Kis se kahen...

by vimmi singh on March 20, 2013, 09:43:42 PM
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Dard jo iisme hai
Kis se kahen
Panno  Par likhe the
Hawa me ud gaye
Halke se chhalke ye
Naino se taPke ye
Dil me dhadke hai
Raston me bhatke hai
Auron se chhuPke
Aaye mile mujhse
Aaye milne mujhse

Registaan ke zameen Par
Thodi dhool ret Par
Dhundhti hun wo nishaaniyan
Naa rahe jo ab naa rahe
Kho gaye sab kahi kho gaye
Jo aate the khwaabon me
Jo baste the nindon me
Jo chalte the sang mere
Ab halke se chhalke ye
Naino se taPke ye
Panno  Par likhe the
Hawa me ud gaye
Dard jo iisme hai
Kis se kahen..kis se kahen...!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2013, 10:36:10 PM »
Bahut khoob vimmi ji. dheron daad.
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2013, 11:42:08 PM »
Dard jo iisme hai
Kis se kahen
Panno  Par likhe the
Hawa me ud gaye
Halke se chhalke ye
Naino se taPke ye
Dil me dhadke hai
Raston me bhatke hai
Auron se chhuPke
Aaye mile mujhse
Aaye milne mujhse

Registaan ke zameen Par
Thodi dhool ret Par
Dhundhti hun wo nishaaniyan
Naa rahe jo ab naa rahe
Kho gaye sab kahi kho gaye
Jo aate the khwaabon me
Jo baste the nindon me
Jo chalte the sang mere
Ab halke se chhalke ye
Naino se taPke ye
Panno  Par likhe the
Hawa me ud gaye
Dard jo iisme hai
Kis se kahen..kis se kahen...!!



gr8888888888888888888888,ma'am
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2013, 01:20:31 AM »
So Nice
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2013, 01:43:26 AM »
Bahut Khoob.Bahut Achchha Likkha Hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2013, 02:21:36 AM »
jasbaat ke daman mei rehne do inhe...
warna kahan lafzo me jhalakte ish tarah....,
sirf auro ki zubaan par .....
koi charcha ki tarah bhatakte firte banke awaara ..
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2013, 02:40:15 AM »
bohat khoob,..........bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2013, 02:55:51 AM »
Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai badi khoob nazm kahi hai.. behad gehre ahsaas O khayaal rahe..
Aur khoobsurat lafzoN meiN dhala hai aapne is nazm ko.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2013, 11:50:59 AM »
bohut khub vimmi ji bohut umda peshkash
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2013, 01:00:44 PM »
bahut khoob....
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2013, 06:07:16 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Vimmi ji... aapke ye kuch panktiyaan bahut kuch  keh gaye.... khaamoshi se... bahut sundar rachnaa... bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2013, 03:11:22 AM »
Bahut khoob vimmi ji. dheron daad.

bahut bahut shukriya aqsh ji.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2013, 03:14:40 AM »

gr8888888888888888888888,ma'am
thank you sir.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2013, 03:33:36 AM »
bahut khub Ji

shad o aabaad rahiye

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«Reply #14 on: March 25, 2013, 02:22:21 AM »
Dard jo iisme hai
Kis se kahen
Panno  Par likhe the
Hawa me ud gaye
Halke se chhalke ye
Naino se taPke ye
Dil me dhadke hai
Raston me bhatke hai
Auron se chhuPke
Aaye mile mujhse
Aaye milne mujhse

Registaan ke zameen Par
Thodi dhool ret Par
Dhundhti hun wo nishaaniyan
Naa rahe jo ab naa rahe
Kho gaye sab kahi kho gaye
Jo aate the khwaabon me
Jo baste the nindon me
Jo chalte the sang mere
Ab halke se chhalke ye
Naino se taPke ye
Panno  Par likhe the
Hawa me ud gaye
Dard jo iisme hai
Kis se kahen..kis se kahen...!!


khoobsoorat nazm hai vimmi........!
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