Koi too betaye

by Sonu on May 15, 2006, 01:11:19 PM
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Sonu
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Koi to aaj humey beharo ka peta beta dey,
jhil milatey huye un sitaro ka peta beta dey.

devana apney khoon ka nishaa chudta jayga,
phoolo ka na sahi koi kahro ka peta beta dey.

insano ki besti sey hum hankey huey hia admiow ka nahi,
gunhagaor ka peta beta dey.

un ki bejem sey nikala gaya hai humey,
kuch gunahaa kreyngey koi bajaro ka peta beta dey.

hum bhi un ahkhoo mey shukh dulhan key deykheyngey,
jinhoney deykha hia doli mey un keharo ka peta beta dey.

koi ghuta raheyga en khuli vadiow mey,
ser phodengey apna koi devaro ka peta beta dey.

koi nahi jo kandha deyga humey kaber tak,
jaha dafen hai ahshiq un mjaaro ka peta beta dey.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2006, 02:50:52 PM »
wah wah wah ........amazing......itne  dino  baad  jabardast  waapsi...........   superbsssssssssssss
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2006, 10:49:29 AM »
thanks muna...

thanks so much majid brother



Jeeven bhar dukh key sanchey mey dhaltey rahey,
 Tum kesi or key sukh ka adhar ben gaye.

Jeeven key maruthal mey sari umer bhataktey rahey,
Tum kesi or key pyar ki phuyar ben gaye.

Tanhayeeow ka garel chup chap petey rahye,
Tum kei or ki mehphi ki shan ben gaye.

Nirashaow ki aag nerentar jaltey bujhtey rahey,
 Tum kesi or ki ahshaow ka deep ben gaye.

Germi ki andheyri raatoon mey ghut-ghut ker sisaktey rahey,
tum kesi or key sukh ka perbhaat ben gaye.
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mrkotians
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2006, 10:54:20 AM »
shabhash.... sonu.... apoorv...
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Sonu
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2006, 10:59:29 AM »
mrkotians ji shukriya... bahut bahut shukirya aprove kerney key leya  Usual Smile  :lol:


Yaadoo ka seylab hai yadey teyri,
Mujh sey milney ko beytab hai yadey teyri,
Bhini Bhini khushbo dey tak ahye,
Eehsa mehkta gulab hai yadey teyri,
Nazer nah iahti kahi bhi leykin,
Meyrey dil mey beyhesaab hia yadey teyri.



Quote from: "mrkotians"
shabhash.... sonu.... apoorv...
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Sonu
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2006, 11:11:29 AM »
Hath ka ek sapersh he bahut hia,
Dil ki gheyraeeow mey utar janey key leyeh,
Shabed ka ek teer he bahut hia,
Nasoor ben ker tedepaney key leyeh.
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2006, 07:03:52 PM »
too gud Sonu sis.....
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mrkotians
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2006, 04:30:06 AM »
good sonu... pleasure...

kise nahin hain dard
kise nahin hain maut
vyarth vyasan se meetha bhi peeka...

zindagi ek bazaar hain
bazaar bhar chinta hain
vyarth vyasan se chintha bhi bigda...

jeevan samundar thairne ki bharosa chahiye
kal hamara hain karne ki aasha chahiye
vyart vyasan...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2006, 07:37:25 AM »
wah wah wah kamal Sonu ji, bahoot khoob, nice MK ji!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2006, 09:34:21 AM »
Thanks niky.. kider si to eney din di... ki hal teyra..

Quote from: "nikki"
too gud Sonu sis.....
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Sonu
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2006, 09:39:14 AM »
Manjoo thanks ... wonderful likha hai apney bhi..

tutey huye dil mey nikley yahi bes duya
abaad teyra jhaa ho khus rahye tu sedaa.
 apna keya hia yeo hi ji leyngey
dard-eh-judayee ko pee leyngey uff na kreyngey oh sanem,
bhula he deyngey teyrey sitem nikleyni muh si na koi aah.
rah chudi, sath chuda,
kasmey tudi, vada tuda sath tumey jitna deya hai teyra kerm hai,
shukirya hai, sathi purana, bhul jana mubarak tujh ko sathi naya.
huta rah hai, huta raheyga, silsilaa pyar ka chalta raheyga
dil sey mileyngey tuta kreyngey
nakam aishqoo mey meyra bhi naam judh gaya hai .
tutey huye dil sey nikley yahi bes duyaa abaad teyra jhaa ho
khush rahey to sedha.

Quote from: "mrkotians"
good sonu... pleasure...

kise nahin hain dard
kise nahin hain maut
vyarth vyasan se meetha bhi peeka...

zindagi ek bazaar hain
bazaar bhar chinta hain
vyarth vyasan se chintha bhi bigda...

jeevan samundar thairne ki bharosa chahiye
kal hamara hain karne ki aasha chahiye
vyart vyasan...
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2006, 09:43:26 AM »
Thanks Pooja ji...  :oops:

Quote from: "Pooja"
wah wah wah kamal Sonu ji, bahoot khoob, nice MK ji!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2006, 09:50:53 AM »
bahut sundar likha hai aapne SONU.............


chup rahne se dard kam nahi hota
yaado ke dansh dil ko chubhan de jate hain
laakh daaman bacha ke koi chale
kaante zismo mein chub hi jaate hain
dubane ke liye koi din pucca nahi hai
batao khud ko kaise bacha paaoge
jab bhi apna samjh ke koi haath aage bare
har payaale ko yahan gar ho paaoge..................
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2006, 10:38:31 AM »
thanks Ranjna.. apney bhi bahut acha likha hia..

kuch kaheyn toh kahna mat
dard huye toh sahna mat
do waqt ki hi toh mulaqaat thee
dil puukaare toh peeche...rahna mat


Quote from: "ranjana"
bahut sundar likha hai aapne SONU.............


chup rahne se dard kam nahi hota
yaado ke dansh dil ko chubhan de jate hain
laakh daaman bacha ke koi chale
kaante zismo mein chub hi jaate hain
dubane ke liye koi din pucca nahi hai
batao khud ko kaise bacha paaoge
jab bhi apna samjh ke koi haath aage bare
har payaale ko yahan gar ho paaoge..................
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