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« on: September 06, 2005, 02:55:01 PM »

Adaab Dostoon
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kissi azeez ne humse pucha ke janab HumTum ...yeh sher o shayri .. yeh gazalein .. log kiss trah se likh lete hai ..... bas un janab ke sawaal pe kuch likh diya .... pesh e nazar hai !!

dard ka dil se guzar ho to ghazal hoti hai
Ishq mein gham ka asar ho to ghazal hoti hai

chaaho alfaaz ka jitna bhi sahaara le lo
sher mein khoon-e-jigar ho to ghazal hoti hai

mehz ulfat hi nahin kaafi tafakkur ke liye
sabhi jazbon pe nazar ho to ghazal hoti hai

aaj bhi qais ke taptey huey dasht-e-dil mein
kisi laila ka guzar ho to ghazal hoti hai

aaj bhi heer ki khaatir kisi jungle mein agar
raat raanjhey ki basar ho to ghazal hoti hai

jaan lo phir ke siyaahi ki zaroorat hi nahin
jo qalam khoon mein tar ho to ghazal hoti hai

kis ko maaloom hai gar mere sukhan mein unkey?
sheereen lehjey ka asar ho, to ghazal hoti hai;)

is zamaaney mein nahin koi kisi ka bhi "HumTum"
aisi baaton ki khabar ho to ghazal hoti hai !!!


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« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2005, 07:29:05 PM »

WAH wah HUMTUM ji aap ka jawab nahin ..bahut laajawab likhte hain aap Usual Smile

hamesha ki thara bahut khoob Usual Smile


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« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2005, 09:51:38 PM »

Wah humtum,bohat khoob Usual Smile

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Ye lines mujhe sabse zyada pasand aayin:-
"jaan lo phir ke siyaahi ki zaroorat hi nahin
jo qalam khoon mein tar ho to ghazal hoti hai ."

Very nice.


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« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2005, 10:24:37 PM »

very very beautifull Humtum............

kis ko maaloom hai gar mere sukhan mein unkey?
sheereen lehjey ka asar ho, to ghazal hoti hai;)

yeh lines sar ke uper se guzar gayi.....Time mile to explain plsssss.


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« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2005, 11:10:00 PM »

"aaj bhi heer ki khaatir kisi jungle mein agar
raat raanjhey ki basar ho to ghazal hoti hai

jaan lo phir ke siyaahi ki zaroorat hi nahin
jo qalam khoon mein tar ho to ghazal hoti hai "

wow these lines r the best......good one!!!!


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« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2005, 09:55:36 PM »

"chaaho alfaaz ka jitna bhi sahaara le lo
sher mein khoon-e-jigar ho to ghazal hoti hai

is zamaaney mein nahin koi kisi ka bhi "HumTum"
aisi baaton ki khabar ho to ghazal hoti hai !!! "

wah humtum jiyeh lines to ....bohot hi achi hai

kuch lafzo ko apne zakhmo ke khoon me duba kar,
pesh kiya hai apna dard ek ghazal bana kar!!


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« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2005, 10:19:49 PM »

bohot hi achhhhhhhhhhhheeee humtum, wonderful...u too Meena sis...


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« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2005, 06:06:58 PM »

Salma[/u]

Thanks very much buddy !!!

Nidhi[/u]

Shukriya ji ... aap ne kuch nhi likha sad5

Choti[/u]

Thanks a million !!!

kis ko maaloom hai gar mere sukhan mein unkey?
sheereen lehjey ka asar ho, to ghazal hoti hai;)

Matlab ..... yeh kissi ko nhi pta hai ke agar meri sukhan ( soch ) mein unke ( be-loved ) sheereen lahjey ( madhosh ker dene wali adaa ) ka asar ho to gazal hoti hai !!!

Isha[/u]

Shukriya ji

Sanya[/u]

Hunslaafzai ka Shukriya

Meena -JII[/u]

Shukriya Jahaanpnaah ...aur kya khoob likha hai .. kuch arz hai ....

humne to usko dil mein chupa ke rakha tha
aur woh tadpta rha uss qaid se rihaai ke liye
na samjho ke hai "HumTum" sataya zamane ka
woh to gazal kehta hai faqt waah waahi ke liye !!


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« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2005, 06:14:38 PM »

bahot khooob hum tumji...... fantastic job ..... good


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« Reply #9 on: September 08, 2005, 06:18:40 PM »

Thanks a million .. dear Stranger !!!

aap bhi acha likhti hai .. likha kijiye !!

yeh sher o shyri hum kya jane
kya jane gazal kya cheez hai
nakaam e ishq ke staye hai
bas dard hi mera azeez hai !!!


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« Reply #10 on: September 08, 2005, 06:23:19 PM »

shukriya Humtum janab n bahut khoob alll...!!! again gr88888 Humtum Janab Usual Smile


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« Reply #11 on: September 08, 2005, 06:31:01 PM »

aap bhi kuch likh dijiye !!!!

zamane mein kami kya hai nazaron ki
her su jannat hai humare dil ke siwa
mil jayenge hamdam nazar uthao to shi
woh kuch bhi nhi ek parchaai ke siwa !!


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« Reply #12 on: September 08, 2005, 07:56:45 PM »

wah ji wah bahut khoob Humtum n thanx haiga....mention not de naal...


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« Reply #13 on: September 08, 2005, 08:41:24 PM »

Wah yaar humtum, dil khush kar diya kasam se.....missed ur works all these days mannn!!!!

Few lines i will add to it,

Koi rehta ho din o raat tere yadon mein har pal,
Phir bhi khali lage bistar toh gazal hoti hai.

Haasil ho har ek seh jahan ki phir bhi,
Dil mein tanhai ka ho ghar toh ghazal hoti hai.

Wo nigahein jo dekhti ho bas mehboob ke sapne,
Phir bhi sooni ho wo nazar toh ghazal hoti hai.

Wada karke bhi na aaya jo mehboob e sitamgar,
Aankhen soyi na raat bhar toh ghazal hoti hai...


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« Reply #14 on: September 08, 2005, 10:37:35 PM »

very nice everyone aur humtum ji jawab bohot acha tha!

lafzo ke bich chupa gum ka saya hai,
apnaaya hai isse yeh kaha mere lyie paraya hai,
kya karti itne gum ka tu "Meena",
bas thosa sa hi apni ghazal me sajaya hai!


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