Main jina chahti hu......

by brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 10:07:06 PM
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Kuch beete waqt ki yad se ankhe nam hai,
iss baraste sawan mein khud ko bhigona chahti hu,

bahut hi bechain hai aaj ye dil merra,
kisi ki agosh mein madhosh hona chahti hu,

koi pyar se hath fere merre chehre pe,
un hatho ko narmi mein apne ashko ko sanjona chahti hu,

merre yaar ko na le jaye koi bandhan mujhse door,
aaj ki raat uske pyar mein khona chahti hu,

aaj tak merra har rishta adhura raha hai,
kisi k hasil se apne har gum ko dhona chahti hu,

intezaar hai terra aaj bhi merre humsafar,
terre sath main apne adhure khuab pirona chahti hu......



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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2010, 10:26:43 PM »
Beintehaan Khubsoorat Likhe Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain Geet Ji aapne.. Apne Dard, Apne Jazzbaat Aur Apne Ehsaason Ko Lafzon me Behad Khubsoorati ke Sath Sajaaya Hai aapne.. Ek Umda Peshkash..!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Ashq Tapak Padhte Hain, Jab Tera Naam Leta Hoon,
Bechain Ho Uth-ta Hoon, Dil Apna Thaam Leta Hoon....

Jin Raahon Par Tumne Wafaaon Ko Sada Di Thi Ek Din,
Un Raahon Ko Aaj Bhi Jhuk Ke Salaam Kar Leta Hoon....

Intzaar Aaj Bhi Hai Nigaahon Ko Tere Wapas Aane Ka,
Isi Ummed Me Tasveer Se Teri, Aankhen Chaar Kar Leta Hoon....!!!





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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2010, 11:07:39 PM »
thnx alot mann ji...apke alfaz bhi kabil-e-tarif hai...


Lakh koshish karti hu khud ko hasane ki,
per har baar ansuo ki barsat hogi malum naa tha,

har din ek nayi asha jagti hai merre zehen mein,
per har bar mayusi se mulaqat hogi malum naa tha,

lagta hai ab kuch nahi bacha jine ko,
lekin dil mein ummeed ki ek qaynat hogi malum naa tha..

Koi jazbaat mehsus nhi hota ab tou,
kisi k chale jane se beimaani si har baat hogi malum naa tha......
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2010, 12:56:51 AM »
Wah Geet ji,Mann ji,Shihab ji,bahut hi khoobsurti se likha aap sabne.dil ko chu gayi .aap sabke dard ko mahesoos kiya.midblowing lines.aise hi likhte rahena.hats off 
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2010, 01:07:24 AM »
thnx aur bahut khoob shihab ji...


Khushiyo ka saaya hawa k jhonke jaisa hai,
aata tou hai per vo bhi tadpake,
gamo se milta hai zindgi bhar ka sath,
jo rehta hai humsafar k jaise hamesha hamein apnake......
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2010, 01:09:09 AM »
Wah Geet ji,Mann ji,Shihab ji,bahut hi khoobsurti se likha aap sabne.dil ko chu gayi .aap sabke dard ko mahesoos kiya.midblowing lines.aise hi likhte rahena.hats off 
thnx alot madhu ji...
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2010, 01:24:23 AM »
thik hai ji..khair abhi k liye ijazat chahungi..chalti hu..laut kar reply karungi..take cre...
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2010, 03:44:08 AM »
Very nice!! Really enjoyed
reading it.Welldone !!
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2010, 10:40:08 AM »
Waah Kya kehne Geet .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob aur Dil ke Ehsaaso aur dard ko bakubi byaan kiya hai... Bahoot khoob!

@ Mann - Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Applause Applause Applause

@ Shihab:- Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2010, 02:16:42 PM »
Wah Geet-di wah apni khawahishon ko
bade sunder alfazo mai dhaalaa hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Fagun k jhoole bulaayenge
Mausam ki bahaar bulaayegi
Rango ki phuhaar bulaayegi
Tere Geet ous ko bulayenge

Khatm hoga intezaar sakhee
Pure honge ab adhure sapne
Teri-kashish teri-tapish se
KheeNcha chalaa aayega wo


thnx alot mann ji...apke alfaz bhi kabil-e-tarif hai...


Lakh koshish karti hu khud ko hasane ki,
per har baar ansuo ki barsat hogi malum naa tha,

har din ek nayi asha jagti hai merre zehen mein,
per har bar mayusi se mulaqat hogi malum naa tha,

lagta hai ab kuch nahi bacha jine ko,
lekin dil mein ummeed ki ek qaynat hogi malum naa tha..

Koi jazbaat mehsus nhi hota ab tou,
kisi k chale jane se beimaani si har baat hogi malum naa tha......

Kuch beete waqt ki yad se ankhe nam hai,
iss baraste sawan mein khud ko bhigona chahti hu,

bahut hi bechain hai aaj ye dil merra,
kisi ki agosh mein madhosh hona chahti hu,

koi pyar se hath fere merre chehre pe,
un hatho ko narmi mein apne ashko ko sanjona chahti hu,

merre yaar ko na le jaye koi bandhan mujhse door,
aaj ki raat uske pyar mein khona chahti hu,

aaj tak merra har rishta adhura raha hai,
kisi k hasil se apne har gum ko dhona chahti hu,

intezaar hai terra aaj bhi merre humsafar,
terre sath main apne adhure khuab pirona chahti hu......




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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2010, 04:44:21 PM »
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne Geet Ji
And Nice Response Mann Ji, Shihab Ji And Koyal JI
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2010, 07:54:53 PM »
well done brokenbyluv ji bahut khub mera khayal bhi kuch aisa hai bas kar rahi hu ki jagah kar raha hu
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2010, 10:34:43 PM »



Zindagi Se Aage Tu Bhaag Nahi Paayega
    Naseeb Mein Hoga Woh Jarur Mil Jaayega.
 
      Duniya Men Ik Dard Bhi Sach Hai Shihab.
           Aakhir Tu Usse Kahaan Tak Thukraayega.!

                     
                       ~Shihab~


Dard ko thokar maar kar bhala kaun ji paya hai,
sachai se zindgi jiyo tou har taraf savera hai,
jo darta hai sach kehne se iss zamane mein..
vo khuda ki nazar mein ek katil ya lutera hai......
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2010, 10:58:16 PM »
mainkhalib ji,sophiji,kaash ji,rishi ji,amar ji..aap sab ka bahut bahut shukrya...
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«Reply #14 on: February 13, 2010, 11:01:41 PM »
Wah Geet-di wah apni khawahishon ko
bade sunder alfazo mai dhaalaa hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Fagun k jhoole bulaayenge
Mausam ki bahaar bulaayegi
Rango ki phuhaar bulaayegi
Tere Geet ous ko bulayenge

Khatm hoga intezaar sakhee
Pure honge ab adhure sapne
Teri-kashish teri-tapish se
KheeNcha chalaa aayega wo



thnx koyal for such sweet lines...

Kaash merri dhadkan vo sun paye,
merre rukh pe pade uski zulfo k saye,
mita de har doori ko vo jald hi..
kahiin mhbt ki pyas merri jaan hi na le jaye......
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