**Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Kuch dinn pehle ek kalam parra 'chala hoon'...im using this two words in this poem of mine...

Kuch alfazon main apna dard bayan karne chala hoon,
Guzre hue kal ko bhool kar ane wala kal bayan karne chala hoon…

Uska mujhe thukra dena ek gehra zakhm chorr gaya dil pe,
Aj uss zakhm ka marham dhundne chala hoon…

Kal jahan maine ashiyane banaye the uss hamsafar ke saath,
Aj wahin uski yaadon ko dafnane chala hoon…

Woh toh na de saka mujhe pyaar jiski khwahish rakta tha dil,
Aj ghairon main mohobat mangne chala hoon…

Ashk kahin koi dekh na le meri inn ankhon main,
Nadi ke kinare baith aj inhe yahin bahane chala hoon…

‘Rahim’ kehta hai mat chahna kisi ko toot kar doston,
Bikhar kar raahon main mohobat ki aj yehi sabak sabko dene chala hoon…

~Rahim~


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 10:49:24 PM »

bahut khoob likha hai Rahim bhai... bahut pyaari kavita hai... simply superb... kuch lines maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai...

kal tak tere mohabbat me bas ashk bahaye maine,
aaj un ashko ko mitaane chala hoon,

kal tak meri zindagi me naam bas tera tha,
aaj main usi naam ko mitaane chala hoon,

lagta tha ki dard me hi qaid hai zindagi meri,
aaj main usi dard ko mitaane chala hoon,

tere jaane k baad yun tanha tha main jeewan me,
aaj unhi tanhayion ko mitaane chala hoon,

haan aaj ek naye safar pe main chala hoon,
aaj main har ghum ko mitaane chala hoon....


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 12:25:06 AM »

Wah wah Rahim bhai n Kapil ji,sirf dard hi dard hai aap dono ke poem mein.bahut khoob.marvelous creation.keep it up.really touched. Hats off to you!


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 12:32:35 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 14, 2010, 12:25:06 AM

Wah wah Rahim bhai n Kapil ji,sirf dard hi dard hai aap dono ke poem mein.bahut khoob.marvelous creation.keep it up.really touched. Hats off to you!


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2010, 06:39:09 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 13, 2010, 09:24:46 PM

Kuch dinn pehle ek kalam parra 'chala hoon'...im using this two words in this poem of mine...

~Rahim~

Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim..Dard Ke Saath-Saath,

Beete Hue Waqt Ko Bhoolkar Aage Chalne Ka Haulsa BhI deti hai Yeh Peshkash Aapki..

Bahut Ache..


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2010, 06:51:05 AM »

Wah wah Abdul Rahim Bhai bahot khoob. Darde-dil bahot khoobsurti se bayaan kiya hai. Marhaba.


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2010, 06:59:06 AM »

alfaj nahi he is ke liye rahim ji.....


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2010, 07:04:07 AM »

wah wah bahut khoob Rahim ji.
dil ki gehrai se aai hai ye ghazal .
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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2010, 10:55:09 AM »

Shukriya Kapil dost, Madhu di, Suresh jee, Khwahish jee, Riyaz jee aur Thinkhattk jee..


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2010, 10:56:37 AM »

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne Kapil dost!
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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2010, 11:25:35 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 13, 2010, 09:24:46 PM

Kuch dinn pehle ek kalam parra 'chala hoon'...im using this two words in this poem of mine...

~Rahim~

Bohot Khoob Rahim...bohot achcha likha hai aapne....


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2010, 01:16:31 PM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 14, 2010, 10:56:37 AM

Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne Kapil dost!
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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2010, 06:24:01 PM »

Shukriya Talat di!


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2010, 05:26:51 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 13, 2010, 09:24:46 PM

Kuch dinn pehle ek kalam parra 'chala hoon'...im using this two words in this poem of mine...

~Rahim~

Bahut khoob Rahim Ji


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Re: **Mat chaho kisi ko toot kar** by Rahim

«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2010, 12:47:12 PM »

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Rajesh jee!


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