<>*Khudse chhup chhupkar*<>

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<>*Khudse chhup chhupkar*<>

Aankhen rahi num par lub muskurate rahe
Tere liye saajan hum har pal gungunate rahe

Lakeerein aansunon ki ban gai jab hamare chehre par
Hum ye chehra ghunghat me tab chhupate rahe

Kuch haseen lamhon ki yadon me jikar
Hum har pal maut se daaman bachate rahe

Apno k bich rehte rahe ajnabee se
Ajnabeeyon ko har pal apna bnate rahe

Natkhat shaitaan muskurahut bikher apne chehre par
Hum khudko hi khud se chhupate rahe

Bheege takiye ko jab dekha aadhi nind me jaagkar
Tab jaana k khudse chhup chhupkar hum kitne ashk bahate rahe.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2010, 01:20:27 PM »
<>*Khudse chhup chhupkar*<>

Aankhen rahi num par lub muskurate rahe
Tere liye saajan hum har pal gungunate rahe

Lakeerein aansunon ki ban gai jab hamare chehre par
Hum ye chehra ghunghat me tab chhupate rahe

Kuch haseen lamhon ki yadon me jikar
Hum har pal maut se daaman bachate rahe

Apno k bich rehte rahe ajnabee se
Ajnabeeyon ko har pal apna bnate rahe

Natkhat shaitaan muskurahut bikher apne chehre par
Hum khudko hi khud se chhupate rahe

Bheege takiye ko jab dekha aadhi nind me jaagkar
Tab jaana k khudse chhup chhupkar hum kitne ashk bahate rahe.........
hammmmmmmmm
kasam se kasak ji
bahut khub likha hai aapne
tarif ke shabd nahi hai

magar jawab hazir hai

na chupo khud se jyada meri bahon me sama jao
roko aansuon ko apne is gam ko kahin baha jao
mai tumhara tha tumhara hu rahunga tumhara sada
aao mere pyaar ki barish me naha jao

nahi hai koi bhi ab gair is mohhabbat ki duniya me
bant lo khushi sab se sab ko apna bana jao

raho na ajnabi ban kar yahan apno ke bich me
laga lo gale sabko aur dil me sama jao

na bikhrao jhoti muskurahat ko is cherey par
chura lo chand ki hansi use cherey par saja jao
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2010, 01:25:20 PM »
mindblowing n awesome creation anamika..... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  icon_thumleft
aese hi likhte rehna.......kisi ki yaado me or judai me kya halat hoti usse bakhubi labjo me
dhala he aapne....
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2010, 01:32:48 PM »
wah wah kasak ji and rahi ji.. bahut bahut bahut khoob

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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2010, 01:42:06 PM »
hammmmmmmmm
kasam se kasak ji
bahut khub likha hai aapne
tarif ke shabd nahi hai

magar jawab hazir hai

na chupo khud se jyada meri bahon me sama jao
roko aansuon ko apne is gam ko kahin baha jao
mai tumhara tha tumhara hu rahunga tumhara sada
aao mere pyaar ki barish me naha jao

nahi hai koi bhi ab gair is mohhabbat ki duniya me
bant lo khushi sab se sab ko apna bana jao

raho na ajnabi ban kar yahan apno ke bich me
laga lo gale sabko aur dil me sama jao

na bikhrao jhoti muskurahat ko is cherey par
chura lo chand ki hansi use cherey par saja jao

khubsurat bht hi umda jawab raahi ji....dil khush kar dida ji ....
maza aagaya aapke reply padh k
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2010, 03:24:29 PM »
Wah wah wah kya chhupa-chhupee ka khel ho raha hai...kasak-di...wonderful poem..... Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khud se chhupa ke churaliye they kuchh lamhe
Na hosh me na madhosh,wo pal bas they thamhe

Unke intezaar main hum subaah se they khade
Wo aayenge ya nahi,Dil aur demaag dono lade

Sakhee Dil ko tou un par poora eyatbaar tha
Par ye kambakht deemaag kuchh aur kehta tha


<>*Khudse chhup chhupkar*<>

Aankhen rahi num par lub muskurate rahe
Tere liye saajan hum har pal gungunate rahe

Lakeerein aansunon ki ban gai jab hamare chehre par
Hum ye chehra ghunghat me tab chhupate rahe

Kuch haseen lamhon ki yadon me jikar
Hum har pal maut se daaman bachate rahe

Apno k bich rehte rahe ajnabee se
Ajnabeeyon ko har pal apna bnate rahe

Natkhat shaitaan muskurahut bikher apne chehre par
Hum khudko hi khud se chhupate rahe

Bheege takiye ko jab dekha aadhi nind me jaagkar
Tab jaana k khudse chhup chhupkar hum kitne ashk bahate rahe.........
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2010, 04:16:19 PM »

Bahut khoob kasak ji....
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2010, 04:48:57 PM »
bht khubb kaha hai koyal behna tumne....lekinkuch advice hamari bhi lelo...

dimag ki na sun sirf dil ki sun sakhee
dimag ka kaam to rishte bigadna hai

ye dil hi hai jo sahi galat samjhata hai
yehi to kachche dhaage ko majboot bandhan banata hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2010, 07:54:38 PM »
<>*Khudse chhup chhupkar*<>

Aankhen rahi num par lub muskurate rahe
Tere liye saajan hum har pal gungunate rahe

Lakeerein aansunon ki ban gai jab hamare chehre par
Hum ye chehra ghunghat me tab chhupate rahe

Kuch haseen lamhon ki yadon me jikar
Hum har pal maut se daaman bachate rahe

Apno k bich rehte rahe ajnabee se
Ajnabeeyon ko har pal apna bnate rahe

Natkhat shaitaan muskurahut bikher apne chehre par
Hum khudko hi khud se chhupate rahe

Bheege takiye ko jab dekha aadhi nind me jaagkar
Tab jaana k khudse chhup chhupkar hum kitne ashk bahate rahe.........

Kya Kahoon Sivae Iske, Ke Aapka Koi jawaab nahi,Aap bahut Asaani Se Jazbaaton ko lafzon mein Utaar Lete Ho..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2010, 08:41:37 PM »
<>*Khudse chhup chhupkar*<>

Aankhen rahi num par lub muskurate rahe
Tere liye saajan hum har pal gungunate rahe

Lakeerein aansunon ki ban gai jab hamare chehre par
Hum ye chehra ghunghat me tab chhupate rahe

Kuch haseen lamhon ki yadon me jikar
Hum har pal maut se daaman bachate rahe

Apno k bich rehte rahe ajnabee se
Ajnabeeyon ko har pal apna bnate rahe

Natkhat shaitaan muskurahut bikher apne chehre par
Hum khudko hi khud se chhupate rahe

Bheege takiye ko jab dekha aadhi nind me jaagkar
Tab jaana k khudse chhup chhupkar hum kitne ashk bahate rahe.........

Aansuo Se Uchal kar bahaar Aao Naa...
Dil Ke pathar Ko pighaal kar Bahaar Aao Naa..

Dard Ka Aks Liye Dil mein Kab Tak Phirte Rahoge!!!
Kabhi Dard Ke Aaene Se bhi Nikal kar bahaar Aao Naa..

Dekho Aaj Tumhe Koi Apna Bulaa Raha Hai!!!
Sab Baaton ko bhoolakar bahaar Aao Naa...

Kehne Ko Har Rishta Aziz Hai iss Jahaan mein!!!
Par Kuch Naye Rishto ko Sawaar kar Bahaar Aao Naa....

Paani mein Rehkar Tadap Ko Kaise Samjhegi Ek machli,
Tadap Ko Samajhne Ke Liye Kabhi Paani Se Nikalkar Bahaar Aao Naa...

Khud Ko Khud Se chupaakar Kya Haasil!!!
Kabhi Yuhi Dil Ko Apne Behlaakar Bahaar Aao Naa...

"Khwaish" Sirf Ek Ajnabi Hai Tere Liye!!!
Par Iss Ajnabi Ko Kabhi Apna Samajhkar Bahaar Aao Naa...
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2010, 08:49:26 PM »
aahaaaaaaaa.......kya kaha hai khwaish ji aapne.....dil ko chhu gai aapki last line.... icon_flower Applause icon_flower Applause

iska reply jarur dungi..wait ji wait..... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2010, 08:55:20 PM »
aahaaaaaaaa.......kya kaha hai khwaish ji aapne.....dil ko chhu gai aapki last line.... icon_flower Applause icon_flower Applause

iska reply jarur dungi..wait ji wait..... Clapping Smiley


Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much For Appreciating!!!

Aapke Jawaab ka Intezaar Zaroor Rahega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: July 26, 2010, 10:46:38 PM »
Aansuo Se Uchal kar bahaar Aao Naa...
Dil Ke pathar Ko pighaal kar Bahaar Aao Naa..

Dard Ka Aks Liye Dil mein Kab Tak Phirte Rahoge!!!
Kabhi Dard Ke Aaene Se bhi Nikal kar bahaar Aao Naa..

Dekho Aaj Tumhe Koi Apna Bulaa Raha Hai!!!
Sab Baaton ko bhoolakar bahaar Aao Naa...

Kehne Ko Har Rishta Aziz Hai iss Jahaan mein!!!
Par Kuch Naye Rishto ko Sawaar kar Bahaar Aao Naa....

Paani mein Rehkar Tadap Ko Kaise Samjhegi Ek machli,
Tadap Ko Samajhne Ke Liye Kabhi Paani Se Nikalkar Bahaar Aao Naa...

Khud Ko Khud Se chupaakar Kya Haasil!!!
Kabhi Yuhi Dil Ko Apne Behlaakar Bahaar Aao Naa...

"Khwaish" Sirf Ek Ajnabi Hai Tere Liye!!!
Par Iss Ajnabi Ko Kabhi Apna Samajhkar Bahaar Aao Naa...

AAJ TUMNE JO DOSTI KA HATH BADHAYA
EK HUMRAAZ EK DOST NAYA PAAYA

BAITHKAR PAS TUMHARE KUCH GUFTAGU KI
DIL K BOJH KO KUCH KUCH HALKA PAYA

KEHNE KO BHT HAIN KAREEB MERE EE DOST
LEKIN TERE SATH ME EK ALAG APNAPAN PAYA

KHUDKO BHULAKAR JEE RAHI THI MAIN ISS JAHAN ME
AAJ SATH TERE REHKAR KHUDKO FIR EK NAYE RUUP ME PAYA...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2010, 05:56:25 AM »
.........sach kahun ko kuch pal ke liye main ruk sa gaya apki is kavita ko padh ke... jis dard ke baare me aapne likha hai use dil hi dil mehsoos kiya maine... chhoo gayi mere dil ki gehraaiyon ko aapki ye dard bhari daastaan... bahut bahut dard hai aapke in alfaazon me... bahut khoobsurti se aapne us dard ko shabdon ke maala me piroya hai... bahut sundar kavita likhi hai apne Kasak ji.. bahut khoob...!!!

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«Reply #14 on: July 27, 2010, 09:59:21 AM »
shukriya KLASKAR JI k aapne itne pyaar se ise padha aur mehsuss kiya..
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