~^~^~KHIDMATGAAR~^~^~:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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Mari samaj main nahi aaya ye
post kis main jaayegi so plz
iss post ki jo sahi jageh ho
wanah isse moove ker dena.

Khidmatgaar hai Baadal KHUDA ka,ye illm tujhe na hoga,
Katal karne ka iraada tera, kabhi safal na hoga,

Jiya hu sirf sachai ke liye,ye jaan le aaj tu,
Ker le jo bhi sitam,honsla mera kam na hoga,

Sataniat chor ke apni,ek baar KHUDA ka naam le,
Rakh dil pe haath,fir sachai se tera saamna hoga,

Kaanp uttegi ruh tari,ek ajeeb sa dar hoga,
Fir tare har gunah ka, hisab kitab jarur hoga,

Waar kiye hai jitne bhi,pith piche tune,
Un waaro ka dard tujhe, mahsoos jarur hoga,

Maan ke mari baat,chor de gunah ka har rasta,
Tham le us KHUDA ka haath,jeewan jarur safal hoga,

Mat rang apne haath,kisi naadan ke khoon se,
Aaj samaj le nahi to,baad main pachtava hoga,

Khidmatgaar hai Baadal KHUDA ka,ye illm tujhe na hoga,
Katal karne ka iraada tera, kabhi safal nahi hoga............

if i do any mistake plz forgive me

Baadal


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k.shael

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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2008, 11:08:25 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA BAADAL JI,
(KISE SHARMINDA KAR RAHE HAI
BATAIYE HAME BHI TO ZARA...)

SACHAI SAMNE JAB AAYI TO DIL BHI
TOOT KE BIKHAR GAYA,
WO KYA BAYAN KAREGA TUJHSE JISKA SAB
KUCH EK PAL ME CHOOT GAYA...

BY. KRISHNA.SHALLY


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kaushikbhawna008

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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2008, 11:16:32 AM »

bohut khoob baadal ji


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honeyrose

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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2008, 12:03:04 PM »

Wah wonderful lines badal ji..


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baadal102

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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2008, 10:18:37 PM »

aap sabhi ka tahe dil se main sukargujar hu
jo aap ne mari in lines ko padha.
thanx a lot all of u.

shael ji hum aap ki baat samjhe nahi
aur humara irada kisi ko sharminda
karne ka kabhi nahi ho sakta.

Baadal


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bekarar

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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2008, 10:50:48 PM »

bahoot khoob baadal...bahoot khoob


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2008, 11:36:39 AM »

Ek achhi our pukhta tehreer Badal saheb....our ahsasoN se bharpoor ye kriti bahoot hi ssunder ban paayi hai....meri janib se...DhairoN daad qubool kareiN....

Bas Seond misre maoN "nahi hoga" ki jagah na hoga ker deiN toh rawanagi qayam reh sakti hai.....

Khush raheiN

Harash

Quote from: baadal102 on September 17, 2008, 10:28:19 PM

Mari samaj main nahi aaya ye
post kis main jaayegi so plz
iss post ki jo sahi jageh ho
wanah isse moove ker dena.

Khidmatgaar hai Baadal KHUDA ka,ye illm tujhe na hoga,
Katal karne ka iraada tera, kabhi safal nahi hoga,

Jiya hu sirf sachai ke liye,ye jaan le aaj tu,
Ker le jo bhi sitam,honsla mera kam na hoga,

Sataniat chor ke apni,ek baar KHUDA ka naam le,
Rakh dil pe haath,fir sachai se tera saamna hoga,

Kaanp uttegi ruh tari,ek ajeeb sa dar hoga,
Fir tare har gunah ka, hisab kitab jarur hoga,

Waar kiye hai jitne bhi,pith piche tune,
Un waaro ka dard tujhe, mahsoos jarur hoga,

Maan ke mari baat,chor de gunah ka har rasta,
Tham le us KHUDA ka haath,jeewan jarur safal hoga,

Mat rang apne haath,kisi naadan ke khoon se,
Aaj samaj le nahi to,baad main pachtava hoga,

Khidmatgaar hai Baadal KHUDA ka,ye illm tujhe na hoga,
Katal karne ka iraada tera, kabhi safal nahi hoga............

if i do any mistake plz forgive me

Baadal


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baadal102

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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2008, 12:23:28 PM »

thanx a lot bekarar ji
waise janab ko time kaise mil gaya
tongue3

Baadal


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baadal102

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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2008, 07:00:59 PM »

harsh ji thanx a lot
aur aap ne jo kaha use maine thik ker diya hai
thanx again

Baadal


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