Mai........

by thycreator on October 16, 2007, 02:34:30 AM
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Kabhi mehfil mein toh kabhi tanhai mein,
Humne dhoondha khud ko har parchai mein..

Nahi kuch khabar kahan kho gaya hu main,
Gum hu kahin bas zindagi ki ladai mein..

Gar isko hi jeena kehte hain toh marna kya hai,
Chain pata hai dil ab toh bas ruswai mein..

Kabhi socha na tha wo manjar aa gaya dekho,
Khud ko bhoola hu main ishq ki khudai mein..

Chal ab laut chale aye mere dil-e-naadan,
Kuch bhi rakha nahi bewafa ki bewafai mein..

Kat jayegi ab ye zindagi yu hi pal do pal,
Khud ko paane ki mere iss aashnai mein..

Maut aayegi toh mar lenge hum hanste hue,
Kyu rota chehra dikhaun usse judai mein..
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2007, 10:37:04 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"

Kabhi mehfil mein toh kabhi tanhai mein,
Humne dhoondha khud ko har parchai mein..

Nahi kuch khabar kahan kho gaya hu main,
Gum hu kahin bas zindagi ki ladai mein..

Gar isko hi jeena kehte hain toh marna kya hai,
Chain pata hai dil ab toh bas ruswai mein..

Kabhi socha na tha wo manjar aa gaya dekho,
Khud ko bhoola hu main ishq ki khudai mein..

Chal ab laut chale aye mere dil-e-naadan,
Kuch bhi rakha nahi bewafa ki bewafai mein..

Kat jayegi ab ye zindagi yu hi pal do pal,
Khud ko paane ki mere iss aashnai mein..

Maut aayegi toh mar lenge hum hanste hue,
Kyu rota chehra dikhaun usse judai mein..


BAHUT KHOOB AMIT...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2007, 12:10:15 PM »
bahut accha likha hai Thy JI!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2007, 03:17:31 PM »
Brilliant =D> =D> =D>
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ISHPREET
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2007, 05:21:54 PM »
Excellent.. =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2007, 05:28:43 PM »
Superb :D =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2007, 09:53:58 PM »
Thanks a lot to you all.......Khwaish, Tosha, Talat, Ishpreet and Raj bhai...............lekin aap mein se kissi ne kuch nahi likha.............sad5
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«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2007, 10:08:17 PM »
Nice one..
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2007, 10:27:28 PM »
As everyone said, its really nice. Every line is meaningful and you have just compiled them beautifully.
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2007, 10:33:58 PM »
Thanks a lot Shona and Ricky.........Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2007, 11:15:51 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Amit... bahoot khoob!!! Ek koshish meri bhi..

Apni parchai se bhi ab yah tanhaai nahi jaati
Kyun is dil se koi baat sunai nahi jaati

Zindagi mai dekh liya hai wo mukam
Jahan khushi aor gum ki pehchan karai nahi jaati

Bhoole se bhi jo lub hans de pal do pal ko
Phir ankhon se ashaqo ki barsaat hatai nahi jaati

Kaya kahe kaise skoon de iss toote hue dil ko
Khud ko ab yah baat samjhai nahi jaati

Mout se hi milega sakoon ab to Pooja ko
Mout tak bhi shayad meri sunwaai nahi jaati....
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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2007, 11:24:35 PM »
wah wah wah..............bahut acche pooja....good one.........

Zindagi ki ye kitaab hum padhen kaise,
Har or se ye toh ulti hi nazar aati hai..

Jitna bhi chah le par dil muskura nahi pata,
Mehfil mein toh tanhai bhi badhti jati hai..

Nahi gila phir bhi koi, shikwa bhi kyu karen,
Jisse bhi toot ke chaha wo hath nahi aati hai..

Shayad yahi jeewan ka saccha makam hai,
Ki makam par kissi zindagi teher na pati hai..

Gar ho haasil har manzil toh jeene ki lalak kahan,
Issi ek soch se zindagi ye chalti jaati hai..
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2007, 11:53:04 PM »
Wah kaya baat hai, 2nd and 3rd pehre dil ko chu gaye.. bahoot acha likha hai..

Zindagi ki is kitab ki koi pehchan nahi
Kaya ho jaaye agle pal, iska koi bhan nahi

Kuch bhi kar lo, karmo se to bacha jayega nahi
Sahi kaha hai ki sawarg bhi yahi aor narak bhi yahi

Sochte rahte hai kyun Kaise yah kaya ho gaya
Magar atta koi sahi jawab wapis nahi

Bhool bhulaiyo se yah zindagi jeete hi jaate hai
Iske ilawa insaan ke pass koi chara bhi nahi……
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2007, 01:45:55 AM »
Good one ji............

Ek dard ki leher si, iss dil mein utne aayi hai,
Kabhi bhi sath na chode, aisi meri tanhai hai..

Bas mayoosi ke mele, ek khushi mere pas nahi,
Jis taraf bhi jaun, hath aayi toh bas ruswai hai..

Dil ka dard jubaan par nahi laya jaye ab toh,
Koi toh aawaz de ye ek sune dil ki duhai hai..

Mar jane ka khuaf bhi ab toh dil mein raha nahi,
Janta hu ki iss jeewan se maut mein bhalai hai..

Magar chodu bhi hath kaise bhala zindagi ka main,
Ye toh wafa-e-sanam si mere saath chalti aayi hai..
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2007, 02:29:06 AM »
Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Amit aur Pooja di... Ek se badhkar ek... Usual Smile


Har taraf tanhaayi ke hi kisse hai,
Har dil par tanhaayi hi chaayi hai...
Phir dard ko bhar ke daaman mein,
Yeh Raat humse milne ko aayi hai...

Abhi koron par nami ka basera hai,
Palak mein duur talak andhera hai...
Abhi ghutan se nijaad mili hi nahin,
Phir se aankh hamari dabdabai hai...
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