<>*Lakeeron se Ukere Jazbaat*<>

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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 08:28:21 PM »
Tariff k sab shabd maun ho gaye hain Kasak-di......
freeze ho gaye hain....
bolte hain ab humko permanent kar do......
Anamika-di ki tou har rachna Superb hoti hai....
Jitni suder rachna hai utna hi sunder presentation......Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

In hi haatho se banaayee-mitayee meine anginat lakeerein
Par haar gayee mein haath par khudi in chand lakeeron se

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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 08:31:29 PM »
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Kasak   Ji
Pa.dh kar hum aatam vhibhor ho gaye
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2010, 07:28:29 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 10:05:15 PM »
Oye hoye Anamika di, bahaut acha likha hai..Wakei bahaut dard bhara likha hai..Dil choo liya...akhri line bahaut achi lagi..
Jisne ek uff tak nahin ki, wakei bahaut mohobat bhari hai uske dil main..sirf akhri do lines ko parr kar yeh keh raha hoon...
aur dua karunga yeh aag buj jaye..Ameen..!
Khush rahiye..! Applause Applause
ek shaer yaad agaya Faraz Saheb ka..dil ki sachayi bayan karta hai...:

"Haath zakhmi hue toh kuch apni hi khata thi Faraz,
Lakeeron ko mitana chaha tumhe paane kay liye..."
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 10:06:45 PM »
Ohh by the way, Loved the way you presented your poem..the background and everything.. Tooooooooooo good..! Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2010, 10:19:06 PM »
wah wah wah kasak ji.. wah wah

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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 10:10:23 AM »
nice one kasak. very touching

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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2010, 10:21:26 AM »
Tariff k sab shabd maun ho gaye hain Kasak-di......
freeze ho gaye hain....
bolte hain ab humko permanent kar do......
Anamika-di ki tou har rachna Superb hoti hai....
Jitni suder rachna hai utna hi sunder presentation......Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

In hi haatho se banaayee-mitayee meine anginat lakeerein
Par haar gayee mein haath par khudi in chand lakeeron se




thnxxxx koyal....tum to kuch jyada hi tareef karne lagi...
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2010, 10:22:36 AM »
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Kasak   Ji
Pa.dh kar hum aatam vhibhor ho gaye

aapke reply se hum bhi khush khush ho gaye rajesh ji....
bht shukriya pasand karne k liye
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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2010, 10:23:06 AM »
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thnx thk ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2010, 10:25:20 AM »
Oye hoye Anamika di, bahaut acha likha hai..Wakei bahaut dard bhara likha hai..Dil choo liya...akhri line bahaut achi lagi..
Jisne ek uff tak nahin ki, wakei bahaut mohobat bhari hai uske dil main..sirf akhri do lines ko parr kar yeh keh raha hoon...
aur dua karunga yeh aag buj jaye..Ameen..!
Khush rahiye..! Applause Applause
ek shaer yaad agaya Faraz Saheb ka..dil ki sachayi bayan karta hai...:

"Haath zakhmi hue toh kuch apni hi khata thi Faraz,
Lakeeron ko mitana chaha tumhe paane kay liye..."

aahaaaa...2 line me bht kuch keh gaye....
aapne ise itna pasand kiya saraha uske liye bht bht shukriya ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2010, 10:26:26 AM »
wah wah wah kasak ji.. wah wah

jasbir singh
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thnx JS ji....thnx a lot for appreciating my work
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2010, 12:52:02 PM »
bahut bahut Khoob Anamika Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Kuch Insaan Ki Bebasi,Kuch Shikayaten Se bharpoor jazbaat Nazar aaye iss kavita mein..

Bahut Ache. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2010, 01:17:35 PM »
bahut bahut Khoob Anamika Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Kuch Insaan Ki Bebasi,Kuch Shikayaten Se bharpoor jazbaat Nazar aaye iss kavita mein..

Bahut Ache. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya  khwaish ji k aapne ise pasadn kiya nd mehsus kiya
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