Marte chale gaye..........mann

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Jeene ki tamanna main marte chale gaye.
Milne ka tha junoon bichhadte chale gaye.

Failaye the par hamne aasaman dekhkar,
Udna  to raha dur sikudte  chale gaye.

Chaha tha bahut jod den rishton ki har ek dor,
Apna na hua koi  bikharte  chale gaye.

Ham unko bhulne ki jo karne lage koshish,
Yadon ke qike aur sanwarte chale gaye.

Har dard tha isthayi dil se nahin gaya,
Khushiyon ke kai daur guzarte chale gaye.

Jitna kiya bharosa hamne kisi pe ”mann”
Dil ke har ek kone chatakhte chale gaye.


Mann
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2012, 04:01:23 AM »
bahut khoob mann ji dheron daad aur ek RAU
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2012, 04:03:57 AM »
great sir
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2012, 01:40:30 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Mann ji.

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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2012, 01:53:12 PM »
BAhut Khub Mann Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2012, 03:02:44 PM »
Bahut khoob mann jee
3rd sher khoob bhaaya.
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2012, 11:42:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sainiji
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2012, 10:43:59 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mann ji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2012, 11:47:17 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya himanshuji
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2012, 11:49:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2012, 11:51:10 AM »
BAhut Khub Likha Hai MAnn Ji Mubarak ho Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2012, 11:52:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sanjeevji..
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2012, 12:30:14 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on July 18, 2012, 03:59:30 AM
Jeene ki tamanna main marte chale gaye.
Milne ka tha junoon bichhadte chale gaye.

Failaye the par hamne aasaman dekhkar,
Udna  to raha dur sikudte  chale gaye.

Chaha tha bahut jod den rishton ki har ek dor,
Apna na hua koi  bikharte  chale gaye.

Ham unko bhulne ki jo karne lage koshish,
Yadon ke qike aur sanwarte chale gaye.

Har dard tha isthayi dil se nahin gaya,
Khushiyon ke kai daur guzarte chale gaye.

Jitna kiya bharosa hamne kisi pe ”mann”
Dil ke har ek kone chatakhte chale gaye.


Mann

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut bahut khub mann ji dheron daad kabool nkariye.
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2012, 01:40:31 PM »
wah wah excellant mann jee  Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2012, 01:55:16 PM »
Bahut khub bht hi umda aur bemisal peshkash mann ji dhero daad aur mubarakbad
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