MATKEE GUNAHOO KEE..........masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on June 20, 2012, 01:04:07 PM
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Jo beet gai hai wo gujar kyo nahee jaatee.
Ulfat mere sar se utar kyo nahee jaatee.
.
Kya baat sirf kahne sunne ke liye hai.
Mhaantaa Bharat(India) kee najar kyo nahee aatee.
.
ManmaaniyaN kab tak kartee rahegee Sarkar(Government).
Matkee gunahoo kee aakhir bhar kyo nahee jaatee.
.
Kya kaan rakh ke kaheeN bhool aayeN ham.
Naseehat Baap kee Asar kyo nahee laatee.
.
BarbadiyooN ka daur agar beet chukaa hai.
To dabee hui ek sans ubhar kyo nahee aatee.
.
Musalmanoo ab tumhe kya hoo gaya hai.
Jahannam kee baat bhee Dar kyo nahee laatee.
.
MaaN kee duwa'ao ne asar khoo diya hai kya.
Uljhee hui meree jeest sanvar kyo nahee jaatee.                          
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 01:40:05 PM »
bahut khoob achhe jazbaat pesh kiye hain
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2012, 01:51:35 PM »
Bahut hi khoob Masoom bhai, bahut achha laga ye kalam mujhe. Dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2012, 02:06:26 PM »
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on June 20, 2012, 01:04:07 PM
Jo beet gai hai wo gujar kyo nahee jaatee.
Ulfat mere sar se utar kyo nahee jaatee.
.
Kya baat sirf kahne sunne ke liye hai.
Mhaantaa Bharat(India) kee najar kyo nahee aatee.
.
ManmaaniyaN kab tak kartee rahegee Sarkar(Government).
Matkee gunahoo kee aakhir bhar kyo nahee jaatee.
.
Kya kaan rakh ke kaheeN bhool aayeN ham.
Naseehat Baap kee Asar kyo nahee laatee.
.
BarbadiyooN ka daur agar beet chukaa hai.
To dabee hui ek sans ubhar kyo nahee aatee.
.
Musalmanoo ab tumhe kya hoo gaya hai.
Jahannam kee baat bhee Dar kyo nahee laatee.
.
MaaN kee duwa'ao ne asar khoo diya hai kya.
Uljhee hui meree jeest sanvar kyo nahee jaatee.                           

bahut accha likha hai aapne masoom jee
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2012, 04:02:47 PM »
bahut badhiya bahut hi lajwab peshkash...... aapke pass achhi soch ke sath sath achhe shabd  bhi hai masoom ji .......bahut hi achhi soch se bahut khubsurat kalaam likha aapne.....dhero daad aur dhero mubarakbad.......with one rau
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2012, 04:28:25 PM »
lajwaab
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bohot khoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2012, 06:22:17 PM »
Masoom Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab kia baat hai bade khoob khayaal kahe haiN janab...
par is kyuN ka jawaab hi nahi toH hum bhi kia jawaab deN..

bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... sabhi asahaar khoob rahe..
humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

HaaN jab aapne kafiyaa baNd liya hai, guzar nazar , dar, ghar... toH radiff meiN raddo badal kyuN Huh?
Aati jaati laati... nahi sirf aati hi aayeNga janab.. uske hi hisaab
se aapko sher kahna padeNga... ummid hai hum jo kah raheN hai aapko
samjh aaya hoN...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2012, 02:44:04 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 20, 2012, 06:22:17 PM
Masoom Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab kia baat hai bade khoob khayaal kahe haiN janab...
par is kyuN ka jawaab hi nahi toH hum bhi kia jawaab deN..

bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... sabhi asahaar khoob rahe..
humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

HaaN jab aapne kafiyaa baNd liya hai, guzar nazar , dar, ghar... toH radiff meiN raddo badal kyuN Huh?
Aati jaati laati... nahi sirf aati hi aayeNga janab.. uske hi hisaab
se aapko sher kahna padeNga... ummid hai hum jo kah raheN hai aapko
samjh aaya hoN...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


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bhai jaan baat dar asal ye hai kee mujhe maloom nahee kee gazal kiya hotee hai aour kaise likhee jaati hai.
Aage se khayal rakhunga.
Allah hafeez
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2012, 11:51:00 AM »
Congratulation,

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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2012, 01:55:29 AM »
Masoom ji,
Bahut Sundar! Kabile taarif prastuti. Bahut sahi farmayya hai aapne.
Daad kubul kijiye
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