Khud Ko Kabhi Jeete, Kabhi Marte Dekha Hamne

by deepika_divya on April 25, 2009, 03:52:16 PM
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deepika_divya
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Bada ajab khel tamasa dekha humne,
pyar ko Apno ko haatho khota dekha hamne !!
Kya kahe na raha ab ehtbaar ab kisi pe,
Khud ke hi khwabo roz marte dekha hamne !!

Beech bazar me loot gaya tha mera pyar,
Hamare ansoon ko hi kuchalte dekha hamne !!
Di thi jo khushi hame apno ne kabhi,
Unhi k haatho uski bali chadte dekha hamne !!

Aaj bhi jab peeche mud kar dekhti hun,
yaad aaye jab khud k armono ko seecha hamne !!
Ghut ghut kar guzaari thi zindagi tab,
Khud ko kabhi jeete kabhi marte dekha hamne !!

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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2009, 04:09:41 PM »
Bohat khoob Sophi...
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2009, 04:22:08 PM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai DIVYA.. Par Itna Dard Kyunnnnnnnn........? icon_scratch icon_scratch

Par Kuch Bhi hai. Lajawab Likha hai Dear.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya hai..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2009, 04:25:17 PM »
Waah Sophi, Laajwab.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2009, 05:03:53 AM »


   BAHAUT ACHCHEY....BAHUT PYAARAA KALAAM LIKHAA HAI .... SOPHI AAPNEY
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 08:39:13 AM »
Bohat khoob Sophi...

Thank u sajid Ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 08:41:42 AM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai DIVYA.. Par Itna Dard Kyunnnnnnnn........? icon_scratch icon_scratch

Par Kuch Bhi hai. Lajawab Likha hai Dear.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya hai..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thank u so much Vikas. 

Dard ko mere Dard ka naam na do,
Yea Uski mohabbat ka tofa hai yaar !!
Jo basta hai meri sanson mea har pal,
Jisse main kabhi kiya tha sacha pyar !!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 08:42:26 AM »
Waah Sophi, Laajwab.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thank U Sarvesh ji. Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2009, 08:45:56 AM »

   BAHAUT ACHCHEY....BAHUT PYAARAA KALAAM LIKHAA HAI .... SOPHI AAPNEY

Thank u So much Khamosh Ji.
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junaidqadir
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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2009, 08:46:58 AM »
Sophi ji Badi sanjeeda peshkas hai apki matle ko samajh ke pada jaye to shauda doobte hi jayenge , ahesason ko alfazon ka roop itni khubsurati si diya hai apne ke dad barhaq aur lazim hai ,, dil se dad qubool karen apki thread me khuch likhne ki gustaqi karenge waqat ki qillath ne baandh rakha hai,,allah hafizath kare kalam ki khush -o- khurram rahen...

JQ
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2009, 08:50:01 AM »
bahoot bahoot sukriya Qadir ji.
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #11 on: April 26, 2009, 09:09:40 AM »
Thank u so much Vikas. 

Dard ko mere Dard ka naam na do,
Yea Uski mohabbat ka tofa hai yaar !!
Jo basta hai meri sanson mea har pal,
Jisse main kabhi kiya tha sacha pyar !!

Bahut accha Likha hai DIVYA.. Bahut Khoob.!!

Yeh Dard Nahi Chahat Hai Teri,
Dharkano Ki Ibaadat Hai Teri....

Mil Jane Ka Naam Hi Pyaar Nahi,
Jo Tune Khoya, Wahi Mohabbat Hai Teri..!!


**~** Mann **~**
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2009, 09:24:28 AM »
Nice one Sophi Ji
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #13 on: April 26, 2009, 09:32:45 AM »
Wow sophi .... kyaaa likha hai yaar tumne...tooo goooood Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2009, 09:36:41 AM »
Bahut accha Likha hai DIVYA.. Bahut Khoob.!!

Yeh Dard Nahi Chahat Hai Teri,
Dharkano Ki Ibaadat Hai Teri....

Mil Jane Ka Naam Hi Pyaar Nahi,
Jo Tune Khoya, Wahi Mohabbat Hai Teri..!!


**~** Mann **~**


Thank u so much Vikas..

bahoot khoob likha hai Vikas tumne bhi..
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