<>*Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga*<>

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<>*Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga*<>


Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga
Jab arthi saji ho meri tumhe hi aag lagana hoga

Har haal me nibha dena waada tum wafa ka sanam
Tuta jo tera wada ,hume khud ko mitana hoga

Har shakhs mujhe ab tere hi naam se janta hai
Tu nahin to fir mujhe benaam hi jeena hoga

Har bar maut k nam se hi darti rahi hun main
Teri judai jo hogi mera maut se saamna hoga

Haste hain to hasne de, kya gam hai zamane ka
Kal hamari yaad me inho bhi ashk bahana hoga

Bhul  jaa k teri maut pe aansu bahaungi main
Mere jaane k baad hi tera uss jahaan me aana hoga…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2011, 12:40:55 PM »
ufffffffffffff

anamika ji....ek baat bataiye....aap kese itni jaldi aur itne sundar reply bana leti he..........its mind blowingji.....specially last one.........awsome
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2011, 12:54:14 PM »
aapke liye replies banane nahin padte hain ji...yun knw it comes automatically....

aapki shayri ka jadu humse kuch bhi likhwa sakta hai..
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2011, 01:03:32 PM »
baap re Dang rah gaye hum.
kamaal ka likha ji ekdum jhakashhhh hai.
behad umda aur gahri mohabbat ke alfaz hain K Mam
""
na kar baaten judai aur maut ki
   kisi aur hi tarike se tujhe--
meri wafaon ko aazmaana hoga

sunenge log hasenge mere bhole sanam
  harek ki labon par fir harsu--
humari hi mohabbat ka afsaana hoga
"
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 04:26:51 PM »
<>*Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga*<>


Khuda ko tumhe mera naam batana hoga
Jab arthi saji ho meri tumhe hi aag lagana hoga

Har haal me nibha dena waada tum wafa ka sanam
Tuta jo tera wada ,hume khud ko mitana hoga

Har shakhs mujhe ab tere hi naam se janta hai
Tu nahin to fir mujhe benaam hi jeena hoga

Har bar maut k nam se hi darti rahi hun main
Teri judai jo hogi mera maut se saamna hoga

Haste hain to hasne de, kya gam hai zamane ka
Kal hamari yaad me inho bhi ashk bahana hoga

Bhul  jaa k teri maut pe aansu bahaungi main
Mere jaane k baad hi tera uss jahaan me aana hoga…!!!

Hmm...nice...
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 06:28:48 PM »
Kasak Jee Aadaab!

I don't know ke kia kaheN coz..
aise ahsaas hume chup rahne pe majboor
kar dete hai...

Aapke is likhe par daad .....
Likhati rahiye.....

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         



Kuch aik yaadoN ka tujhko karwaaN dekar
Kho jauNga zameeN meiN tujhe aasmaN dekar

Mujhko bhi bhul jaoNge tum rafta rafta
YouN Naa bhulaane ki kasam e wafaa dekar         


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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 06:56:28 PM »
bahoo khoob likha kDK ji aur Parwaaz ji ki char lines bhi behad prbhav-shali rahin....aap dono ko dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2011, 10:59:46 PM »
Bahaut khoob Anamika di aur Parwaaz jee..
Dono ne bahaut sunder likha hai..
Anamika di last line toh ek satya bayan kar gayi..
Kay tujhe ana hoga..
Khoob..
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 06:16:35 AM »
bahut khub kasakji...

 Applause Applause Applause

khush rahen..
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 12:56:13 PM »
Bahut Khub Kasak Ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 06:19:08 AM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai Anamika Ji.. Pahala Hi Sher Bahut Khubsoorati liye hue Hai.. Bahut Bahut Pyaari rachna Likhi hai aapne.. Dard aur Mohabbat Dono Hi Nazar aaye aapke Likhe Alfaazon me.. Applause Applause

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2011, 07:04:18 AM »
Mast poem Anu-di..... icon_king icon_queen.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jo jaanta hai sab kuchh aur
Jis Khuda ki he hai ye leela

Uss Khuda ko kya bataana hogaa tera naam
Hai himmat tou bataa jamaane ko daastan apni
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2011, 07:18:05 AM »
baap re Dang rah gaye hum.
kamaal ka likha ji ekdum jhakashhhh hai.
behad umda aur gahri mohabbat ke alfaz hain K Mam
""
na kar baaten judai aur maut ki
   kisi aur hi tarike se tujhe--
meri wafaon ko aazmaana hoga

sunenge log hasenge mere bhole sanam
  harek ki labon par fir harsu--
humari hi mohabbat ka afsaana hoga
"
thanx
"

thnx nirala mastana ji ...aapne pasand kiya isko
aapke sher bht acche hain ji ...
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2011, 07:18:32 AM »
Hmm...nice...
thnx geet
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2011, 07:23:35 AM »
bahoo khoob likha kDK ji aur Parwaaz ji ki char lines bhi behad prbhav-shali rahin....aap dono ko dheron daad

bht bht shukriya bekaraar ji aapne meri koshish ko padha aur saraha..yunhi hausla badhate rahiye

Bahaut khoob Anamika di aur Parwaaz jee..
Dono ne bahaut sunder likha hai..
Anamika di last line toh ek satya bayan kar gayi..
Kay tujhe ana hoga..
Khoob..
Applause Applause Applause
thnx rahim bhai..pasand karne aur taaliyon ka....yunhi sath dete rehna bhai...

bahut khub kasakji...

 Applause Applause Applause

khush rahen..

thnx manjum ji k aapne pasand kiya meri koshish ko...

Bahut Khub Kasak Ji

thnx rishi ji

Wah Kya Baat Hai Anamika Ji.. Pahala Hi Sher Bahut Khubsoorati liye hue Hai.. Bahut Bahut Pyaari rachna Likhi hai aapne.. Dard aur Mohabbat Dono Hi Nazar aaye aapke Likhe Alfaazon me.. Applause Applause

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**

bht shukriya mann ji k aapne pasand kiya aur saraha meri koshihs ko..yunhi hausla badhate rahiyega..
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