kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

by ghayal_shayar on January 07, 2008, 01:46:15 PM

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Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: January 17, 2008, 10:48:02 PM »

nice lines Honey


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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #16 on: January 18, 2008, 06:14:05 PM »

Quote from: Shikha12 on January 08, 2008, 11:39:08 AM

Bahut Khoob...

Bahut achha likha hai aapne Gayal_Shayar... Usual Smile

Prem.. Nice Reply as ever...

shikha ji aapka tahe dil se shukraguzaar hun maiN, ki aap is nacheez ke kalaam ko padhne ki jehmiyat uthaai, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aap aage v humeN yuNhi padhne ki jehmateN uthate raheN....!!


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #17 on: January 19, 2008, 02:41:46 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on January 08, 2008, 03:41:54 PM

Shayar sahab,

Bahut achcha likha hai aapne !

Bahut arse baad apka likha padhne ko mila !

shukriya rajbir ji, jan kar ahcha lga, ki aapko humara likha pasand aaa, guzarish rahegi ki aap yuNhi aage v hume padhne k jehmiyat uthate raheN....!!


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #18 on: January 20, 2008, 05:57:29 PM »

Quote from: sammu1984 on January 09, 2008, 03:29:30 AM

too gud shayar ji .... juz amazin !!

shukriya sammu ji...!!


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faiiz_76

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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #19 on: January 20, 2008, 06:55:29 PM »

nice ghayal ji


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2008, 01:41:32 PM »

Quote from: farawaynuts123 on January 09, 2008, 07:19:17 AM

ghayaalji....aapne to kamaal kar diaa..
last ki 2 lines se hume hi ghaayal kar daa Winking

janaab maafi chahuNga ki aapke naam se mukhatib nahiN huN, waise jan kar behad khushi hui ki apne is nacheez ko saraaha aur humare alfaazoN ne aapke dil meN ek jagah banaai...!! aage v aap yuNhi hausla afzaai karte raheN...!!


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Roja

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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2008, 01:57:06 PM »

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kured ke mere zakhmoN ko,use kya milaa hoga,
lahoo ke har katre meN apna aks dikhaa hoga.

Mohabbat ka isse haseeN kya koi namoona hoga,
ki meri ibadat-e-ishq se darta khud khuda hoga.

bahut khoob Ghayal ji.. Daad hazir hai kabul farmayiyega


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Roja

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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2008, 01:58:19 PM »

Jalte hai chirag-e-deep shame shehar
Hum bhi yahan dil jalakar baite hai

Shamma jalti hai wo kaam jalna hai,
Hum bhi yahan dil jalakar baite hai


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #23 on: January 22, 2008, 04:36:15 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on January 17, 2008, 02:21:56 PM

Bohat acha likha hai aapne ghayal_shyar

Hum apne liye ab aur kya dua karein
Khaye hai dhoke unse
Joh dil ke kareeb the
Kya batayein aap seh hum..
Dil ki aarzoo dil mein dabha kar chale hum..
Iss Dil-e-nadan koh kya pata..
Yeh toh aanson mein be-zabaan hogayee...

Honey ji bahut bahut shukriya is kalaam ko pasand karne ka...!! ye humari khusnaseebi ki aapko is nacheez ka kalaam pasan aaya,umeed karta hun ki ap aage v is nacheez ko padhne ki jehmiyat uthati raheNgiN...!!


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!

«Reply #24 on: January 26, 2008, 08:20:10 PM »

Quote from: Roja on January 21, 2008, 01:57:06 PM

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kured ke mere zakhmoN ko,use kya milaa hoga,
lahoo ke har katre meN apna aks dikhaa hoga.

Mohabbat ka isse haseeN kya koi namoona hoga,
ki meri ibadat-e-ishq se darta khud khuda hoga.

bahut khoob Ghayal ji.. Daad hazir hai kabul farmayiyega

shukriya roza ji...!! jaan kar khushi hui k aapko humara lkha pasand aaya, bas yuNhi aap hume padhti raheN...!!