Khatm Na Hota Safar..dolly

by dolly on April 28, 2012, 07:19:12 AM
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Zehen Se Liptaa Darr Hai Koi
Beete Waqt Ka Asar Hai Koi

Ghoont Ghoont Lamho.N ko Peena
Aab-e-Hayaat Nahee Zeher Hai Koi

Samjhe The Phoolo.N Kee Sej Jise
Bichey Kaanto.N Ka Ghar Hai Koi

Ashk Bhala Fir Kaise Dikhte
Jab Mom Nahhee Patthar Hai Koi

Begaane Sabhi,Kaun Hai Kiska
Badhaal Firta Dar Badar Hai Koi

Manzilo.N Ka Kuch Thikaana Nahee
Khatm Na Hota Safar Hai Koi..

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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 07:24:46 AM »
Waah ji waah sister.
Aapki ye composition kamal ki h.
Esliye hmari daad ko kabool farmaye...
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2012, 07:35:22 AM »


Zehen Se Liptaa Darr Hai Koi
Beete Waqt Ka Asar Hai Koi

Ghoont Ghoont Lamho.N ko Peena
Aab-e-Hayaat Nahee Zeher Hai Koi

Samjhe The Phoolo.N Kee Sej Jise
Bichey Kaanto.N Ka Ghar Hai Koi

Ashk Bhala Fir Kaise Dikhte
Jab Mom Nahhee Patthar Hai Koi

Begaane Sabhi,Kaun Hai Kiska
Badhaal Firta Dar Badar Hai Koi

Manzilo.N Ka Kuch Thikaana Nahee
Khatm Na Hota Safar Hai Koi..

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Aab-e-hayaat=nectar..(amrit)


Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dolly Ji..

Beautiful  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2012, 08:47:05 AM »


Zehen Se Liptaa Darr Hai Koi
Beete Waqt Ka Asar Hai Koi

Ghoont Ghoont Lamho.N ko Peena
Aab-e-Hayaat Nahee Zeher Hai Koi

Samjhe The Phoolo.N Kee Sej Jise
Bichey Kaanto.N Ka Ghar Hai Koi

Ashk Bhala Fir Kaise Dikhte
Jab Mom Nahhee Patthar Hai Koi

Begaane Sabhi,Kaun Hai Kiska
Badhaal Firta Dar Badar Hai Koi

Manzilo.N Ka Kuch Thikaana Nahee
Khatm Na Hota Safar Hai Koi..

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Aab-e-hayaat=nectar..(amrit)

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2012, 09:48:06 AM »
Dolly Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut umdaa kia kahne jee waaH
behad gazab ki kalaam kahi hai aapne... bahut khoob
sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe jee... Usual Smile

Kisi aik ko achcha yaa kisi ko buraa kahkar kam hi
nahi kiya jaa sakta sabhi behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2012, 11:29:14 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2012, 12:11:58 PM »


Zehen Se Liptaa Darr Hai Koi
Beete Waqt Ka Asar Hai Koi

Ghoont Ghoont Lamho.N ko Peena
Aab-e-Hayaat Nahee Zeher Hai Koi

Samjhe The Phoolo.N Kee Sej Jise
Bichey Kaanto.N Ka Ghar Hai Koi

Ashk Bhala Fir Kaise Dikhte
Jab Mom Nahhee Patthar Hai Koi

Begaane Sabhi,Kaun Hai Kiska
Badhaal Firta Dar Badar Hai Koi

Manzilo.N Ka Kuch Thikaana Nahee
Khatm Na Hota Safar Hai Koi..

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Aab-e-hayaat=nectar..(amrit)

Bahut khub dolly ji ek umda gazal ke liye dheroN mubarakbad
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2012, 12:14:55 PM »


Zehen Se Liptaa Darr Hai Koi
Beete Waqt Ka Asar Hai Koi
aisi khata jo shayad kabhi bhi kahin bhi zindagi mein saamne aa kar kahdi ho jaaye. sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5 sad5
Ghoont Ghoont Lamho.N ko Peena
Aab-e-Hayaat Nahee Zeher Hai Koi
aisi zindagi maut se bhi badtar hoti hai. aadmi ko mushkilo.n ka saamnaa karna chahiye. aur khush rahne ka raasta talaashna chahiye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Samjhe The Phoolo.N Kee Sej Jise
Bichey Kaanto.N Ka Ghar Hai Koi
aisa dhoka ho jaata hai zindagi mein. per hataash hone ki zarurat nahin Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Ashk Bhala Fir Kaise Dikhte
Jab Mom Nahhee Patthar Hai Koi
waise pather dil mein bhi jazbaat hote hain per zara kam. aur baat baat pe ashq nahin bahaanaa chahiye isse iski ahmiyat kam ho jaati hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Begaane Sabhi,Kaun Hai Kiska
Badhaal Firta Dar Badar Hai Koi
nahin aisa nahin hai. aapas mein communication gap nahin rakho aur ek doosre ko samajhne ki koshish karo. love9
Manzilo.N Ka Kuch Thikaana Nahee
Khatm Na Hota Safar Hai Koi..
manzil ki talaash hai ya saathi ki pahle ye bataao mujhe. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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very good dolly...........!
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2012, 12:38:37 PM »
Waah ji waah sister.
Aapki ye composition kamal ki h.
Esliye hmari daad ko kabool farmaye...
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Thankuuu masooom...Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2012, 04:10:47 PM »
waaahhhhhhh
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2012, 06:09:19 PM »
bahut hi sunder rachna...haardik badhaaiyaan  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2012, 06:24:53 AM »
very good
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2012, 01:57:05 PM »
Bahut khoob Likha hai dolly jee
badhaaee ho.
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2012, 06:41:05 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dolly Ji..

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Thank uu khwahishjii...shukriya aapka...Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 04:30:06 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  waah Dolly ji waah.... bahut hi umda likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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