maa ka akhiri safar

by anupam saxena on January 12, 2008, 06:51:23 PM
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anupam saxena
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Jin pairon mein dekhi thi jannat hardam
unhi pairon ko ro ro ke  baandha maine.

jiske anchal me chhup-2 ke roya barson
usko ro ro ke kafan aaj udhaaya maine.

Jiski ungli ko pakad ke chalna seekha
usee ko khud kandhon pe uthaaya maine.

Jiske aanchal mein main thak kar soya
Usko chita ki agni mein sulaaya maine.

usne har baar rote se chupaaya mujhko
aaj ro ro ke khudhi ko chupaaya maine.

roop hai koi nahi Maa ik ehsaas hai wo
uske jaane ke baad hi  ye jaana maine.
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2008, 12:38:34 AM »
Anupam

Excellent !

Maa ki kami ka ehsaas jo insaan ko uske jaane ke baad hota hai, uska bahut achcha varnan aap ne kiya hai !
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2008, 05:00:43 AM »
  Bohat acha hai anupam ji apki shayari
padkar toh aakhon mein aasu aayee mere  Crying
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sika
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2008, 01:43:42 PM »
ek safer hai jindagi jo kat jata hai
ek dagar hai jamana jo chhut jata hai
waqt ke marham se har jakham bhar jata hai
rahti hai yaden unki jo hamse door ho jata hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2008, 02:28:19 PM »
bahoot khoob Anupam and Nice on Sika ji!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2008, 10:38:24 AM »
Very Touching...

Superb Work Anupam.. And Good Reply Sika...

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