****Maa~Tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho****

by jannatjahan on June 11, 2009, 10:17:25 AM
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Meri ye kavita meri "MAA" ko arpit hai Jo ab Us aasmaan ke paar dusre jahan me apna sneh luta rahi hain.......

Mamta mayee wo sparsh lekar kahan chali gayeen tum
dhundhata hai pyasa mann,us chahat ke saawan ko,
jiski barish me tum mujhe harpal bheengati ho...
Maa-o-Maa tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho.....

dharti par rup Ish ka maine tum me dekha hai
apni kami puri karne ko hi saayad Ish ne tumhe bheja hai
jahan ke saare dukhon ko aanchal me apni sanjo leti ho
Maa-o-Maa tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho......

 kyun le gayee wo din mere kisson ka kahaniyon ka
tum bin kaise karungi saamna mai is jaalim duniya ka
gum ke har thapede se mujhe tum hi to bachati ho
Maa-o-Maa tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho......

tumhari lori sunke nindiya gale lagati thi
meri har jaruraton ki khabar tumhe pehle ho jati thi
kyun chali gayee dur itna ki
khwabon me bhi nahi aati ho
Maa-o-Maa tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho.....

chhod kar jaane se pehle kyun na ek baar tumne socha
Roti rahi mai Jaar jaar tumse lipat kar,kyun nahi mere aansuon ko poncha
Aa jao phir ek baar oh Maa kyun itna tadpaati ho
Maa-o-Maa tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho.......

tumhari achaiyon ka sila mai kya dungi
haan magar teri tarah maa mai bhi ek misal banungi
mana aaj ho door mujhse par dil me rahti ho
Maa-o-Maa tum mujhe bahut yaad aati ho.....
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2009, 10:23:14 AM »
Jannat, aapki ye kavita ankhain bhiga gayi.....Mujhe yaqeen hai aapki Maa ka aahirwada humesha aapke sath hai...Unki duaain har qadam pe aapki saathi hai.......!!

Bohot Khoob dear..very very touching  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2009, 10:24:14 AM »
Waah Subhan Allah Kya Khoob LIkha Hai Shweta Bohat Bohat Khoob,.

BOhat Achche, May Allah Bless Our Parents,.
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2009, 10:26:05 AM »
Shweta,

Bravo ! Bravo ! Bravo ! Applause Applause Applause

May your mom shower her love and affection upon you, always, from the heavenly skies !
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2009, 10:28:45 AM »
Pardhkar Mujhe, Munnawar Rana Ji Ke Chand Ashaar Yaad Aaye,.


Mokhtasar Hote Hue Bhi, Zindagi Bardh Jaayegi,.
Maa Ki Aankhein Choom Lijiye, Roshni Bardh Jaayegi,.

Bulaandiyon Ka Bade Se Bada Nishaan Chuaa,.
Uthaaya Godd Mein Maa Ne, Tab Aasmaan Chuaa,.


-Munawwar Rana,.
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2009, 10:29:43 AM »
shwetha, bahut kam hi kavitaye aisi hoti hai ke padhte-padhte ankhon mein aansu aa jaye.par yeh kavita padhte waqt aankhein bhar aayi..har ek lafz seedha dil mein utar raha tha..bahut bahut bahut khoob!!  
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2009, 10:36:57 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 11, 2009, 10:23:14 AM
Jannat, aapki ye kavita ankhain bhiga gayi.....Mujhe yaqeen hai aapki Maa ka aahirwada humesha aapke sath hai...Unki duaain har qadam pe aapki saathi hai.......!!

Bohot Khoob dear..very very touching  Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Celmira...is kavita ko likhte hue meri aankhe mera dil bas yun hi baras rahe the....yahan "ho" ki jagah "thi" likhna tha magar mujhme itni himmat na huee unhe apne se dur karne ki....I luv him too much....Maa ko lekar sabhi ke dil me ek hi feeling aati hai..Maayein hoti hi itni pyaari hainn....
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2009, 10:38:46 AM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on June 11, 2009, 10:36:57 AM
Thanks Celmira...is kavita ko likhte hue meri aankhe mera dil bas yun hi baras rahe the....yahan "ho" ki jagah "thi" likhna tha magar mujhme itni himmat na huee unhe apne se dur karne ki....I luv him too much....Maa ko lekar sabhi ke dil me ek hi feeling aati hai..Maayein hoti hi itni pyaari hainn....

Wo aapse door hain bhi nahin Jannat..Maayeb to Khuda ka tohfa hoti hain....Wo kabhi aapse door nahin jaa sakti..humesha duaaon ki shakal main aapke saath hain.
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 10:43:04 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on June 11, 2009, 10:28:45 AM
Pardhkar Mujhe, Munnawar Rana Ji Ke Chand Ashaar Yaad Aaye,.


Mokhtasar Hote Hue Bhi, Zindagi Bardh Jaayegi,.
Maa Ki Aankhein Choom Lijiye, Roshni Bardh Jaayegi,.

Bulaandiyon Ka Bade Se Bada Nishaan Chuaa,.
Uthaaya Godd Mein Maa Ne, Tab Aasmaan Chuaa,.


-Munawwar Rana,.

Ooh Azeem mai tumhara shukriyaa kin sabdon me ada karun dost...tumne ye jo ashar najar kiye hain...shuriyaa dost...bahut shukriyaa....maa ki sachi tasveer hai ye aashar...
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2009, 10:45:02 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 11, 2009, 10:38:46 AM
Wo aapse door hain bhi nahin Jannat..Maayeb to Khuda ka tohfa hoti hain....Wo kabhi aapse door nahin jaa sakti..humesha duaaon ki shakal main aapke saath hain.
Haan ye sach hai celmira wo mujhse door nahi...duaon aur ehsaas ke rup me wo har pal mere saath hain....
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2009, 10:47:33 AM »
very sad and touching jannat ji.bahut khoob likhi hai aapne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2009, 10:48:51 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on June 11, 2009, 10:26:05 AM
Shweta,

Bravo ! Bravo ! Bravo ! Applause Applause Applause

May your mom shower her love and affection upon you, always, from the heavenly skies !
Thanks Rajbir.....is nek dua ke liye......
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2009, 12:41:08 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut pyara likha h aapne jannat ji.....in shabdo ne to rula hi diya...kuch b keh pana bahut mushkil h..... khuda hmesha aap par apni rehmat bnaye rkhe
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«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2009, 09:07:31 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on June 11, 2009, 10:29:43 AM
shwetha, bahut kam hi kavitaye aisi hoti hai ke padhte-padhte ankhon mein aansu aa jaye.par yeh kavita padhte waqt aankhein bhar aayi..har ek lafz seedha dil mein utar raha tha..bahut bahut bahut khoob!!  
Thanks Dear Khwaish ji....ye asar sabdo ka nahi..."Maa" ka hai...saayad isliye dil ko chuta hai...Maa hoti hi hai har Dil Ajeej..
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«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2009, 09:13:58 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on June 11, 2009, 12:41:08 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut pyara likha h aapne jannat ji.....in shabdo ne to rula hi diya...kuch b keh pana bahut mushkil h..... khuda hmesha aap par apni rehmat bnaye rkhe

Thanks Dear PP...is nek aur pyaari dua ke liye...
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