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Author Topic: kya tha maloom,ki vo is dil meN CHIPAA hoga...!!  (Read 573 times)
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« on: January 07, 2008, 08:46:15 AM »

kured ke mere zakhmoN ko,use kya milaa hoga,
lahoo ke har katre meN apna aks dikhaa hoga.

Mohabbat ka isse haseeN kya koi namoona hoga,
ki meri ibadat-e-ishq se darta khud khuda hoga.

ek aah to usne v bhari hogi us lamhe meN jaroor,
jab dard-e-dil mera saari haddoN se guzraa hoga.

Jise humne dhuNda kiya har zarree meN kabhi,
kya tha maloom, ki vo is dil meN chipaa hoga.

Aashiq parvaane kud padte haiN kisi shamma meN,
Sochte bhi nahiN ki haal unka ab fir kyaa hoga.

Lakh palkeN jhukaaye vo bahaanoN se,par dekhna,
Uski aaNkhon se ab bhi mera aks na mitaa hoga.

DardoN se kuch is kadar chalni ho gaya hai ghayal,
Jo saamne khada karo to sharmsaar aainaa hoga.

Mehfil meN aksar log mujhse poocha kiye, eh “ghayal”,
Bahut ki tune aashiqui, ab zakhmi aur kitnaa hoga.

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« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2008, 11:20:21 AM »

bahut khoob ghayal ji
thanx to share with us

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« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2008, 12:46:16 PM »

Bahoot khoob gayal ji.. bahoot hi acha likha hai.. magar yah lines to kamal ki lagi..
Good job!!

kured ke mere zakhmoN ko,use kya milaa hoga,
lahoo ke har katre meN apna aks dikhaa hoga.
Lakh palkeN jhukaaye vo bahaanoN se,par dekhna,
Uski aaNkhon se ab bhi mera aks na mitaa hoga.
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« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2008, 02:07:01 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB GHAYAL SAAB...UMDA LIKHA HAI AAPNE..
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« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2008, 11:10:18 PM »

nice yaar,
beshak kuch wakat ka intzaar mila hamko,
par khuda se bhi barhkar yaar mila hamko,
ab na rahi tamana kisi janat ki hamko,
e dost teri dosti se wo payaar mila hamko.

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« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2008, 06:39:08 AM »

Bahut Khoob... Bahut achha likha hai aapne Gayal_Shayar... Usual Smile


Prem.. Nice Reply as ever...
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« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2008, 10:35:44 AM »

bahut khoob ghayal ji
thanx to share with us

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shukriya bhai jaan, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko humari peshkash pasand aayi, bas guzarish bas yahi hai ki aap aage v bas yuNhi hume padhne ki jehmateN uthate rahiye...!!
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« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2008, 10:41:54 AM »

Shayar sahab,

Bahut achcha likha hai aapne !

Bahut arse baad apka likha padhne ko mila !
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« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2008, 10:29:30 PM »

too gud shayar ji .... juz amazin !!
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« Reply #9 on: January 09, 2008, 02:19:17 AM »

ghayaalji....aapne to kamaal kar diaa..
last ki 2 lines se hume hi ghaayal kar daa Winking
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« Reply #10 on: January 17, 2008, 09:00:45 AM »

Bahoot khoob gayal ji.. bahoot hi acha likha hai.. magar yah lines to kamal ki lagi..
Good job!!

kured ke mere zakhmoN ko,use kya milaa hoga,
lahoo ke har katre meN apna aks dikhaa hoga.
Lakh palkeN jhukaaye vo bahaanoN se,par dekhna,
Uski aaNkhon se ab bhi mera aks na mitaa hoga.



bas humari khusnasibi pooja ji ki aapko is nacheez ka likha pasand aaya, nahin to humare kalaam ki kya hasiyat....!! bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yuNhi padhne ki jehmateN uthati raheN....!!
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« Reply #11 on: January 17, 2008, 09:01:55 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB GHAYAL SAAB...UMDA LIKHA HAI AAPNE..

aapki tareef humare sar aaNkhoN pe khwaish ji, bas aage v yuNhi hausala afzaai karti raheN....!!
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« Reply #12 on: January 17, 2008, 09:02:59 AM »

nice yaar,
beshak kuch wakat ka intzaar mila hamko,
par khuda se bhi barhkar yaar mila hamko,
ab na rahi tamana kisi janat ki hamko,
e dost teri dosti se wo payaar mila hamko.

prem

prem sahab ek baar fir humare likhe ko pasand karne ka behad shukriya, bas yuNhi is nadaan ki mehfiloN ki raunak badhate rahiye aap....!!
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« Reply #13 on: January 17, 2008, 09:04:25 AM »

Bahut Khoob... Bahut achha likha hai aapne Gayal_Shayar... Usual Smile


Prem.. Nice Reply as ever...


sikha ji shukriya is nadaan ki karistaani padhne ke liye apna waqt diya aapne, bas yuNhi thoda waqt hume padhne ko aap nikaalti rahiye....!!
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« Reply #14 on: January 17, 2008, 09:21:56 AM »

Bohat acha likha hai aapne ghayal_shyar  Usual Smile

Hum apne liye ab aur kya dua karein
Khaye hai dhoke unse
Joh dil ke kareeb the
Kya batayein aap seh hum..
Dil ki aarzoo dil mein dabha kar chale hum..
Iss Dil-e-nadan koh kya pata..
Yeh toh aanson  mein be-zabaan hogayee...
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