<>*Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga*<>

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«Reply #15 on: January 18, 2011, 07:24:22 AM »
Mast poem Anu-di..... icon_king icon_queen.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jo jaanta hai sab kuchh aur
Jis Khuda ki he hai ye leela

Uss Khuda ko kya bataana hogaa tera naam
Hai himmat tou bataa jamaane ko daastan apni
mast likha hai guudo tune...yunhi likhti rehna pasand karti rehna
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«Reply #16 on: February 18, 2013, 10:00:48 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. jaane ye poem mujhse miss kaise ho gayi... bahut bahut khoob....!!!


saath jeene kaa waadaa kiyaa kabhi, aaj mar jaane ki baat karte ho
tinkaa tinkaa jodaa mujhe, aaj tut ke bikhar jaane ki baat karte ho

kashti zindagi meri tumhe saahil samajhne lagi hai jaane kabse
majdhaar ke aake tum kyun meraa saath chhod jaane ki baat karte ho

tum to jaante ho kitnaa dartaa hoon main parwaton ki unchaai se
fir kyun shikhar tak saath deke haath chhod jaane ki baat karte ho

main akelaa achchaa thaa, jee rahaa thaa apne andaaz me kabse
ab tum andaaz badalke mujhe mujhme laut jaane ki baat karte ho

kyaa main koi khilaunaa hoon, jisse ab mann bhar gayaa tumhaaraa
kyun kuch pal mujhse dil behlaake ab duur jaane ki baat karte ho

main tumse judaa ho ke ab to naa jee paaungaa, naa mar paaungaa
chhin ke har khushi meraa tum mujhse muskuraane ki baat karte ho

yeh kaisi mohabbat hai tumhaari jo haar gayi zamaane ke dar se
mujhe jeet ke itne kabeeb laake ab haar jaane ki baat karte ho


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«Reply #17 on: February 18, 2013, 10:04:08 PM »
Wow kya kahena Kapil ji ,khoobsurat andaaz ,heart touching creation.superb. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:hats off to you.
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«Reply #18 on: February 20, 2013, 06:35:04 PM »
kp..mastam mast reply hai yaar
ek sath itne dhamake  kiye hain kya padhun kya chhodun .....
miss being here on yo wid all u guys....

nazar aaun na aaun tere sath hun main
tu jab chahe thaam hath tere sath hun main

kyun akelepan se tu iss tarah haar gaya saathi
ek bar dil me jhank tere hi sath hun main

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«Reply #19 on: February 20, 2013, 07:43:56 PM »
thank u soooooo much for coming back again...!!!


saath ho mere magar mere saath hone kaa ehsaas to ho
kuch karo aisaa lagne lage firse mujhe tum paas to ho

jaante ho ki tum bin ek pal bhi guzaarnaa mushkil hai
tum hi ho mere liye sab, tum hi mere liye khaas to ho
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«Reply #20 on: February 26, 2013, 06:06:47 PM »
kya baat hai waahhhh bht mast likha hai re
and i knoww true bhi hai

main khas tun tere liye janti hun main
ehsaas hun terea ye bhi manti hun main

kya karun ke majbur hun apni majburi se
paas nahin reh sakti tere janti hun main
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«Reply #21 on: February 27, 2013, 12:03:55 AM »
true to hai hi... koi doubt hai kyaa aapko?Huh?
aapne bhi khoob jawaab likha hai  Usual Smile


yeh kaisi bandish hai ki hum ho ke bhi tumhaare ho nahi sakte
ronaa chaahte hain hum, magar apne palkon ko bhigo nahi sakte

kyun lagaa ye rog mohabbat kaa, agar lagaa bhi to ye judaai kyun
majboori dekho kaisi hai, hum tumhe paa nahi sakte, kho nahi sakte...
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