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Baitha hua uss pedh ke neeche..
Pehne kapde purane phate hue..!!
Ghar aaja nai bulane waala koi..
Aas phir bhi kahi.n hai man mei..!!
Koi pher do haath mere bhi sar pe..
Khwahish jis ehsaas ki dua banke..!!
Dikhte log roz aate jaate..
Phir bhi na aaya koi apnaane..!!
Bhukh lagi hai paane ki pyaar..
Khane ki phikr hi kaha.n hai..!!
Baitha hua uss pedh ke neeche..
Pehne kapde purane phate hue..!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2013, 09:56:01 PM » |
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Baitha hua uss pedh ke neeche..
Pehne kapde purane phate hue..!!
Ghar aaja nai bulane waala koi..
Aas phir bhi kahi.n hai man mei..!!
Koi pher do haath mere bhi sar pe..
Khwahish jis ehsaas ki dua banke..!!
Dikhte log roz aate jaate..
Phir bhi na aaya koi apnaane..!!
Bhukh lagi hai paane ki pyaar..
Khane ki phikr hi kaha.n hai..!!
Baitha hua uss pedh ke neeche..
Pehne kapde purane phate hue..!!
buhat khoob... alfaz ka chunao k takhayul ka saath den... buhat mushkil sa hota hay... aap ne achha nibhaya... gham-e-dauraaN k fasaanay kehnay walay log kam hen.. hope k aap ki kavish rang layay ge... |
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2013, 09:56:45 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2013, 10:00:02 PM » |
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buhat khoob... alfaz ka chunao k takhayul ka saath den... buhat mushkil sa hota hay... aap ne achha nibhaya... gham-e-dauraaN k fasaanay kehnay walay log kam hen.. hope k aap ki kavish rang layay ge...
Bahut dhanyawaad aapka!! |
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2013, 10:00:59 PM » |
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Baitha hua uss pedh ke neeche..
Pehne kapde purane phate hue..!!
Ghar aaja nai bulane waala koi..
Aas phir bhi kahi.n hai man mei..!!
Koi pher do haath mere bhi sar pe..
Khwahish jis ehsaas ki dua banke..!!
Dikhte log roz aate jaate..
Phir bhi na aaya koi apnaane..!!
Bhukh lagi hai paane ki pyaar..
Khane ki phikr hi kaha.n hai..!!
Baitha hua uss pedh ke neeche..
Pehne kapde purane phate hue..!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2013, 10:02:27 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2013, 10:14:20 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2013, 10:32:54 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2013, 10:34:45 PM » |
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Sahal bhai aapka phir se shukriya. |
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2013, 11:13:36 PM » |
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ehsaas khoob rhe
daad daad
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2013, 11:47:47 PM » |
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 thank you
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«Reply #14 on: November 26, 2013, 11:48:30 PM » |
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ehsaas khoob rhe
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Dhanyawaad aapko!! |
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