Love of a 15 year old

by sanya310 on February 09, 2005, 08:38:10 PM
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Let me tell you the story of a girl
a girl so young and innocent
and how her life turned into hell
until when she was complacent.

It all started with a lie
The day when she had started to love
And everyday she began to die
she had cheated on her turtle dove.

She had told him she was older
she was very pretty, she lied
he believed her, as they only had spoken
Never knew wat she had to hide.

She spoke to him each single day
she started loving him a lot
but day and night she thought of a way
to prevent herself from getting caught.

Ever since then, she was a cinderella
She was weepy and alone
When asked by her friends and fellas
Lied again with a fake smile shone.

She began to sulk, she grew very pale
Guilt grew in on her
Althrough the night she used to wail
and curse out to the liar inside her.

Dad was worried, mom got nervous
they asked her what was wrong
She then told them every single thing
to whom her heart did belong.

They told her that the best way
to tell him the real thing
was to confront and confess and
never to think what was coming.

If he really loved you, they said
he would understand the above
he would understand the reason you lied
All just to have his love

So she logged on to her PC
to have a long chat
whatever happens, we will see
but she just had to tell him all that.

He listened quietly, not speaking a word
He let her finish her cry
After which he acted absurd
and said ' I gtg bye'.

She sat there, stunned on her chair
Unable to make any movements
She felt the world fall apart near her
and realised what his 'bye' had meant.

He never spoke to her then, never came online
She waited each hour everyday
Nothing else was on her mind
From her heart he wouldnt go away.

People called her a crazy chit
to her madness there was no end
All she said to whoever she met
"I'm waiting for my bosom friend".

Till one day, when it all got to her
She cut her vein with a knife
And this was how the 15 year old,
Just put an end to her life.


long hai but almost true hai. sad5
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2005, 09:07:55 PM »
oh its too sad.....it make me cry..
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2005, 09:08:25 PM »
nice!!!!! but sad!!!!
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2005, 09:44:16 PM »
thanx nikki pooja!
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2005, 10:26:16 PM »
buhat achey saniya jiiiiiiiiii
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dhadkan
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2005, 07:58:15 AM »
So sad but really gud one...
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2005, 10:58:32 AM »
WoW Very touching!!!! :-(
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2005, 05:28:04 PM »
Bahut hi achhi hai par kya iska end sad hi hona tha...
Kya mein ek baat jaan sakta hu Sanyaji Huh?
Ye kahani kiski hai...
I mean kya aapke dost ki hai Huh?
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2005, 06:05:36 PM »
sad5
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2005, 06:46:14 PM »
Dil hila ke rakh diya Sanya....   sad5
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sanya310
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2005, 08:38:11 PM »
hmm yeah ye story meri ek friend ki hai but thankfully she did not kill herself. Usual Smile thanx everyone!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #11 on: February 23, 2005, 07:35:44 AM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
Let me tell you the story of a girl
a girl so young and innocent
and how her life turned into hell
until when she was complacent.

It all started with a lie
The day when she had started to love
And everyday she began to die
she had cheated on her turtle dove.

She had told him she was older
she was very pretty, she lied
he believed her, as they only had spoken
Never knew wat she had to hide.

She spoke to him each single day
she started loving him a lot
but day and night she thought of a way
to prevent herself from getting caught.

Ever since then, she was a cinderella
She was weepy and alone
When asked by her friends and fellas
Lied again with a fake smile shone.

She began to sulk, she grew very pale
Guilt grew in on her
Althrough the night she used to wail
and curse out to the liar inside her.

Dad was worried, mom got nervous
they asked her what was wrong
She then told them every single thing
to whom her heart did belong.

They told her that the best way
to tell him the real thing
was to confront and confess and
never to think what was coming.

If he really loved you, they said
he would understand the above
he would understand the reason you lied
All just to have his love

So she logged on to her PC
to have a long chat
whatever happens, we will see
but she just had to tell him all that.

He listened quietly, not speaking a word
He let her finish her cry
After which he acted absurd
and said ' I gtg bye'.

She sat there, stunned on her chair
Unable to make any movements
She felt the world fall apart near her
and realised what his 'bye' had meant.

He never spoke to her then, never came online
She waited each hour everyday
Nothing else was on her mind
From her heart he wouldnt go away.

People called her a crazy chit
to her madness there was no end
All she said to whoever she met
"I'm waiting for my bosom friend".

Till one day, when it all got to her
She cut her vein with a knife
And this was how the 15 year old,
Just put an end to her life.


long hai but almost true hai. sad5


very  sad  sanya  :sad:
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nishita
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«Reply #12 on: February 23, 2005, 07:41:35 AM »
aww tht was really touching sanya sad5
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sanya310
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«Reply #13 on: February 23, 2005, 09:26:11 AM »
sad5
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shyama
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«Reply #14 on: February 23, 2005, 02:52:40 PM »
nice and sad at the same time sanya. :?
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