Khuda ho gaya.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on April 11, 2009, 12:58:03 PM
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Auro ki tarah vo bhi bevafa ho gaya
Aye aasoo tu bhi aakho se juda ho gaya

Sunta nahi hain meri, na ab deta hain dikhayee
Mehboob mere mano, ab khuda ho gaya

Vo jab tak raha ghar me, tha bohat salike se
Jab duniya me hua shamil, behuda ho gaya

Tu itna gira insaa.N, ke girtaa chala gaya
Teri halet pe ab shaitaan bhi, sharminda ho gaya

Makh_tal* par kati jab, kisi haq_parast** ki gardan
Murda pade logho ka, dil zinda ho gaya

Jam me duboya khudko, har waqt rahi madhoshi
GHAYEL aadmi bhala hain, khoon magar ganda ho gaya

-Sajid Ghayel-


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** Worshipper of Truth
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 01:04:55 PM »
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Beautiful Ghazal Sajid_Ghayel Ji...

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 01:58:59 PM »
Auro ki tarah vo bhi bevafa ho gaya
Aye aasoo tu bhi aakho se juda ho gaya

Sunta nahi hain meri, na ab deta hain dikhayee
Mehboob mere mano, ab khuda ho gaya

Vo jab tak raha ghar me, tha bohat salike se
Jab duniya me hua shamil, behuda ho gaya

Tu itna gira insaa.N, ke girtaa chala gaya
Teri halet pe ab shaitaan bhi, sharminda ho gaya

Makh_tal* par kati jab, kisi haq_parast** ki gardan
Murda pade logho ka, dil zinda ho gaya

Jam me duboya khudko, har waqt rahi madhoshi
GHAYEL aadmi bhala hain, khoon magar ganda ho gaya

-Sajid Ghayel-

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** Worshipper of Truth

sajid bhai ek behtareen aur nayaab peshkash kise kehte hain yeh aapko pad kar maloom hota hai


meri maut par  aana toh yoon jhoomte huye
kii shehar-e- khamosha main ho mehfil saji huyi
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 07:53:35 PM »
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Beautiful Ghazal Sajid_Ghayel Ji...

Shally.

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Shally jo tumne apna waqt diya....
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 09:08:18 PM »
Bahut khoob

Ghayal sb Maqta kia sach aur khoob kaha hai aapne


Dad qubool ho




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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2009, 11:56:29 AM »
sajid bhai ek behtareen aur nayaab peshkash kise kehte hain yeh aapko pad kar maloom hota hai

meri maut par  aana toh yoon jhoomte huye
kii shehar-e- khamosha main ho mehfil saji huyi

Bohat bohat shukriyaan salil itni kam dad dekhkar waise dil mayus to bohat hua tha, par tumhari bato ne phir se hausla diya hain. Bohat bohat shukriyaan mere dost apni is tareef aur pyaare sher ke liye....jab tak tum jaise kadardaan hain hum jasie mamuli shayro ki bhi zindagi hain.....
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2009, 11:57:49 AM »
Bahut khoob

Ghayal sb Maqta kia sach aur khoob kaha hai aapne


Dad qubool ho


javed

Javed bhai aapne mera kalam padha kya yeh kam badi baat hain mere liye, aapse tareef pana to mere liye Bonus hain.....bohat bohat shukriyaa
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2009, 12:42:23 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Sajidbhai..Har Ek Sher La ajawab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2009, 11:52:21 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Sajidbhai..Har Ek Sher La ajawab!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Khwaish jo tumne mere kalam ko waqt diya....
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 12:13:36 PM »
bahoot khoob Sajid Ji. keep writing....
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2009, 12:39:01 PM »
Auro ki tarah vo bhi bevafa ho gaya
Aye aasoo tu bhi aakho se juda ho gaya

Sunta nahi hain meri, na ab deta hain dikhayee
Mehboob mere mano, ab khuda ho gaya

Vo jab tak raha ghar me, tha bohat salike se
Jab duniya me hua shamil, behuda ho gaya

Tu itna gira insaa.N, ke girtaa chala gaya
Teri halet pe ab shaitaan bhi, sharminda ho gaya

Makh_tal* par kati jab, kisi haq_parast** ki gardan
Murda pade logho ka, dil zinda ho gaya

Jam me duboya khudko, har waqt rahi madhoshi
GHAYEL aadmi bhala hain, khoon magar ganda ho gaya

-Sajid Ghayel-

* Place where Guilty are beheaded.

** Worshipper of Truth



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bahoot hi sadhe aur nape-tule andaaz me kahi aapki har ghazal ka effect masha-alaah hota hai......humesha ki tarah ......
daad kabul karen
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2009, 12:43:02 PM »
bahoot khoob Sajid Ji. keep writing....

Aapne "keep writing" kaha hain to aapki baat manni hi padegi.....thank you so much for your time and comments.
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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2009, 09:45:34 PM »

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bahoot hi sadhe aur nape-tule andaaz me kahi aapki har ghazal ka effect masha-alaah hota hai......humesha ki tarah ......
daad kabul karen

Thank You mere yaar bas isi tarah sachche dil se dad dete rehna aur kabhi kahi galti ho jaye to woh bhi bata dena....
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