koi..........!!!!!!!:Shayri-E-Dard

phoenix

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dil ab haasta bhi nahi haasata bhi nahi
kaisa pathar hai tutkar bhi bikhar jata nahi

raho.n mein ped ki shakho ka ek manzar hai
yaad aata bhi nahi bhula jaata bhi nahi

ruk ruk kar uthne wale uss tofaan ki tarah
mera koi majhi bhi nahi koi kinara bhi nahi

aate jaate dekhti hai duniya ab mujhko
koi saatata bhi nahi koi rulata bhi nahi

dil mein toh panapte hain kai khwab lekin
aankhe soti bhi nahi koi sulata bhi nahi

raah mein aa jata hai samunder mere
mein lad padta hun aur koi bachata bhi nahi

unn gumnaam kisso.n ki tarah hai jeena mera
koi sunta hi nahi koi sunata bhi nahi

jo mil jaaye meri beqarari ka sabab tumko kabhi
tod lena usse taki wo murjha na jaye kahin

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waheed_rose2004

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2006, 11:32:07 PM »

bahot acchi sharing kiya aap ne brother..... bahot accha laga padhker...... :lol:


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Shikha12

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2006, 09:53:41 AM »

Nice work Phoenix....
Really liked each and every stanza... =D> =D> =D>

Especially these lines...
Raah mey aa jaata hai samundar mere..
Main lad padta hoon aur koi bachata bhi nahin....

Un gumnaam kisso ki tarah hai jeena mera,
Koi sunta hi nahin koi sunaata bhi nahin....

Really Marvellous... and Very True..:D
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ranjana

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Re: koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2006, 10:57:52 AM »

Quote from: "phoenix"

wonderful .....bahut accha likha hai ...

chheen ke le gaya hai hamse
saari wazah muskaarne ki koi

baat kah lete hum unse khomosh reh kar bhi
agar baat woh sunate, sunaate koi

ek kashmkash ka silsila hai meri raho mein
haath bada ke mujhe manzil bhi ab dikhaata nahi koi

labo per kaampa thaa kabhi geet pyaar ka kabhi
udas hue is dil ko ab hasata bhi nahi koi

marham na laga paaya jis per waqt ka bhi silsila
un zakhamo ko ab fir se bharne aata bhi nahi koi !!


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phoenix

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2006, 10:53:25 AM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

bahot acchi sharing kiya aap ne brother..... bahot accha laga padhker...... :lol:

thnx u mr. waheed Usual Smile

:wink:


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phoenix

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2006, 10:56:06 AM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

thnx shikha ji


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phoenix

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Re: koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2006, 10:58:49 AM »

Quote from: "ranjana"

Quote from: "phoenix"

nice reply

kya khoya kya paaya maine
kisi ne aakar bataya toh hota

ruk jaate hum chalte chalte
jo kisine dil se bulaya toh hota

har ghadi dikhte hain mukaam purane
par kisi ne wo raasta yaad dilaya toh hota


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ranjana

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2006, 10:30:28 AM »

Quote

kya khoya kya paaya maine
kisi ne aakar bataya toh hota

ruk jaate hum chalte chalte
jo kisine dil se bulaya toh hota

har ghadi dikhte hain mukaam purane
par kisi ne wo raasta yaad dilaaya hota

nice one ......

kai baar yun hi mud ke dekha maine tujhe
per tere saaye bhi mujhe begaane se lage

kai baar aavaaz di mere tapdate hue dil ne tujhe
par har baar haath mere sirf veraane lage

kya kabhi nahi sunaai di mere dil sada tujhe
tu bhul gaya woh beete pal mujhe bhulaane mein shayad zamaane lage!!


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Devdas_online

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Re: koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2006, 12:30:16 PM »

Quote from: "phoenix"

sheeshe ka dil tootata hai,
pathar dil kya tootenge
jalne wala suraj doobta hai,
chamakne wale taare kya doobenge


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waheed_rose2004

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2006, 01:00:31 PM »

bahot khoob Phoenix.............Ranjana sis....Devdas


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phoenix

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Re: koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2006, 11:18:27 PM »

Quote from: "Devdas_online"

Quote from: "phoenix"

sheeshe ka dil tootata hai,
pathar dil kya tootenge
jalne wala suraj doobta hai,
chamakne wale taare kya doobenge

chamakta suraj hai din mein
par thandak chaandni se hoti hai
ab ye toh wo hi jaane ki dil ki ye aag
raat dhale thandi kaise hoti hai


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phoenix

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #11 on: October 11, 2006, 11:22:01 PM »

Quote from: "ranjana"

Quote

kya khoya kya paaya maine
kisi ne aakar bataya toh hota

ruk jaate hum chalte chalte
jo kisine dil se bulaya toh hota

har ghadi dikhte hain mukaam purane
par kisi ne wo raasta yaad dilaaya hota

dil behlane k liye bahut paimane lage
jise dekha mudkar wo mujhe begane lage

kehte kehte ruk gayi zubaan bhi
jise sochne mein mujhe zamane lage

raah chalte hue yakin ho chala hai
wo manzil meri nahi thi jise paane sare deewane chale


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phoenix

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2006, 11:22:39 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

bahot khoob Phoenix.............Ranjana sis....Devdas

thnx bro


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phoenix

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #13 on: October 13, 2006, 11:10:32 PM »

thokaro ne mujhe chalna sikhaya hai
dhoko ne mujhe sambhalna sikhaya hai
daman mein mere bhi hain kaante bahut
par saagar ki lehron ne mujhe jeena sikhaya hai


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angel4u

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koi..........!!!!!!!

«Reply #14 on: October 13, 2006, 11:12:57 PM »

Bana Bana Ke TaManna Mitayi Jaati Hai,
Tarah Tarah Se Wafa AazMayi Jaati Hai,

Jab Unko Meri Mohabbat Ka Aitbaar Nahi,
To Jhuka Jhuka Ke Nazar Kyon Milayi Jaati Hai,

HaMare Dil Ka Pata Wo HaMein Nahi Dete,
HaMari Chiz HuM Hi Se Chhupayi Jaati Hai,

Aye Dil Doori-E-Manzil Se NauMMid Na Ho,
Manzil Ab Aa Hi Jaati Hai Ab Aa Hi Jaati Hai...
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