ranjana
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« on: September 03, 2006, 09:30:06 PM » |
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jinhe chahata hai yeh dil unka in haatho ki lakeero mein dedaar kyu nahi hota
jo basate hain hamare dil mein unhe hamse pyaar kyu nahi hota
dekha toh thaa unki nazaro mein bhi pyaar hamane
fir kyu kabhi kisi bhi mulaqaat ka un per asar nahi hota
khud ko kho kar bhi hum kahan paa sake un ko
unki tabiyat mein ranjish ka asar kam kyu nahi hota
hamne maana yeh ishq ek khubsuart dhokha hai
fir bhi is dil ko kyu unke nazare hamse fer lene ka asar kyu nahi hota
ek muddat se hum dube hain bas unki hi yaado mein
hamaari kisi bhi raha se unka gujar kyu nahi hota
kash ki unko bana sakate hum taqdeer apani
per jab se ruhte hain woh ab hame apne naseeb per bhi etebaar kyu nahi hota !!
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« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2006, 09:34:55 PM » |
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lakeeron mein basti agar dunia toh baat hi kya thi
khushiyan milti itni aasani se toh baat kya thi
hum toh chale aaye hain baazar mein baichne khud ko
jo hoti sang lakeeren toh hamari aukaat kya thi
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badnaam_shayar
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« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2006, 09:35:21 PM » |
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Superb Ranju kuch lines toh dil ko choo gayi.....
Dasht-e-Sehra ke woh Veeran Safar......
Jinpar Talaash ki humne khushi aur bhatke Darbadar......
Choo lete jo tum uss WaQt Ehsaas-e-Dil hamare......
Phir na poochte kahan gaya woh mera Humsafar.......!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2006, 09:42:50 PM » |
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lakeeron mein basti agar dunia toh baat hi kya thi
khushiyan milti itni aasani se toh baat kya thi
hum toh chale aaye hain baazar mein baichne khud ko
jo hoti sang lakeeren toh hamari aukaat kya thi in lakeero mein kabhi hamne apna naseeb dekha thaa unke saath saath apni zindagi ko rangeen dekha thaa kar diya thaa dil ka soda hamne ek bharose per kabhi teri aankho mein bhi hamne dosti ka nur dekha thaa!! |
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« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2006, 09:50:56 PM » |
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lakeeron mein basti agar dunia toh baat hi kya thi
khushiyan milti itni aasani se toh baat kya thi
hum toh chale aaye hain baazar mein baichne khud ko
jo hoti sang lakeeren toh hamari aukaat kya thi in lakeero mein kabhi hamne apna naseeb dekha thaa unke saath saath apni zindagi ko rangeen dekha thaa kar diya thaa dil ka soda hamne ek bharose per kabhi teri aankho mein bhi hamne dosti ka nur dekha thaa!! shayad dil mein pyaar ki umeed kam thi hunar kam tha ya mujhme mohaabat ki aag kam thi aaj bhi dekhta hun in haatho ko badnaseebi se mein inme kuch noor kam tha ya lakeeron ki pehchaan kam thi |
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ranjana
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« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2006, 09:51:22 PM » |
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Superb Ranju kuch lines toh dil ko choo gayi.....
Dasht-e-Sehra ke woh Veeran Safar......
Jinpar Talaash ki humne khushi aur bhatke Darbadar......
Choo lete jo tum uss WaQt Ehsaas-e-Dil hamare......
Phir na poochte kahan gaya woh mera Humsafar.......!!!!!!!!!!!! shukriya gaurav......very nice ....... ek muddat se unki yaado ke ghere mein hain hum is duniya ki bheed mein ab bhi akele hain hum ruka hai kab se ek hi raha per meri zindagi ka carvaan in veraan si aankho se ab unko kyu pukaarate hain hum !! |
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« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2006, 10:00:03 PM » |
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Superb Ranju kuch lines toh dil ko choo gayi.....
Dasht-e-Sehra ke woh Veeran Safar......
Jinpar Talaash ki humne khushi aur bhatke Darbadar......
Choo lete jo tum uss WaQt Ehsaas-e-Dil hamare......
Phir na poochte kahan gaya woh mera Humsafar.......!!!!!!!!!!!! shukriya gaurav......very nice ....... ek muddat se unki yaado ke ghere mein hain hum is duniya ki bheed mein ab bhi akele hain hum ruka hai kab se ek hi raha per meri zindagi ka carvaan in veraan si aankho se ab unko kyu pukaarate hain hum !!
Chahe laga lo Zor jitna par Badnaam Hasti asaani se nahi mitti......
Rukh badal de hawa itna Zor hum apni Mahobbat me rakhte hai.......
Chalak jo pyale mere Naam se toh Khuda ke bhi Takhat hilte hai......
Jaan hai jab talak mujhme......
Armaan Dafan ho nahi payenge.......
Chahe mitt jaye yeh Dunia.......
Par hum harr Raah saath tera nibhayenge.......
Laga le Kashti or Kinare mujhe bana de......
Nahi Lakeer haath me toh Dil me bana de.........!!!!!!!! |
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ranjana
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« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2006, 10:03:03 PM » |
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lakeeron mein basti agar dunia toh baat hi kya thi
khushiyan milti itni aasani se toh baat kya thi
hum toh chale aaye hain baazar mein baichne khud ko
jo hoti sang lakeeren toh hamari aukaat kya thi in lakeero mein kabhi hamne apna naseeb dekha thaa unke saath saath apni zindagi ko rangeen dekha thaa kar diya thaa dil ka soda hamne ek bharose per kabhi teri aankho mein bhi hamne dosti ka nur dekha thaa!! shayad dil mein pyaar ki umeed kam thi hunar kam tha ya mujhme mohaabat ki aag kam thi aaj bhi dekhta hun in haatho ko badnaseebi se mein inme kuch noor kam tha ya lakeeron ki pehchaan kam thi ishq ajeeb hai per is se bachane ki surat bhi kya hai dekhte hain hum apni zindagi ko yun rang badalte hue kabhi mere dil ko aa ke tum samajhao ki kabhi kabhi kyu ajab khel khel jaati hai yeh lakeeren!! |
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ranjana
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« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2006, 10:19:20 PM » |
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bahut hi sunder gauarv ........
dil mein jo ban jaati hain lakeere
woh ta umar fir mitta nahi karti
kabhi kabhi dub jaati hai kishati bhi kinaaro per
kyu usko shail ki panhaa mila nahi karti
hamne maana thaa jinko apna naseeb zindgai ka
kyu inke haatho mein hamaare ishq ki lakeere likhi nahi hoti
kyu mil jaate hain woh hi raahi hame raha mein
jinki raha kabhi hamari manzil hua nahi karti !!
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« Reply #9 on: September 03, 2006, 10:45:15 PM » |
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very nice sharing Ranajana,....... Gaurav Bhai..... Phoenixxxxxxxxx......... good going....
kya bhala mujhe parakhne ka nateeja nikla
jakham dil aap ki nazar se gahra nikla
tishnagi jam gayee pather ki tarah honthon per
doobkar bhi main tere dariya se pyasa nikla......
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« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2006, 10:57:17 PM » |
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very nice sharing Ranajana,....... Gaurav Bhai..... Phoenixxxxxxxxx......... good going....
kya bhala mujhe parakhne ka nateeja nikla
jakham dil aap ki nazar se gahra nikla
tishnagi jam gayee pather ki tarah honthon per
doobkar bhi main tere dariya se pyasa nikla...... bahut khoob waheed bhai |
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« Reply #11 on: September 04, 2006, 02:30:53 AM » |
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Superb Ranju kuch lines toh dil ko choo gayi.....
Dasht-e-Sehra ke woh Veeran Safar......
Jinpar Talaash ki humne khushi aur bhatke Darbadar......
Choo lete jo tum uss WaQt Ehsaas-e-Dil hamare......
Phir na poochte kahan gaya woh mera Humsafar.......!!!!!!!!!!!! cho khe nikle te hum teri ghali se yaadoin ke sahare chal pare te kisi talash mein guzarein hain hum usse ishq ki badnaam ghali se dupatte mein sammath karh tujhe hum le aye apne saath mein :D:D |
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ranjana
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« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2006, 11:06:51 AM » |
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very nice sharing Ranajana,....... Gaurav Bhai..... Phoenixxxxxxxxx......... good going....
kya bhala mujhe parakhne ka nateeja nikla
jakham dil aap ki nazar se gahra nikla
tishnagi jam gayee pather ki tarah honthon per
doobkar bhi main tere dariya se pyasa nikla...... shukriya waheed .....bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... bujh na saki meri payaas samander ke kinaare reh kar bhi rait si is payaas mein trishna ke siva kuch bhi nahi zindagi bhatak rahi hai yun hi sehera mein meri yahan tanhaai ke siva koi saathi bhi nahi !! |
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« Reply #13 on: September 04, 2006, 12:02:43 PM » |
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very nice sharing Ranajana,....... Gaurav Bhai..... Phoenixxxxxxxxx......... good going....
kya bhala mujhe parakhne ka nateeja nikla
jakham dil aap ki nazar se gahra nikla
tishnagi jam gayee pather ki tarah honthon per
doobkar bhi main tere dariya se pyasa nikla...... kya baat hai!.... WAHEED BHAI.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut khoob....................... and u too good RANJANA, ANJANI JI................ |
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ranjana
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« Reply #14 on: September 04, 2006, 11:29:20 PM » |
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bahut dur tak chala mere saath unki yaado ka silsila
fir kahi koi nishaan mujhe unka baaki na mila
mili mujhe zamaane bhar ki khushiya.n yahan
magar pyaar sirf kyu mujhe tumhara na mila!!
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