kya maja hai dil todne main ..................

by tanhachand on December 29, 2005, 12:06:11 PM
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tanhachand
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kya jhooth kehna itna aasaan hai
kisi ko jhootha pyar karna itna aasan hai
kisi ke dil ko  todna itna aasan hai
kisi ko tdpata dekh muskuraana itna aasaan hai .........


kya uska dil nahi dookhta hoga
main roti hoon toh kya wo tadpta na hoga
main raato ko jaago toh kya wo so paata hoga
mujhe aise bechain dekh kya wo khush reh paata hoga...........


na jaane kitne dino ka ye aajmaaish hai
mujhe rulaane ki hi uski khwaahish hai
mujhe toodne ke liye hi joda tha usne
khud ko santusht karne ke liye hin _mujhe toda hai usne .................


log mar kar _ zindagi se chutkaara pa lete hian
mujhe kaisi mout mili hai ye
mari hui hoon par jinda hoon main
bina rooh ke hin_ ek parinda  hoon main ..................


bin mout ki mout pe toh yamraj bhi rota hai
wo bhi das baar kisi ko sang laane se sochta hai
tum toh pyaar the mere _mann samaan diya hai tumko
kitna aasan tha _kya maza tha dil todane main_ bata jaate mujhko.....
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Princess21
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2005, 01:48:41 AM »
Wowwwwwww Tanha!! Buhat hi acha likha hai tum ne...LOVely buhat hi nice!@
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tanhachand
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2005, 04:34:07 AM »
Quote from: "Princess21"
Wowwwwwww Tanha!! Buhat hi acha likha hai tum ne...LOVely buhat hi nice!@





princess21.........

...................................!!!!!!!

................................................. ............tc

................................................. ...............................tanhachand
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mehul jain
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2005, 12:54:34 PM »
bahut hi badiya tanha ji bahut accha laga aapko padhkar likhte rahiyega
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Azedmeer
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2005, 01:23:32 PM »
bohat hi accha likha hai tanhachand apne bohat hi accha
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tanhachand
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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2005, 06:18:59 AM »
mehul jain...........................


........................aap bhi humesha achcha hin likhte ho .........


................................................. thanks for coming


................................................. ..................................tc
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tanhachand
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2005, 06:20:10 AM »
Quote from: "Azedmeer"
bohat hi accha likha hai tanhachand apne bohat hi accha




............................thanks!!!!!!!


.............................................bye tc


................................................. .......tanhachand
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2005, 06:40:04 AM »
awwww so sweet........bahut hee girahi main likha hai........keep it up!!!!!
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tanhachand
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2005, 08:49:28 AM »
isha verma...........


..............................thanks !!!

................................................. ..bye tc


................................................. .............tanhachand
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tanhachand
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2006, 06:02:10 AM »
kisse sawaal karti rahi
na jaane kya_ kya  main sochti rahi

lag raha tha wo aas_ paas hin hai
aab yakeen hai ki wo  kahin _nahi  hai

 jaa chuka hai mujh se door abb wo
aaiste _aahiste dil se bhi nikal chuka hai abb  wo

kab chupke se woo aaya tha_ pata hin  na chala
kab chupke se chala gaya _pata hin   na chlaa

reh gayi hai ek mitha sa dard dil main
baaki hai ek halki se chavii yaadoono main

waqt ka pahiyaa na jaane kab cheen le mujhse
kutch  meethi si yaadain hin  baaki hai jeevan main
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Meena is back
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2006, 05:57:44 PM »
bohot ache tanhachand ji...last poem ki last 4 liens bohot achi lagi mujhe!!

 :D
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tanhachand
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«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2006, 06:39:03 AM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
bohot ache tanhachand ji...last poem ki last 4 liens bohot achi lagi mujhe!!

 :D




thanks meena ji ...................................tc
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