha hoon

ek tere sath hone se khud ko mukammal pata hoon main
bin tere dunia meri veeran khat mein likh raha hoon

mere jism ki rooh ho tum tujhse hee dil ki dhadkan hai
tere na hone se jism hua bejaan khat mein likh raha hoon

lout aao ke tere bin yeh dil mera bahut udas rehta hai
dil ka yeh tere liye paigam khat mein likh raha hoon
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good,sir but viraan and bejaan are not similar qafia like aigham,tamaam,sham,kaam
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2013, 08:23:36 AM »
Main apna haal-e-dil tamam khat mein likh raha hoon
kaise gujarti hai subah-o-sham khat mein likh raha hoon
kab post karo ge khat aur haan address sahi sahi likhna nahin to nahin mila khat to kise pata chega tumhara haal kyon ki abhi bhi hum 18 sadi mein jee rahe hain ,net mobile to hai hi nahin hamaare paas Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
din ho ya raat ho bas har dum tumhe yaad karta hoon
bas karta hoon ek yahi kaam khat mein likh raha hoon
pata chal gaya-abhi tak tumhein naukri kyo.n nahin mili icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
ek tere sath hone se khud ko mukammal pata hoon main
bin tere dunia meri veeran khat mein likh raha hoon
saath thi to bhi tum ne kaun sa pahaad todh dalaa ji. rahne do rahne to fitte muh icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
mere jism ki rooh ho tum tujhse hee dil ki dhadkan hai
tere na hone se jism hua bejaan khat mein likh raha hoon
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardlo ek aur naya tamaasha suno duniya waalo.n iss diwaane ka haal
lout aao ke tere bin yeh dil mera bahut udas rehta hai
dil ka yeh tere liye paigam khat mein likh raha hoon
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bahut khhob.....!
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2013, 02:59:30 PM »
bahut khoobsoorat kalaam dheron daad
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2013, 12:03:06 AM »
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