kiske Intezar me usne chiraag jalaaye bujhaaye... Intezar !

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Daag ban kar chehre par nazar aane lage
Jo ashk meri hijra me kabhi the usne bahaaye
fakat us lahu ka lihaaz hai ke jeete hain hum
Jo payaam likhne ko use kabhi humne bahaaye

Muddaton se ik shakla ki talaash reh gayi
dil ne khayalo me jaane kitne chehre banaaye
hamne lafzo me taamir ki uski har saf me apni
aur jeete rahe lafzon ko apne seene se lagaaye

mere khayal bhar se bechain ho jaate hain wo
nazar aate hai mere har zikra par nazre jhukaaye
qatla kiya mujhe apni aagosh mein le jaakar usne
saans rukne tak wo bhi nazar aaye siskiyan uthaaye

Mujhe khud dafan kar aaya hai wo ek sadi pehle
phir kiske Intezar mein usne chiraag jalaye bujhaaye…!


Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2011, 01:31:03 AM »
Mashallah, Bohat Achcha Kalaam Likha Hai Bhai,.
Bohat Khoob.
Yunhi Likhte Raho Mehfil Mein  Rang Bharte Raho,.

May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2011, 01:51:34 AM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob Intezar jee..
Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2011, 01:53:42 AM »
Shukriya Azeem bhai... aapki is nazar ke liye...

Intezar !

Mashallah, Bohat Achcha Kalaam Likha Hai Bhai,.
Bohat Khoob.
Yunhi Likhte Raho Mehfil Mein  Rang Bharte Raho,.

May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2011, 01:57:05 AM »
Shihab bhai humesha bahut bahut shukriya aapka bhai...

Intezar !

Wah Bahut Khub Intezar Bhai...


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2011, 02:07:37 AM »
Bahut Khub Intezar Bhai
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2011, 02:28:03 AM »
Wow bahut khoob Intezar ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,great work.keep it up.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2011, 06:55:47 AM »
Bahut achhe my dear Intzaar ji.......mast likha hai...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Daag ban kar chehre par nazar aane lage
Jo ashk meri hijra me kabhi the usne bahaaye
fakat us lahu ka lihaaz hai ke jeete hain hum
Jo payaam likhne ko use kabhi humne bahaaye

Muddaton se ik shakla ki talaash reh gayi
dil ne khayalo me jaane kitne chehre banaaye
hamne lafzo me taamir ki uski har saf me apni
aur jeete rahe lafzon ko apne seene se lagaaye

mere khayal bhar se bechain ho jaate hain wo
nazar aate hai mere har zikra par nazre jhukaaye
qatla kiya mujhe apni aagosh mein le jaakar usne
saans rukne tak wo bhi nazar aaye siskiyan uthaaye

Mujhe khud dafan kar aaya hai wo ek sadi pehle
phir kiske Intezar mein usne chiraag jalaye bujhaaye…!


Shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2011, 08:01:58 AM »


Daag ban kar chehre par nazar aane lage
Jo ashk meri hijra me kabhi the usne bahaaye
fakat us lahu ka lihaaz hai ke jeete hain hum
Jo payaam likhne ko use kabhi humne bahaaye

Muddaton se ik shakla ki talaash reh gayi
dil ne khayalo me jaane kitne chehre banaaye
hamne lafzo me taamir ki uski har saf me apni
aur jeete rahe lafzon ko apne seene se lagaaye

mere khayal bhar se bechain ho jaate hain wo
nazar aate hai mere har zikra par nazre jhukaaye
qatla kiya mujhe apni aagosh mein le jaakar usne
saans rukne tak wo bhi nazar aaye siskiyan uthaaye

Mujhe khud dafan kar aaya hai wo ek sadi pehle
phir kiske Intezar mein usne chiraag jalaye bujhaaye…!


Shukriya
Intezar !


Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad !
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2011, 09:29:19 AM »
wah intezarji.... kya baat hai...

dard ki intehan hai ye.....

ke..

qatla kiya mujhe apneaagosh main le jaakar usne.

kya kahun...

khub...
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2011, 10:50:49 AM »
great---
yar kuch lines to bahut hi jabardast hain bhai.
bahut jhakashh.
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2011, 12:13:19 PM »
bahut khoob intzaar ji ...
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2011, 02:58:11 PM »
uff kitni gahrai se aapne ye likh daala Intezaar.
kya kahen aapke iss kalaam ko--daad dene layak shabd hi nhi mere paas.
bas Lajawaab kah sakta hun.
kabhi kabhi aisa nagma milta hai padhne ko--aur mai lucky hun yaar.
behad umda kalam par aapko salaam.
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2011, 10:01:48 PM »
Rahim bhai Shurkiya bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Bahaut bahaut khoob Intezar jee..
Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2011, 10:02:55 PM »
Rishi bhai Shukriya dil se aapka bahut bahut Shukriya...

Intezar !

Bahut Khub Intezar Bhai
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