Mai........ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

thycreator

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«Reply #15 on: October 17, 2007, 02:47:42 AM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Amit aur Pooja di... Ek se badhkar ek... Usual Smile

Har taraf tanhaayi ke hi kisse hai,
Har dil par tanhaayi hi chaayi hai...
Phir dard ko bhar ke daaman mein,
Yeh Raat humse milne ko aayi hai...

Abhi koron par nami ka basera hai,
Palak mein duur talak andhera hai...
Abhi ghutan se nijaad mili hi nahin,
Phir se aankh hamari dabdabai hai...

Thanks a lot ji.......kam aap bhi nahi ho..... Usual Smile

Apni zindagi ko dekh kar lage, chalte ja rahe hai hum,
Na jaane ki aise jeewan ka haasil kya pa rahe hai hum..

Na manzil ka kuch pata hai na hi apna koi thikana hai,
Jaise maut ko de ke thapkiyaan bulaa rahe hai hum..

Aye khuda de itni shakti ki iss neend se kabhi jaagen,
Jaane kab se iss mari aatma ko bas sula rahe hai hum..

Ek kiran toh savere ki dikha de tu kabhi mujhe,
Andere raste be kab se chale jaa rahe hai hum..


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Pooja

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Mai........

«Reply #16 on: October 18, 2007, 03:03:49 AM »

bahoot khoob AMIT AND SHIKHA...
AMIT APNE JO JAWAB MERI KAVITA KA DIYA HAI USSI KO SAMNE RAKHTE HUE YAH JAWAB LIKH RAHI HU..

her dard mai ussi ka saya hai
her pal usski ko apne sath paya hai

tanha kaha kab mujhko, usne hone diya
phaila her taraf ussi ke dard ka saya hai

mayoos nahi, magar ab koi armaan nahi
jab se khud ko juda usse maine paya hai

kabhi rukati nahi kalam yah meri
kabhi ek bhi shabd na maine paya hai

khud hi khud ke mayne bhool gai
na jaane kaya likhne ko
Pooja ne ajj yah kalam chalaya hai

Tanha kab usne mujhko hone diya
Her taraf phaila ussi ke dard ka saya hai…..


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thycreator

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Mai........

«Reply #17 on: October 24, 2007, 04:48:48 AM »

Bahut acche Pooja,

Ek umang thi iss dil mein, ab marne lagi hai,
Dari hui si meri jindagi aur darne lagi hai..

Na lautane ki koi raah hai, na hi koi diya,
Jane andhere ke kis daur se guzarne lagi hai..

Daba rakha tha kab se ye nassor iss dil mein,
Wo khalish phir se seene mein ubharne lagi hai..

Khatam ho jani hai to ho jaye ab bhale hi jindagi,
Maut mein hi ab toh jindagi meri sawarne lagi hai..


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Pooja

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Mai........

«Reply #18 on: October 24, 2007, 09:19:00 PM »

Full of Sad emotions …..
Good work Amit!!!

Umange tootati rahi, umeed barkraar rahi
Kabhi koi to kabhi koi zindagi ki raah rahi

Samjha liya zindagi ko to kabhi khud samjh gaye
Chalate hi rahe magar, jahan bhi koi raah rahi

Kis se kare sawal ya phir se aise hi chor de
Sawalo-jawabo ki yah dhaar, ek shool si rahi

Umange tootati rahi, umeed barkraar rahi
Kabhi koi to kabhi koi zindagi ki raah rahi


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thycreator

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Mai........

«Reply #19 on: October 24, 2007, 10:09:21 PM »

Thanks a lot pooja....kal situation kuch aisi ho gayi.... sad5

Bas chalte rehna toh jindagi ke mayane nahi,
Kuch paana kuch khona bhi yahan padta hai..

Kabhi toh dil mehfil mein jhoom leta hai yuhi,
Par kabhi yahi tanhaiyon se bhi ladta hai..

Yahi hai waqt ki ada jindagi mein aye mere dost,
Kabhi khush hai dil toh kabhi toot ke bikharta hai..


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Pooja

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Mai........

«Reply #20 on: October 24, 2007, 10:20:46 PM »

bahoot khoob Amit!!

Yah bikhari zindagi ek din sambhal jayegi
Akhir khushi kab tak humse apna daman bachayegi

Jin mehfilo mai ro dete ho tum chupke se
Ussi mehfil mai ek din teri hansi khilkhilayegi

Waqat ka chakkar na samjh paaya koi yaha
Jis per padi iski maar, ussi ko bas yah baat samjh ayegi

Yah bikhari zindagi ek din sambhal jayegi
Akhir khushi kab tak humse apna daman bachayegi


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nikki

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Mai........

«Reply #21 on: November 16, 2007, 01:54:28 AM »

brilliant Thy n Pooja sis...


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HumTum is back

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Re: Mai........

«Reply #22 on: December 13, 2007, 05:53:29 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on October 16, 2007, 02:34:30 AM

Kabhi mehfil mein toh kabhi tanhai mein,
Humne dhoondha khud ko har parchai mein..

Nahi kuch khabar kahan kho gaya hu main,
Gum hu kahin bas zindagi ki ladai mein..

Gar isko hi jeena kehte hain toh marna kya hai,
Chain pata hai dil ab toh bas ruswai mein..

Kabhi socha na tha wo manjar aa gaya dekho,
Khud ko bhoola hu main ishq ki khudai mein..

Chal ab laut chale aye mere dil-e-naadan,
Kuch bhi rakha nahi bewafa ki bewafai mein..

Kat jayegi ab ye zindagi yu hi pal do pal,
Khud ko paane ki mere iss aashnai mein..

Maut aayegi toh mar lenge hum hanste hue,
Kyu rota chehra dikhaun usse judai mein..

Koi hum nafas nahin hai, koi raaz-e-daan nahin hai
Faqat ik dil tha apna, so woh mehrmaan nahin hai !

Good one Creator - ( kaun si gori ke sath tanka lga hai;) )

zara si baat pe har rasm tod ayaa tha
dil-e-tabah ne bhi kya mizaj paya tha

maaf kar na saki meri zindagi mujh ko
woh ek lamha ki main tujh se tang ayaa tha

guzar gya hai koi lamha-e-sharar ki tarah
abhi to main use pahachan bhi na paya tha

pata nahin ki mere baad un pe kya guzari
main chand Khwaab zamane mein chod ayaa tha !!


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