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KISMAT

by nishi gahlaut on September 06, 2012, 07:03:07 AM

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nishi gahlaut

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Gummon ke saagar mein umange nahi hoti,
Doobati hue kaashti mein tarange nahi hoti,
Har kise ko usko pyar mile aisi sabki kismat nahi hoti.


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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 07:36:02 AM »

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 06, 2012, 07:03:07 AM

Gummon ke saagar mein umange nahi hoti,
Doobati hue kaashti mein tarange nahi hoti,
Har kise ko usko pyar mile aisi sabki kismat nahi hoti.

Nishi ji bahut sundar khayal hai aapka... Usual Smile

bahut Khoob.. Usual Smile

lekin agar aap bura na mane to mai isme ek line add kar raha hu..
ye kuchh aisi honi chahiye..

Ise bas ek sikh ki tarah lijiye.. aur aane wale waqt me aur achha likhiye..
Keep writing.. Usual Smile

Ghamon ke saagar mein umange nahi hoti,
Doobti hui kashti mein tarange nahi hoti,

Milne ko to hume bhi mil hi jata uska pyar magar,
Har kise ko mile uska pyar aisi sabki kismat nahi hoti..


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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 08:29:35 AM »

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 06, 2012, 07:03:07 AM

Gummon ke saagar mein umange nahi hoti,
Doobati hue kaashti mein tarange nahi hoti,
Har kise ko usko pyar mile aisi sabki kismat nahi hoti.

GUD


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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 09:45:35 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 11:11:11 AM »

sahi baat hai...


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laaiba

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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2012, 11:34:04 AM »

sahee baat kahee aap ne ...bohat khoob ...bohat c daad....


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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2012, 01:05:54 PM »

nice...n Touhid ji ne ise aur nikhaar dia


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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 04:15:22 PM »

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 06, 2012, 07:03:07 AM

Gummon ke saagar mein umange nahi hoti,
Doobati hue kaashti mein tarange nahi hoti,
Har kise ko usko pyar mile aisi sabki kismat nahi hoti.


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nishi gahlaut

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Re: KISMAT

«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 05:02:12 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 06, 2012, 07:36:02 AM

Nishi ji bahut sundar khayal hai aapka... Usual Smile

bahut Khoob.. Usual Smile

lekin agar aap bura na mane to mai isme ek line add kar raha hu..
ye kuchh aisi honi chahiye..

Ise bas ek sikh ki tarah lijiye.. aur aane wale waqt me aur achha likhiye..
Keep writing.. Usual Smile

Ghamon ke saagar mein umange nahi hoti,
Doobti hui kashti mein tarange nahi hoti,

Milne ko to hume bhi mil hi jata uska pyar magar,
Har kise ko mile uska pyar aisi sabki kismat nahi hoti..

Thanks Touhid ji....

aur apne toh aur bhi badiya likh diya... Usual Smile