Kyon us bemurawwat par itna pyaar aaya!

by shara63 on December 05, 2012, 07:57:38 AM
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     AaNkheN nam ho gaeeN zikr hote hi, dil bhar aaya
      kyon us bemurawwat par mujhko itnaa pyaar aaya

      Koie rishta to naheeN, koie naata bhi naheeN
      phir kyoN uska naam lab par baar baar aaya

      Kyon uska chehra aaj masoom lag raha hai mujhe
      tamaam umr jis zaalim ne, har baat ko tadpaaya

      Kaheen kuchh to sabab hai teri bechaini ka 'ainy'
      vo bhoola sa fasana, jo tujhe phir se yaad aaya

      Belagaam dhadkanen kis tarah se hoN aasoodah
      aaj is dil ki bebasi par rona be-ikhteyaar aaya !!   ..................'ainy'

                 (aasoodah = satisfied )
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riyaz106
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2012, 08:22:41 AM »
Bahot umdah likha hai Shara ji. Parhkar bahot achha laga. Ye lines khas taur par pasand aain.
Koie rishta to naheeN, koie naata bhi naheeN
phir kyoN uska naam lab par baar baar aaya
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prashad
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2012, 09:12:49 AM »
very nice
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shara63
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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2012, 09:16:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukria Riyaz sb...aapki tareef mere liye kaafi maaine rakhti hai!
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«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2012, 09:27:48 AM »
Quote from: shara63 on December 05, 2012, 07:57:38 AM
     AaNkheN nam ho gaeeN zikr hote hi, dil bhar aaya
      kyon us bemurawwat par mujhko itnaa pyaar aaya

      Koie rishta to naheeN, koie naata bhi naheeN
      phir kyoN uska naam lab par baar baar aaya

      Kyon uska chehra aaj masoom lag raha hai mujhe
      tamaam umr jis zaalim ne, har baat ko tadpaaya

      Kaheen kuchh to sabab hai teri bechaini ka 'ainy'
      vo bhoola sa fasana, jo tujhe phir se yaad aaya

      Belagaam dhadkanen kis tarah se hoN aasoodah
      aaj is dil ki bebasi par rona be-ikhteyaar aaya !!   ..................'ainy'

                 (aasoodah = satisfied )

bahut badiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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shara63
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2012, 09:31:47 AM »
thankyou prashad ji...i need & love this appraisal!
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shara63
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«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2012, 09:33:32 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya suman ji!
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aqsh
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«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2012, 10:27:24 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
just beautiful
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Aarish
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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2012, 10:32:16 AM »
bohut khoob shara jee umda kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne , dherrrooon daaad qubool kijiye
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shara63
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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2012, 11:46:11 AM »
thanks a lot aqsh sahiba...i'm really happy that you enjoyed my poetry!
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mkv
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«Reply #10 on: December 05, 2012, 12:11:35 PM »
kamaal ke ehsaas bayaan kiye haiN aapne.
bahut bahut mubarakbaad..
par vaqt ki kamee bhi dikhee .
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shara63
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«Reply #11 on: December 05, 2012, 12:28:24 PM »
mkv sb, bahut bahut shukria..mubaarakbaad dene aur kalaam ki behtari ke liye aapke anmol khayalat batane ke liye bhi...waqai mujhe bhi ehsaas hai is baat ka...Aainda zaroor khayaal rakhoongi...aap yunhi sujhav va hausla dete rahiyega...Shukria!
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2012, 12:29:15 PM »
Bahut khoosurat
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