kya -- pyaar khota nahin~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 09:41:05 AM
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i had written for those who lost their love


ek kashish toh thi uski baaton main
yoonhi main oose yaad karke rota nahin

kuch toh kami padi hai meri raaton main
aaj kal karwate badalta hoon , sota nahin

hothon kii pyaas bujhti nahin hai pani se
isliye ab main labon ko bhigota nahin

khat pad liye hai qayi qayi baar
oosme likha hai kii sachcha pyaar khota nahin

haqeeqat se karke parda main beitha hoon
is aashiane k baahar jaane ka dil hota nahin

uska ehsaas hi bahut tha yeh zindgi guzaarne ko
kya kare "Saahil' jo ehsaas ab kissii dard ka hota nahi
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 10:27:24 AM »
Hmm, Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Yaar Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 03:07:41 PM »
Hmm, Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Yaar Bohat Achche,.


shukriya azeem bhai aapko pasand aayi warna auron ne toh kuch bhi nahin kaha
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 04:34:18 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil Bhai..Aapki Yeh Poetry Dil Ko Chuu Jaati Hai..Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 04:41:55 PM »
aaj kal karvate badalta hoon, sota nahi/
kamal hai saahil, jo khud na gujra ho kuye-jana se wo kya jane ishq kya hai
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2009, 06:54:51 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah Wah Bohat khoob salil Bro... 

Next time ishq pe bhi kuch
aapka spl lines likho..Winking

 
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2009, 09:01:46 PM »
Bahot achha likha hai Salil.

sapana
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 02:47:25 AM »
i had written for those who lost their love


ek kashish toh thi uski baaton main
yoonhi main oose yaad karke rota nahin

kuch toh kami padi hai meri raaton main
aaj kal karwate badalta hoon , sota nahin

hothon kii pyaas bujhti nahin hai pani se
isliye ab main labon ko bhigota nahin

khat pad liye hai qayi qayi baar
oosme likha hai kii sachcha pyaar khota nahin

haqeeqat se karke parda main beitha hoon
is aashiane k baahar jaane ka dil hota nahin

uska ehsaas hi bahut tha yeh zindgi guzaarne ko
kya kare "Saahil' jo ehsaas ab kissii dard ka hota nahi


Bahut khoobsurat Salil..

Un khaton ka jawab shayad tujhe mil hi gaya hoga,
sachhi mohabbat maine ki aur tujhe kho hi diya,
ek karam kar de phir se mujhe zinda kar de aaj,
teri judayi ne mujhe saanson se ajnabi kar hi diya...
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 01:02:21 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil Bhai..Aapki Yeh Poetry Dil Ko Chuu Jaati Hai..Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
aaj kal karvate badalta hoon, sota nahi/
kamal hai saahil, jo khud na gujra ho kuye-jana se wo kya jane ishq kya hai
bahut khoob
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah Wah Bohat khoob salil Bro... 

Next time ishq pe bhi kuch
aapka spl lines likho..Winking

 

Bahot achha likha hai Salil.

sapana
shukriya sapana, khwahish, honey di, saaz..........thanks a lot aapne ise pada aur pasand kiy
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2009, 01:04:18 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat Salil..

Un khaton ka jawab shayad tujhe mil hi gaya hoga,
sachhi mohabbat maine ki aur tujhe kho hi diya,
ek karam kar de phir se mujhe zinda kar de aaj,
teri judayi ne mujhe saanson se ajnabi kar hi diya...
thanks a lot angel and  nice reply by you


          kuch tanha thay tere jaane k baad
           saaya na ho apna toh kya zindgi hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2009, 01:07:20 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai SALIL Bhai.. Bahut Hi Khooooooob..!! is Dard Me Bhi Kitna Pyaar Jhalak raha Hai..!! Applause Waqai Dil ko Chhoo gaya aapka Yeh Qalaam..!! Great words..!!


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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2009, 12:26:03 PM »
Wah Kya Baat hai SALIL Bhai.. Bahut Hi Khooooooob..!! is Dard Me Bhi Kitna Pyaar Jhalak raha Hai..!! Applause Waqai Dil ko Chhoo gaya aapka Yeh Qalaam..!! Great words..!!


**~** Mann **~**
shukriya vicky bhai
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2009, 01:19:39 PM »
thanks a lot angel and  nice reply by you


          kuch tanha thay tere jaane k baad
           saaya na ho apna toh kya zindgi hai

Nice one salil..

tere saaye mein hi guzri thi zindagaani meri,
ke ab kaise nibhayenge hum saanson se rishta...
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 01:25:08 PM »
i had written for those who lost their love


ek kashish toh thi uski baaton main
yoonhi main oose yaad karke rota nahin

kuch toh kami padi hai meri raaton main
aaj kal karwate badalta hoon , sota nahin

hothon kii pyaas bujhti nahin hai pani se
isliye ab main labon ko bhigota nahin

khat pad liye hai qayi qayi baar
oosme likha hai kii sachcha pyaar khota nahin

haqeeqat se karke parda main beitha hoon
is aashiane k baahar jaane ka dil hota nahin

uska ehsaas hi bahut tha yeh zindgi guzaarne ko
kya kare "Saahil' jo ehsaas ab kissii dard ka hota nahi

Bahut acche Salil ji and Angel dear tumne b accha saat diya
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2009, 01:44:47 PM »
Nice one salil..

tere saaye mein hi guzri thi zindagaani meri,
ke ab kaise nibhayenge hum saanson se rishta...
Bahut acche Salil ji and Angel dear tumne b accha saat diya
bahut achche angel ji ...and shukriya roja

lipatna chaha tere saaye se magar kucch haath na aaya
shayad tere dil main kucch malaal aaj bhi hai
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