kis nay

by chitralsony on March 04, 2009, 08:30:47 PM
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may nay jo chand ek khowab daikhay thay
onhay ankhon say yun noch liya kis nay
sang mujay titlion kay chalna tha wohan
janay rahain wo yun ojaar din kis nay
jin hathon ko phol chunnay ki adat thi
on may lashon ko pakra diya kis nay
humko to muhabat bantnay ki adat thi
dilon ko nafrat say bhr diya kis nay
kis nay  dhoka diya rehnuma bankay hamay
lakay sahil pay hum ko dabo diya kis nay



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smardia
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2009, 08:42:10 PM »
nice lines Taibaji.....
YE TOU IS DUNIYA KI FITRAT HAI....
may nay jo chand ek khowab daikhay thay
onhay ankhon say yun noch liya kis nay
sang mujay titlion kay chalna tha wohan
janay rahain wo yun ojaar din kis nay
jin hathon ko phol chunnay ki adat thi
on may lashon ko pakra diya kis nay
humko to muhabat bantnay ki adat thi
dilon ko nafrat say bhr diya kis nay
kis nay  dhoka diya rehnuma bankay hamay
lakay sahil pay hum ko dabo diya kis nay




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chitralsony
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2009, 08:54:09 PM »
nice lines Taibaji.....
YE TOU IS DUNIYA KI FITRAT HAI....
thank u
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chitralsony
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 04:41:52 AM »


acha likha hai aapne Chitral ji,nice one dear


vo chaand jo khwaab me aata hai
vo na tera na mera na chandni ka hota hai

titliyun ka jhund vohi hai fasl-e-bahaar ka
jo ujad nahi sakta jise koi ujaad nahi sakta hai

koi kisi ko kuch na deta hai na leta hai mere dost
fariyaadi to laashon par bhi fariyaad kar nahi sakta hai



apnay dais kay halaat daikh kay bhot drd hota hay kaash ji ,masoom bachoon ko lashon kay gird sawaliya nishaan banay daikhtay hain to apna bachpan ankhon may ajata hay jub titlion kay pechay bagnay ko hi hum zindagi samajtay thay ,jahan aman tha khoshiyan thin aur ab apnay bachon ka yay hal daikhtay haintu drd tu hota hay na
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chitralsony
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 05:55:17 AM »
Han ye lazimi hai n for those who write ye sab manzar aur painful hain coz they feel emotions n write,well we can hope things will b better..aapke yahan aman hoga,sab theek hoga,par paresha hona to koi soln nahi,we can only pray in such conditions..God is great
yah kaash ji osi zaat ka hi asraa hay
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 10:41:05 AM »
Bohot achcha aur bohot sachcha likha hai Taiba Sis and Kaash Ji
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chitralsony
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2009, 02:34:41 AM »
Bohpt achcha aur bohpt sachcha likha hai Taiba Sis and Kaash Ji
thank u so much behna
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