-----/// Likhna to bas ek bahaanaa hai /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on July 13, 2012, 02:01:41 PM
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tumhaare kareeb rehke naa jaan paaye jitna tumse duur aake jaanaa hai,
sach kahen to tumse juda ho ke hi humne tumhe dhang se pehchaanaa hai,
band aankhon se tumhaari chhavi ko dil me basaayaa tha kabhi humne,
khuli aankhon se dekhaa aaj to jaanaa ki jhootaa saaraa zamaanaa hai,

samjhaayaa bahut tha apno ne humein ki tum apne nahi ho sakte mere,
unke un baaton ka mol tumse judaa ho ke hi humne ab jaanaa hai,
kaun apna hai kaun paraayaa hai samajhne me bahut der lagi humein,
khwaab jhoote the humaare ye un khwaabon ke tutne ke baad jaanaa hai,

likhta hoon dard-e-dil ka haal, par ye likhna to bas ek bahaanaa hai,
kaagaz to bas ek zariyaa hai jisse humein un ghamon ko bhulaana hai,
galti hamaari thi jo bin soche samjhe pyaar kar baithe tumse hum,
tumhaare yaadon ko seene se lagaake is jahaan se guzar jaanaa hai...


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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2012, 02:34:51 PM »
bahut khoob Hriday ji
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2012, 03:07:12 PM »
HIRDAY JI APNE HIRDAY SE KUCHH AISA LIKH DIYA
MUJHE BHI KUCHH KAHNE KE LIYE HAUSILA DIYA
ARZ HAI  
JAB KOI APNE  PAAS HOTA HAI TO
USKI KEEMAT JANTE NAHIN

JANE KE BAAD HI LAGTA HAI KI
UN JAISA KOI AUR KEEMTI NAHIN

JAB KOI SAATH HOTA HAI TO
USKI KHAMEEYAN HI DIKHTI HAIN

USKE JANE KE BAAD HI
USKI ACHHAYEENYAN NAZAR AATI HAIN

PYAR BARHTE BARHTE ITNA BARH JATA HAI
CHAHE KUCHH BHI KAREN WO BAHUT YAAD AATA AHI
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2012, 05:00:34 PM »
Hriday jee
Bahut miss kiya aapko. kaha the aap.
aapke dilkash kalaam jaise kho se gaye the.
ab aa gaye hai to khush,
hamesha ki tarah, vahi andaaj, vahi bholapan, vahi maasoomiyat.
Bahut umda likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2012, 06:32:51 PM »
thanx dil ji aakhir aahi gaye aap....... missed u alottttttt..... and iski tareef to main already kar chuki hun..... excellent post reeeeee
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2012, 11:50:51 PM »
bahut sundar hridayji
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2012, 12:38:54 PM »
Welcome back.....itni achchi poem padhi hai aapki, aapki hi baaki poems ki tarah...kabse intezaar tha.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2012, 04:12:30 PM »
Bohat Khoob Hriday Ji,.
Ek Tasweer Dikhaai Hai Aapne, Ehsaason Ki,.
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2012, 01:42:45 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on July 13, 2012, 02:34:51 PM
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2012, 02:40:51 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bansi ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai....!!!

Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on July 13, 2012, 03:07:12 PM
HIRDAY JI APNE HIRDAY SE KUCHH AISA LIKH DIYA
MUJHE BHI KUCHH KAHNE KE LIYE HAUSILA DIYA
ARZ HAI 
JAB KOI APNE  PAAS HOTA HAI TO
USKI KEEMAT JANTE NAHIN

JANE KE BAAD HI LAGTA HAI KI
UN JAISA KOI AUR KEEMTI NAHIN

JAB KOI SAATH HOTA HAI TO
USKI KHAMEEYAN HI DIKHTI HAIN

USKE JANE KE BAAD HI
USKI ACHHAYEENYAN NAZAR AATI HAIN

PYAR BARHTE BARHTE ITNA BARH JATA HAI
CHAHE KUCHH BHI KAREN WO BAHUT YAAD AATA AHI

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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2012, 02:16:30 PM »
bahut achcha lagaa jaanke ki koi to humein bhi miss karta hai... tongue3... bas nayi jagah naukri mili thi to shifting and settle hone me thoda waqt lag gaya... aur aate hi aapka pyaaraa saath fir se mil gayaa.. mujhe hamesha aapke comments ka intezaar rehta hai... meri poem itni achchi nahi hoti par uski khoobsurti aapke comments se badh jaati hai... thank you soooooooooooo much Mukesh ji.... yunhi saath dete rahiyega hamesha.... thanks again....!!!

Quote from: mkv on July 13, 2012, 05:00:34 PM
Hriday jee
Bahut miss kiya aapko. kaha the aap.
aapke dilkash kalaam jaise kho se gaye the.
ab aa gaye hai to khush,
hamesha ki tarah, vahi andaaj, vahi bholapan, vahi maasoomiyat.
Bahut umda likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #11 on: August 02, 2012, 02:59:24 PM »
aanaa hi thaa.. aap jaise pyaare pyaare dost jis jagat me hoon us jagat ko chhod ke zyaadaa der koi kaise reh sakta hai... aanaa to thaa hi... meri koshish ko pasand karne ke liye bahaut bahaut shukriya Kasak ji... yunhi saath dete rahiye....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 13, 2012, 06:32:51 PM
thanx dil ji aakhir aahi gaye aap....... missed u alottttttt..... and iski tareef to main already kar chuki hun..... excellent post reeeeee
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2012, 12:57:06 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji...!!!

Quote from: nandbahu on July 13, 2012, 11:50:51 PM
bahut sundar hridayji
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2012, 12:02:34 PM »
thank you sooooo much Sps ji...!!!

Quote from: Sps on July 15, 2012, 12:38:54 PM
Welcome back.....itni achchi poem padhi hai aapki, aapki hi baaki poems ki tarah...kabse intezaar tha.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 06, 2012, 12:03:04 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Azeem ji....!!!

Quote from: Azeem on July 16, 2012, 04:12:30 PM
Bohat Khoob Hriday Ji,.
Ek Tasweer Dikhaai Hai Aapne, Ehsaason Ki,.
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