Main jina chahti hu......

by brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 04:37:06 PM
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«Reply #120 on: April 01, 2010, 07:15:53 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 30, 2010, 07:14:58 PM
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Ji Pasand Farmane K Liye.
Aur Kya Kehne Kam Lafzon Men Bahut Bada Sawal Chhod Diya
Bahut Hi Pyaar Bhara Andaaz Hai Ji...Good Job...



   Khushiyon Se Rang Dunga Tere Dil Ka Har Baab
       Kuch Aise Dunga Men Teri Bechainiyon Ka Hisab.

               Dekhgi Duniya Tumhe Han Mere Zere-o-Zabar Men
                   Kuch  Is Qadar Dunga Aey Dilbar Main Tujhe Khitab.

                            Aa,Ke Rakh Kar Mere Dil Pe Haath Mehsus Karle
                                  Lafzon Mein Kya Dun Main Teri Baat Ka Jawaab.



bahut bahut shukriya ji..apka jawab lajawab hai ji...


Kabhi naa ruthe ghar baar apna,
khushiyo se bhara rahe ye sansar apna,
chahe jo bhi ho anjaam apni kahani kaa..
wada raha kabhi na hoga kam ye pyar apna......
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«Reply #121 on: April 01, 2010, 07:20:40 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on March 30, 2010, 10:39:46 PM
Geet ji,

Bahut hi sundar shabdon me aapne apne dard ko bayaan kiya hai. Jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai. Bahut khoobsurat kavita hai aapki ye.

ab to jaane q har chehre me tum nazar aate ho,
saamne ho nahi par khayalo me aa jaate ho,
chahta hoon lakh bhulaana tumhaari yaadon ko,
par har baar tum roop badalke saamne aa jaate ho...!!!



bahut bahut shurkiya kapil ji...aur bahut hi umda likha hai apne...ek baar phir bahut bahut shukriya merri kavita ko waqt dene k liye...
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«Reply #122 on: April 01, 2010, 07:28:11 PM »
Aapka bhi bahut bahut shukriyaa Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 01, 2010, 07:20:40 PM
bahut bahut shurkiya kapil ji...aur bahut hi umda likha hai apne...ek baar phir bahut bahut shukriya merri kavita ko waqt dene k liye...
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«Reply #123 on: April 01, 2010, 07:53:13 PM »
Welcome Banner ji...
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«Reply #124 on: April 01, 2010, 08:13:13 PM »
Very touching and marvelous lines Geet ji,Shihab ji,Kapil ji.aise hi likhte rahiyega.bahut khoob.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #125 on: April 01, 2010, 08:25:21 PM »
ji bahut sahi kaha apne...


Kisi bandhan se nhi rukti sachi ibadat,
zamane ki baate chahto ka kafan ho jati hai,
mhbt kabhi khtm nhi hoti merre dost..
bus dil k kisi kone mein dafan ho jati hai......
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«Reply #126 on: April 01, 2010, 08:29:30 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriyaa Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 01, 2010, 08:13:13 PM
Very touching and marvelous lines Geet ji,Shihab ji,Kapil ji.aise hi likhte rahiyega.bahut khoob.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #127 on: April 01, 2010, 08:55:36 PM »
ji shukriya ji..maaf kijiyega thoda sa galat likh diya aap sahi hai ki kuch waqt baad mhbt kam ho hi jati hai..chaliye shihab ji abhi ijazat chahungi..laut kar reply karti hu..bahut bahut shukriya sath dene k liye..khush rahiye muskurate rahiye...gud nite ji...
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«Reply #128 on: April 02, 2010, 07:42:57 PM »
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«Reply #129 on: April 03, 2010, 07:04:06 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on April 01, 2010, 08:50:52 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukariya Geet Ji Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Khub Likha Hai
Par Maine Kab Kaha Ki Muhabbat Khatam Ho Jati Hai Bas Maine To Yeh Kaha Ki Ek Waqt ke Baad Pyaar Kam Ho Jata Hai...Khair


    Chalti Rehti Hai Humesha Apni Dhoon Men
        Iske Aage Koi Bhi Badi Rasham Nahi Hoti.

             Basti Hai Yeh Har Roop Rang Men Aey Dost
                 Sach Hai Muhabbat Kabhi Khatam Nahi Hoti.



Jo silsile chaht se shuru hote hai,
vo zarur poore hote hai chahe jitne gum ho,
ansu ki har bund k sath muskuryenge hum bhi..
bhale unki judai se ankhe hamari kitni hi num ho......
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«Reply #130 on: April 13, 2010, 07:08:49 PM »
bahut khoob aur sachi baat kahi apne shihab ji apne alfazo mein...


Tu door hai tou ye gum merra habib hai,
tu paas hai tou har raat khushnaseeb hai,
beheral tou ye zindgi terre saaye mein khushgawar hai..
kaun jane kal kaisa merra muqaddar h kaisa merra naseeb hai......
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«Reply #131 on: April 14, 2010, 11:32:50 AM »
shukriya ji...

Ansuo k baad kuch khuab hi tou hai,
jo aksar hamari ankho mein reh jate hai,
kuch yade bankar palko mein bas jate hai..
tou kuch ansu ban hamari ankho se beh jate hai......
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«Reply #132 on: April 18, 2010, 12:14:42 PM »
Marna asan nhi itna merre dost,
ye sirrf bahana hai dil ko behelane ka,
jina hai aur jite raho iss dard mein bhi..
yahi falsafa hai yado se ubhar aane ka......
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«Reply #133 on: May 06, 2010, 12:38:20 PM »
Kamaal Dhamaal, Bohat Hi Khoob
Bohat Hi Achhey Se Jawaab Dete Hain
Aap Log Ik Dusre Ko...Dil Bagh Bagh
Ho Jata Hai Aap Dono Ko Parhke
Bahut Hi Khoob...Yun Hi Likhte Rahiye[/b]
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«Reply #134 on: May 07, 2010, 07:39:36 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya shabbir ji...
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