~*~Lahren~*~

by pankshivam on July 10, 2009, 11:10:40 AM
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pankshivam
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Waqt ki laharon me zindgani chalti hai...
Dhadkano me chupchap teri kahani chalti hai...

Aankhon ke paimane chhlakte hain kabhi...
Khwabon ke sath jab yaadon ki nishani chalti hai...

Bikhar ke gum ho jate hai ashk sirhane me kahin...
Hotho pe hota hai tera naam,aur dhire dhire sanso ki ravani chalti hai...

~Pank~
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2009, 11:20:30 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Pankshivam ji,woderful creation excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 11:21:01 AM »
Bohot Khoob Panks
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pankshivam
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 11:25:14 AM »
Shukriya Madhuweshji
Shukriya Celmiraji
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 12:24:02 PM »
kya baat hai  pankshivam ji....

SANSON KI LAHRENO MEIN ,JAB BHI TERA NAAM CHALTA HAI,
PHIR WAHI TUJE PAANE KA ARMAAN,MACHALTA HAI.
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2009, 04:47:49 PM »
Very Nice Pank Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2009, 05:01:12 PM »
bahoot khoob pank nice lines cara ji

kabhi khawab to kabhi haqiqat ne jagaya hai
zindagi ki dhoop chaya ne bahoot sikhaya hai

Her armaan ek lehar ban kar lahlahaya hai
kabhi bandha, kabhi bahaya, kuch is tarah jeevan beetaya hai!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2009, 05:28:50 PM »
Bahut khoob Shivam Ji
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Deepati
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2009, 05:53:41 AM »
Waqt ki laharon me zindgani chalti hai...
Dhadkano me chupchap teri kahani chalti hai...

Aankhon ke paimane chhlakte hain kabhi...
Khwabon ke sath jab yaadon ki nishani chalti hai...

Bikhar ke gum ho jate hai ashk sirhane me kahin...
Hotho pe hota hai tera naam,aur dhire dhire sanso ki ravani chalti hai...

~Pank~

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai, Pank Ji! Applause
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Deepati
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2009, 05:54:35 AM »
kya baat hai  pankshivam ji....

SANSON KI LAHRENO MEIN ,JAB BHI TERA NAAM CHALTA HAI,
PHIR WAHI TUJE PAANE KA ARMAAN,MACHALTA HAI.

Bahut khoob, Cara Ji!  Applause
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Deepati
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2009, 05:55:31 AM »
bahoot khoob pank nice lines cara ji

kabhi khawab to kabhi haqiqat ne jagaya hai
zindagi ki dhoop chaya ne bahoot sikhaya hai

Her armaan ek lehar ban kar lahlahaya hai
kabhi bandha, kabhi bahaya, kuch is tarah jeevan beetaya hai!!

Bahut khoob, Pooja Ji! Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2009, 06:05:44 AM »
Waah Bahoot Khoon Shivam ji...

Bahoot Khoob Cera ji

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja Di.


Aksar Pukarta haui mujhe mera beeta kal
Kehta hai aa laut kar mere kareeb aa ja
Chod de ye ansoon bahana mujhe yaad kar
aa fir pass aakar apna buja Deepak jala ja

Kehti hun usse main apni saans thaam kar
toot chuki hun main ab, chala ja door chala ja
Kho chuki ab tera pyar, khud ka vishwaas mein
Yuun Baar baar aakar mere kareeb bebas na kiye ja


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salil2002
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2009, 06:15:13 AM »
bahut achche pank bhai .
\cara ji aur pooja di aap dono ne bhi bahut achcha likha hai
sophi dear kamaal ka reply hai

saahil ko chhu jaaye lehrein aur oonmein na halchal ho
toh lehron ka kasoor hi hoga jo saahil ko bhigoya nahin
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2009, 06:34:44 AM »
Thank you Dear...

I must say.. Waah Kya sher maar hai.. Bahoot Khoob.
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2009, 09:56:10 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB PANK JI Applause Applause Applause
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