Love of a 15 year old

by sanya310 on February 09, 2005, 08:38:10 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 23, 2005, 03:10:01 PM »
ty all Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: February 23, 2005, 03:12:00 PM »
kya baat ahi sanya.........
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sanya310
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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2005, 03:57:45 PM »
thnx pandit Usual Smile
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #18 on: March 06, 2005, 03:52:43 AM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
Let me tell you the story of a girl
a girl so young and innocent
and how her life turned into hell
until when she was complacent.

It all started with a lie
The day when she had started to love
And everyday she began to die
she had cheated on her turtle dove.

She had told him she was older
she was very pretty, she lied
he believed her, as they only had spoken
Never knew wat she had to hide.

She spoke to him each single day
she started loving him a lot
but day and night she thought of a way
to prevent herself from getting caught.

Ever since then, she was a cinderella
She was weepy and alone
When asked by her friends and fellas
Lied again with a fake smile shone.

She began to sulk, she grew very pale
Guilt grew in on her
Althrough the night she used to wail
and curse out to the liar inside her.

Dad was worried, mom got nervous
they asked her what was wrong
She then told them every single thing
to whom her heart did belong.

They told her that the best way
to tell him the real thing
was to confront and confess and
never to think what was coming.

If he really loved you, they said
he would understand the above
he would understand the reason you lied
All just to have his love

So she logged on to her PC
to have a long chat
whatever happens, we will see
but she just had to tell him all that.

He listened quietly, not speaking a word
He let her finish her cry
After which he acted absurd
and said ' I gtg bye'.

She sat there, stunned on her chair
Unable to make any movements
She felt the world fall apart near her
and realised what his 'bye' had meant.

He never spoke to her then, never came online
She waited each hour everyday
Nothing else was on her mind
From her heart he wouldnt go away.

People called her a crazy chit
to her madness there was no end
All she said to whoever she met
"I'm waiting for my bosom friend".

Till one day, when it all got to her
She cut her vein with a knife
And this was how the 15 year old,
Just put an end to her life.


long hai but almost true hai. sad5


Very nice poem, Sanya, and sad one. You have given it an unhappy ending.

Keep writing, and bring some more. By the way, I can't find it's
second part. Seems like you haven't posted it uptil now.

Take care,
Love, Bhaiya. o.O
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sanya310
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«Reply #19 on: March 06, 2005, 10:57:38 AM »
will do it soon thnx amit bhai! :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #20 on: March 06, 2005, 12:03:55 PM »
Yaad aapki bhulaun kaise???
Tasveer dil se mitaun kaise???

Bekarar hoon is qadar,
Zindagi tum bin bitaun kaise Huh?

Gujarte nahin bina aapke din raat,
Haal-e-dil sabko sunaun kaise Huh?

Ajeeb si kashish hai yaadon mein aksar,
Tadap dil ki bataun kaise???
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sanya310
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«Reply #21 on: March 06, 2005, 12:17:56 PM »
aww nice jhl!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #22 on: March 06, 2005, 12:24:17 PM »
Thank you very much Sanyaji ...
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